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Title: Chapter 1

Im happy Amanda is done woth trey. are they going to get back together? wats gonna happen with jarell? Cant wait for next unpdate!!!! hopw its soon =)

Reviewer: darlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Hmmm, when will she learn to go with her instinct???!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/07/10 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Why did she take Trey back?  He is not good for her, first he puts his hands on her.  Now he's asking her to skip classes.  Why is she so stupid?  The child is not earning my sympathy.  Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Okay, I must say I'm a littled disappointed that Amanda took Trey back.  I think he has violent tendencies and they will only continue and get worse the longer she is with him.  I hope she won't have to learn the hard way with Trey actually hitting her the next time.  I could totally see their relationship turning abusive.  On another note, when will there be more Amanda/Jarelly interaction?  I can't wait to learn more about him and she how they would mesh together.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ah!!! What a stupido!!! He's still treating her like shit and she can't see the light. He only wants to get in her pants. I bet that picture is of his GF. I'm disappointed in Amanda that she's letting him talk to her like that and thinks that its ok. Next he will be laying hands on her and not in a good way either. He obviously doesn't respect her. I still feel that she's gonna get burned.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/10 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, why am I not surprised about Trey??? Never trusted the bastard. Glad she saw the light before it was too late. Hmmm, wonder what Tati knows about this seeing that she encouraged her????

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/10 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying this story.  Oh young love... I had a feeling that Trey would turn out to be a bad guy.  He seemed too much like a player and I didn't like the way he handled the Arielle situation in the last chapter.  It made me think that he didn't have much respect for women.  On the other hand, I've been rooting for Jarell even though he's quiet and there has been limited interaction between him and Amanda.  Maybe it's the air of mystery that has me intrigued about him.  I hope there will be more interaction and conversation between the two of them in the next chapter.  Also, Amanda is far to young to give up on relationships after one bad experience. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/10 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 5

Like the plot alot.  Great to see that she isn't going to let Trey treat her like his personal property and whipping post.  Keep it going.

Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/10 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I'm thinking Mandy is a fool. She's that much in lust she can't see him for what he is....a disrespectful trash talking jerk!! Look at how he's treating/talking to Arielle, the girl he was hold up with just before meeting up with her. Trey is a plya and Mandy got set up by Tati. I just don't see this turning out to be a pretty picture that she has in his head. Now she talking trash herself???!!! Come on , she needs to open those eyes up wider.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/10 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I can't believe that after ignoring Amanda for so long that she had the nerve to ask her for Trig notes.  And Amanda actually gave them to her.  This is an interesting story, keep the chapter coming.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update but why the hell is she putting all her business out there let that??? Wasn't it Tati who wasn't speaking with her for a while??? She needs to keep her lips zipped because Tati is gonna spread her business the minute things don't go her way or she becomes jealous of her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 2

So....Trey sounds hot? lol.

Author's Response: Haha! He is!

Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 10:09 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far. Not liking the way Amanda is being bullied. Not too sure all will be well at the after graduation party for Amanda. Just not getting any good vibes from her acquaintances.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I appreciate your review. Your vibes may be right, lol. We'll see...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

THat was an interesting start to story, one child with some sense and those fools want to mess with her.  I am wondering where you are going with this story.  I am intriqued.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I appreciate your review. :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 03:12 am

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