When Oni told me you wrote a story, I had to come and check it out. Great job, Ms Nene! I really like the twist at the end because, honestly, you had me fooled! I was all set to shed tears for this poor boy and his lost wife! lol
Love,
Val
Reviewer: Valhalla Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/11/10 12:58 am
Well look @ you Ms.NeNe....who knew? Love the premise of the short story....you did good :D
Author's Response: I know right!! It was just a little story to make you smile..Thank you for reading sweetie!!
Date: 07/07/10 05:28 pm
LOL! Well well well...
Ms. Neneburge can put the pen to paper and it not be too bad either. While I had no idea u were talking about a dog (LOL), u had me. I loved it!
Thank u for sharing ur work. Now u can share MORE of it! You totally exposed urself lady so get ready!
Author's Response: Thankie Thankie Thankie..lol. I glad you enjoyed my little diddy...now you and NaNa can't give me a hard time anymore...I is a chamber author now..rotfl!! I hope you got a smile!! Reviewer: SebineDareau Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 03:09 pm
Mama Ne! You're a Chamber Author now! I love how our roles are reversed right now...it's so new and exciting! This was very nice! I wasn't expecting the end, that's for sure. When I read the author's note, I was like "hmmm 3 years ago...hmmm" and then I saw the name Banji and thought, "Madden?? From Good Charlotte?" Then I saw Lacey's name and was like "Oooh! A SYTYCD fanfic! Love it!" This was my all-time fave season with Travis, Allison, Donny (my fave girl ever) and Demitri. You did make me smile for sure :) Thank you for this!
Now I can stop bugging you about posting a story, you've fulfilled my wish. Thank you, thank you!
Author's Response: You are crazy Na Na...now that I have posted my little story..I can go back to bugging you guys on the regular and you and Sebine cannot give me a hard time anymore..lol lol lol !! I glad it made you smile..you know I am an undercover comedian..it is my true calling!!! Rotfl.. Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/07/10 02:36 pm
That was good. I thought that Patty was a girl that he had married. But I should have realized that you were refering to a pet when you said that they could toss her the ball. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for reading sweetie...I didn't want you to realize I was talking about his pet so I am glad you didn't get it right away!! :)
[Report This]Date: 07/07/10 01:57 pm
Nene...I nearly bust a gut when I finally realized who or more accurately what Benji's 'beautiful girl' was...that was very clever...you've been holding out on us...and you're always saying you're not a writer...you most certainly are...the proof is in the pudding...I really enjoyed this little nugget...please don't stop writing...you're quite talented in your own right...
Author's Response:
I glad you got a giggle...it was just fun...and I am a unsung comedian at heart..lol...Thanks for reading sweetie!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 07:51 am
Nice story. I was definitely feeling your vibe, because I did start to think of the song Brandy halfway through this story before I actually knew for sure she was a dog.
Author's Response: Lol Brandy!! Yeah actually that does sound good..maybe I should make a playlist..lol! Thanks for reading sweetie!!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/10 06:13 am
I loved the twist in the story. Awesome!!! Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Baha...I was sure you all would guess my little twist right away....hope it made you smile a little!!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/10 05:55 am
Love it! Don't just stop there, post more!! Thank you for posting.
Author's Response: Well thank you for reading sweetie....it was a lot of fun to write and I do love the funny!! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 07/07/10 05:13 am
Good job Nene! Way to dip your toes in the water. Do it again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading sweetie...it was fun and just something to make you all smile!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/10 04:59 am