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Title: Chapter 4

Very good



Author's Response:

Thank You for all of the review ;0)!!!!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 08:07 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Oh come on!...can't leave me hanging! This is excellent! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Megan for reading and viewing

 I'll  try not to be so long ;0)!

 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

Wow talked about heat going on with these two.  I see Trey is in the mood for some CoCo all over him and she wouldn't mind him at all witch don't blame her. I think it nice that she fixing the house that her mother and father started. It shows she has a big kind heart. Glad to see you are back and looked foward to the next update and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. The house that Noelle is refering to is her own.

She wants to do something to remember her parents  by hence  the yard work and. As for Trey I think he is more than ready for some brown sugar in his world.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 4

Pretty good so far, but You can not stop here! You have to give us more. I like this story and I believe it will get better and better. I give you a 9 just for the fact that your main characters are both fine specimens!



Author's Response:

Hello Kitty0h48

Here is your update . Sorry about the WAIT! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 4

whered you run off too???!!!!  i ran accross this story & fell in love with it & you disappeared and haven't updated in over a month!!!  come back!!  this story was a diamond in a ruff & was just getting good!! :(



Author's Response:

Hi Ashbyfan,

I am still here, life is very out of control right now. But school year is coming to an end soon. THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! For taking the time to read ;0).

Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 09:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

please update soon.  luv your story

Author's Response:

Hi, Bredreaway,

Hope to update soon. I am glad that you like the story ;0)!!!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 08:12 am

Title: Chapter 4

such a great start to this story... how could you leave us hanging right when they 'actually meet'..

 

keep it coming & hurry back with more!



Author's Response:

Hi Ashbyfan,

Thanks for the read and Review!

 I am sorry about the cliffhanger. I wanted it to be a dramatic pause. Don't worry the next will build up the anticipation for both of us;0)!!!!

Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 08:58 am

Title: Chapter 4

I would like to bend over for TREY. THANK YOU!!!

HE IS FIIINEE. I want me one just like him, PLEASE!!!

LOVE THIS STORY!!! NOW UPDATE!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Friend,

Well I wouldn't have said it quite like that ,but I am sure We all understand :0)! Wink. Wink.

Thanks for the read and review!!!

 

Reviewer: Friend Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/11 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hey Cimmy1, apparently I chose the right name since I have been a bug in your rug trying to get you to update. You could have knocked me over with a feather when I saw that you had posted and I am very happy indeed to see that Noelle and Trey are still in your thoughts.  

That girl needs to get her some, seeing naked men in fruit and Trey ogling her backside like that! They are going to be so cute together and I would say I can't wait but I can't do anything else.

I know life has a way of taking over so I can only say thank you for taking the time to do this.



Author's Response:

Hey JuneBug66,

Surprise,Surprise!

Yeah I know I wanted it to be a surprise.

What do you mean she is seeing men in Fruit. And he can look where he WANTS. Tell Her Trey!

Yes I am thinking about them both now ;0)!!! Thanks for reading! Love your update!!!!! GO Gurl!!!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/11 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 4

LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thank You, Sweetlooking218

Thank You for the Review and reading;0)!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Yay!! Glad you're back! Loved the update. Can't wait until he makes the connection with her being the girl in his apartment. Great story so far.

Author's Response: Thank You,Thank You!    I'm Glad to be back. This is a case of six degree of separation, they will get there, now let's see ;0).

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 4

Me likey!!!

Author's Response: Thank You, Pmgayles for taking the time to read and review. Come again please ;0)!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

Glad you are back. Trey is hunkadelicious!



Author's Response:

Hi Amelia,  It's good to be bad. Glad you came back to.  Yes, Trey is muy delicioso.

 Guess what there will be more pic. of his hotness ;O)! Yipee

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 4

I really like this story. Very sexy!

Author's Response: Thank You,FranklinsMuse for reading and reviewing.  As for being sexy, it help that the man is so fine. I wanted Noelle to have someone as handsome as she is pretty ;o).

Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 4

Thank you so much for coming back to this story.   I missed it.  Can't wait for the next update.  Come back soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Romance,

Thank You for coming back. I missed it to. I have been hanging around for the past few months writing here and there, but I was waiting to have more before posting. A little BUG66 said "Just go ahead and start posting." Glad I did ;O)!

Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

oooooooooooo yeah she want your help alright trey  she want you to plant you flower in her garden lol. I like the story is very good and you should stick to it. look foward to the next update and thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Hi Wwefanforlife, Gurl you are crazy. "She want you to plant you flower in her garden." CRAZY,WELL MAYBE SHE DOES WANT THAT, MmMm.

Also, in REF: to his parent they are not the best parents in the world, but he's moving along anyway. About Noelle, you would think that after all she saw she would have remember him. OoH, wait she wasn't looking at his HEAD! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!   EVIL LAUGH.

Check back later for more on the ever changing lives of Trey and Noelle!!!

P.S. The MEN ARE Right and TIGHT! TRUST ME I HAVE SEEN THE PICTURES!!!!!!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 10:41 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Enjoying the story. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Apple. Hang in there will be back soon ;0)!

Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 4

loving this story

Author's Response: Hi mfoto22, Gurl what are you doing up so early. Thank You.

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 11:27 am

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