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Title: Domestication

Thank you for these stories. Please continue. I was so enthralled that I missed a date! Please continue and I would love to hear "Peters" story that would be wonderful.

Reviewer: opened Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/05/11 08:38 pm

Title: Domestication


Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 03:33 am

Title: Domestication

Loved it.

Author's Response: Success! Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/10 08:04 am

Title: Domestication

Forgive me. I mean 'Parker' LOL Obviously I'm thinking of 'Peter Parker' *face palms* of Spiderman fame. *face palms again* LOL

Author's Response:

Haha! Peter Parker! I never even thought of it. It must have been subliminal. Lol

Anyways, it was a pleasure to write a little blurb about those two. I feel like I don't give them enough play. Thanks a lot for reviewing!

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/07/10 01:50 am

Title: Domestication

Awww I love it :) So sweet. Thanks for this extra peek into Peter and Melissa's love. :)

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/10 01:49 am

Title: Domestication

I enjoyed this snippet into Parker and Melissa's lives.  As for who I want to know more about before the war ...Peter since he seems to be so jealous of Parker and Melissa.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Peter before the war... hmmm, I'll try to see what I can do about that.

I'm glad you liked this piece. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/10 01:19 am

Title: Domestication

DP reader right here which you probably already know from my reviews. This was good gave me some insight on how Melissa and Parker got together and his attraction for her .But I must know more about Peter he just keeps lurking in the background all lonely and whatnot. i wonder was he always this shadowy creature or did he die and that's what he became?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this little bit. After writing it, I'm not so sure I should have put that bit about Peter in there. I'm beginning to feel that Peter gets more attention than he needs...

Anyways, thanks for reviewing on this one shot as well!

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 09:59 pm

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