well dam that a very happy birthday to jack lol. wow she put in on that man lol i like the little dabbler and you should think about doing one for jill birthday. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hoped you had a very good Thanksgiving!
You know, Jill's birthday had even not crossed my mind. You got me thinking. . . .
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Chel
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/09/10 10:11 pm
Very interesting glad for the visuals. lol Im convince for now less is more
Author's Response:
Yeah. I didn't realize how fun challanges are. I enjoyed seeing if I would keep it under 1000 words. It was so hard lol.
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Chel
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/10 02:18 am
What a pleasurable story . Happy Birthday jack , indeed.
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Chel
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 04:55 pm
Totally delicious. You captured all that neede to be conveyed. I'm so enjoying this challenge. Sometimes less is much much more. Thanks.
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Chel
Reviewer: winding4me Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 02:23 pm
Great writing girl!
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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 05:27 am
That was cute. Thanks
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Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 12:57 am
That was freaking hot!! I loved it.
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Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 12:26 am
That was the hotness!!!
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Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 11:33 pm
Girl, that was smoking hot. There was steam coming off my computer. Excellent job with the details!
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Chel
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 11:17 pm
Uh...well now...Wowza.
Well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Wow, I feel like poppin' my collar because ONIMOSITY gave me a review.
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Chel
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 08:23 pm
What a sweet birthday that was! I know Jack enjoyed that immensely. It is nice to see them as a regular couple.
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Chel
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 08:06 pm
What a sweet birthday that was! I know Jack enjoyed that immensely. It is nice to see them as a regular couple.
Author's Response:
Hey girl!
I'm was going to make this a regular chapter but I kept getting stumped so I decided to go for the challenge instead.
I'm trying to do grown and sexy like you, but I can't touch you in that department lol!
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Chel
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 08:04 pm
Damn that was short but HOT!!!!!!!!!
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Chel
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/07/10 07:57 pm