Good story, more please. Lol
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/16 04:25 pm
I finally decided to read this story after bypassing it. I love Noelle and Trey. Noelle was too cute asking him out for drinks. Lol @ Trey being so excited that she was the woman who delivered his jewelry. I am glad I decided to give this story a chance...I can tell it's going to be GOOD.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/12/11 04:52 am
Please update soon!! I love this story!!!
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/11 05:21 am
Omg!!! can u say cruel. Where is the rest? New reader asking for more
Kim
Author's Response:
Thank You, Kimyso for the review.
I am sorry. I will try to update soon,I hope! ;0)
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/11/11 10:27 pm
Me likey!! More please.
Author's Response:
Hi Baha_Malo, Thanks for the review and for coming back!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/11 12:58 pm
Huhh, interesting...I hope Noelle does not get offended because he is trying to track her down. I like the progression, slowly but steady...I think you will make good progress without making the reader feel rushed.
Author's Response:
Thank You KittyOh48, for the review. I motto has been slow and steady. I will try to continue to follow that ;0).
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/11 05:13 am
Well all you can say is hot dam that man is fine and very smooth. I think it was sweet that he help her load up the car. YOu don't fine to many men willng to help a lady out. so they going on a date mmm I think it going to be fun and wait to she find out that he was the hot guy she deliver too lol. Thank for the update
Author's Response:
Hi WWE, I am glad you can see the realness of Trey. Don't have the best parents but he did learn some manners ;0).
He is awfully cute ain't he.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/11 04:54 am
please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank You for the review, I will try to give you what you want.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 08:23 pm
Very good
Author's Response:
Thank You for all of the review ;0)!!!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 08:07 pm
love it
Author's Response:
Thank You, Bredreaway for the review. I really appreciated it.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 08:02 pm
I'm glad that you brought this story back.
I really like it a lot.
I can't wait to see what Nicole's reaction would be to the news that her hot guy and Trenton are the one in the same.
Author's Response:
Hi Janetbd, Thanks for the review. As for her reaction,let wait and SEE!
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 12:56 pm
That man is fine as hell, can I get one like him? Trey is a mess, Noelle made quite of an impression on him. I can't wait how hard they both fall.
Author's Response:
HI pmgayles, No you can't get one like him, but We can all look!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 05:48 am
Oh come on!...can't leave me hanging! This is excellent! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks Megan for reading and viewing
I'll try not to be so long ;0)!
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 03:39 am
Wow talked about heat going on with these two. I see Trey is in the mood for some CoCo all over him and she wouldn't mind him at all witch don't blame her. I think it nice that she fixing the house that her mother and father started. It shows she has a big kind heart. Glad to see you are back and looked foward to the next update and thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. The house that Noelle is refering to is her own.
She wants to do something to remember her parents by hence the yard work and. As for Trey I think he is more than ready for some brown sugar in his world.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 02:12 am
Are my eyes deceiving me??? I love this story. I am so glad you updated, let me go and read the latest chapter. I had to shout out to you before I read it because I could not believe it was there, lol! I just say the story and when straight to 'review.'
Author's Response:
Thanks You for the review. I am so glad that you were excited to see the update. Make me glad that I continued after so many failed attempts. Hope you like it.
Reviewer: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/11/11 02:05 am
Pretty good so far, but You can not stop here! You have to give us more. I like this story and I believe it will get better and better. I give you a 9 just for the fact that your main characters are both fine specimens!
Author's Response:
Hello Kitty0h48
Here is your update . Sorry about the WAIT! THANK YOU!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/09/11 03:24 am
Oh yeah starting off on a very good note. Anytime you have a naked man with some beef in the first chapter......you have my vote! 9 but only because of some grammatical errors. Please get a proof reader or editor before you get past chapter 5.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/09/11 03:01 am
whered you run off too???!!!! i ran accross this story & fell in love with it & you disappeared and haven't updated in over a month!!! come back!! this story was a diamond in a ruff & was just getting good!! :(
Author's Response:
Hi Ashbyfan,
I am still here, life is very out of control right now. But school year is coming to an end soon. THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! For taking the time to read ;0).
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: 06/05/11 09:49 am
please update soon. luv your story
Author's Response:
Hi, Bredreaway,
Hope to update soon. I am glad that you like the story ;0)!!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 08:12 am
such a great start to this story... how could you leave us hanging right when they 'actually meet'..
keep it coming & hurry back with more!
Author's Response:
Hi Ashbyfan,
Thanks for the read and Review!
I am sorry about the cliffhanger. I wanted it to be a dramatic pause. Don't worry the next will build up the anticipation for both of us;0)!!!!
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: 28/03/11 08:58 am
Really like this story, beautiful casts pictures. Love D.C. looking forward to the scenic points!
Author's Response: Hi None, Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you like the photos. Hope the beauty of D.C. really comes thru.
[Report This]Date: 26/03/11 12:15 pm
I would like to bend over for TREY. THANK YOU!!!
HE IS FIIINEE. I want me one just like him, PLEASE!!!
LOVE THIS STORY!!! NOW UPDATE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Friend,
Well I wouldn't have said it quite like that ,but I am sure We all understand :0)! Wink. Wink.
Thanks for the read and review!!!
Reviewer: Friend Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/03/11 02:09 am
Hey Cimmy1, apparently I chose the right name since I have been a bug in your rug trying to get you to update. You could have knocked me over with a feather when I saw that you had posted and I am very happy indeed to see that Noelle and Trey are still in your thoughts.
That girl needs to get her some, seeing naked men in fruit and Trey ogling her backside like that! They are going to be so cute together and I would say I can't wait but I can't do anything else.
I know life has a way of taking over so I can only say thank you for taking the time to do this.
Author's Response:
Hey JuneBug66,
Surprise,Surprise!
Yeah I know I wanted it to be a surprise.
What do you mean she is seeing men in Fruit. And he can look where he WANTS. Tell Her Trey!
Yes I am thinking about them both now ;0)!!! Thanks for reading! Love your update!!!!! GO Gurl!!!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/03/11 12:57 am
LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank You, Sweetlooking218
Thank You for the Review and reading;0)!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/11 05:20 pm