Couildn't care less. It should be couldn't care less. A very common mistake.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, Tom!
Reviewer: Tom Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/01/14 09:17 pm
No so an should have to sell herself short for her spouse or another man. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response:
I agree, Nightseer! Thanks for the comment.
Suprina
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/02/13 04:31 pm
It was quite an interesting read with the plot and characters realistic. However, it would have been more absorbing if the story is longer so the main characters can be fleshed out more.
Anyway keep writing & thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Trerry lee, many people (even me) agree that the story would have been more absorbing if it was longer. However, since it was specifically written for a 1000 words or less Chamber Challenge, I had to kept it short and sweet.
Thanks for commenting!
Suprina
Reviewer: trerry lee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/10/11 06:20 pm
The story was great but too short. I'm curious will there be more to this story.
Author's Response:
Maybe one day, Marilyn. Still undecided about it. Thanks for the comment!
Suprina
Reviewer: Marilyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 04:19 pm
I Loved This Story, I Wish It Was A Longer One With More Chapters And Details On Their Relationship, The Affair, Their Life Together.
Author's Response:
One day I may expand this story and give it all the backstory you speak of. Maybe when more time has passed and more healing has occurred (some of this was taken from personal experiences).
In the meantime, I'm glad that you enjoyed this shortie. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Suprina
Reviewer: BLovesToRead Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/08/11 05:29 pm
Its crisp and well written.. ur style drives home the point !!! Would like to read more of your stories. Please be in touch (vibrant.vikram@gmail.com).
Regards
Vikram
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting, Vikram. You can read more of my stories on this very site. Enjoy!
Reviewer: Vikram Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/04/11 08:06 am
I liked that short, I am glad that got her self back.
Author's Response: Me too. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 17/02/11 08:41 pm
Powerful story....
Author's Response: Thanks, Joshua. :)
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 02:59 pm
brilliant short! glad Connie realized the power she had and left Brice in the dust - thank you!
Author's Response: You're most welcome. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 03:55 pm
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
Loved it.
I was worried about her original plan; but she made the right choice in the end. And it sent her message home just as strongly.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for taking the time to let me know. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/01/11 05:19 pm
not bad :-D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/01/11 01:24 pm
HA! Loved it - short and to the point. I guess Brice better ca-all Tyrooooone. LOL
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Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
Yep!
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 08:46 pm
Yeah... I like. She wants her back. She did the right thing.
Author's Response: I agree that she did the right thing. I likes your comment! :) Thx!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/10 04:23 pm
That was an awesome short story!!
Author's Response:
I'm thrilled you liked it so much, Pmgayles!
Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/10/10 03:54 am
Very good. I'd like to have seen how she continue her new found life.
Author's Response:
Give me another year and I'll let you know how I...oops...SHE turns out. lol
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Jada Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/10 08:20 pm
I really liked your writing style and enjoyed the story.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for liking my writing style and for leaving a comment, Nadyne. :) Reviewer: Nadyne Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/08/10 12:21 am
SUPRINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, I just came looking for some of your writings because I haven't read anything in a while and you gave it up! That is the business right there! Somebody slap this girl because you are putting it down! So, when is the book coming? You can not tease us like this!
I love how you allowed her to go through the whole process and then slammed her with that feeling that you only know if you've desired or tried to get revenge. That feeling that isn't quite what you thought it was going to be and to realize that instead of changing the person, it changes you!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL!!!! Still as wild as ever I see, Latrice. tee-hee. I likes.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so much. As usual, you were quick to pull out all the main lessons. Kudos to you for staying so sharp. There is no 'A Wife Scorned' book in sight for now. I may expand the story later, but I currently have other things on my plate to finish. That's why I made this one a shortie.
Thanks for looking me up and for taking the time to leave a comment here.
Reviewer: Latrice Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/07/10 09:43 pm
It made a great point...it made a great point.
Author's Response: Thanks for getting that point, Cholyn. Special thanks for leaving a comment. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/07/10 08:23 am
LOL that was good... I hoped that Brice remembered to pick up his FACE when he left.
Author's Response:
Lady Liberty, if Brice didn't remember to pick up his face before he left, that was too bad for him. Connie definitely didn't care. That sista was finally free of him in every way that counted! tee-hee.
Thanks for leaving a comment!
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/07/10 02:25 pm
Loved Connie's style. Brice was definitely a DAWG!!! He didn't deserve her.
Author's Response:
Brice definitely didn't deserve Connie. I say good riddance to bad rubbish! lol
Thanks for leaving a comment!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/10 08:19 am
i know another way she could got back at the bastard it invloed the woods a bag and a lot of cleaning up products lol. glad she goning to stay strong and keep her head up high despited what that s.o.b did to her. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!! Girl, you still off-the-chain with your comments. lol. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 08/07/10 09:20 pm
That was great - no rust in sight :)
Author's Response: Jrboss02, that left a wide grin on my face. :D Thanks for commenting!
Date: 08/07/10 06:17 pm
Connie is COLLLDDDD!!! I had a smile on my face while reading this. LOL Great job! :) Brice is left looking the idiot.
Author's Response: Reading your comments just put a smile on MY face. :) Thanks for leaving such wonderful feedback!
[Report This]Date: 08/07/10 05:27 pm
Revenge what a Perfect word . Lovely story.
Author's Response:
Stacie, Connie certainly thought it was a perfect word before she realized that her time would be better spent elsewhere. Dude just wasn't worth the trouble.
Thanks so much for leaving a comment.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/10 04:51 pm
That was interesting. I wasn't expecting actually.
Author's Response: Flicker and Sparkle, I'm glad you found the story interesting. Thanks for commenting! Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/07/10 02:36 pm