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Title: Chapter 4

Yay!! Glad you're back! Loved the update. Can't wait until he makes the connection with her being the girl in his apartment. Great story so far.

Author's Response: Thank You,Thank You!    I'm Glad to be back. This is a case of six degree of separation, they will get there, now let's see ;0).

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 4

Me likey!!!

Author's Response: Thank You, Pmgayles for taking the time to read and review. Come again please ;0)!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

Glad you are back. Trey is hunkadelicious!



Author's Response:

Hi Amelia,  It's good to be bad. Glad you came back to.  Yes, Trey is muy delicioso.

 Guess what there will be more pic. of his hotness ;O)! Yipee

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 04:12 am

Title: Chapter 4

I really like this story. Very sexy!

Author's Response: Thank You,FranklinsMuse for reading and reviewing.  As for being sexy, it help that the man is so fine. I wanted Noelle to have someone as handsome as she is pretty ;o).

Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

WOW! Great cast!

Author's Response:

Thank FranklinMuse.

 I want to use some of those people that we don't really see. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/11 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 4

Thank you so much for coming back to this story.   I missed it.  Can't wait for the next update.  Come back soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Romance,

Thank You for coming back. I missed it to. I have been hanging around for the past few months writing here and there, but I was waiting to have more before posting. A little BUG66 said "Just go ahead and start posting." Glad I did ;O)!

Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

oooooooooooo yeah she want your help alright trey  she want you to plant you flower in her garden lol. I like the story is very good and you should stick to it. look foward to the next update and thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Hi Wwefanforlife, Gurl you are crazy. "She want you to plant you flower in her garden." CRAZY,WELL MAYBE SHE DOES WANT THAT, MmMm.

Also, in REF: to his parent they are not the best parents in the world, but he's moving along anyway. About Noelle, you would think that after all she saw she would have remember him. OoH, wait she wasn't looking at his HEAD! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!   EVIL LAUGH.

Check back later for more on the ever changing lives of Trey and Noelle!!!

P.S. The MEN ARE Right and TIGHT! TRUST ME I HAVE SEEN THE PICTURES!!!!!!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 10:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Wow how dare his mother calls his sister talking about you kids never call me or vist me. That some bull their mom and dad never there for them to show to their children they care about them and love them. I hope Noelle meet Trey agian may be he what she looking for. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 10:36 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Yeah ummmmmmmmm need glass water my mouth is dry I feel Noelle  looking at mr. Sexy ass hell naked  look like her day getting better. I like the story so far so sad she lost her mother and father and that he has a mother and father who are so cold and don't care about their children. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank You, for the review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Nice pic of cast and the men in this story are fineeeeeeeeeeeeee yummy. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank You W. They are rather tasty,Grrr. You are welcome

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Thank you so much for the details! I always love it when a story has details to show me what's going on. The story sounds very good so far! Thumbs up :)

Author's Response:

Thanks SAM, I like details too. Sometime to much, I have been told ;0(!

I know these stories are not real, but pictures and detail help with the visuallization ;0)! 

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 08:18 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Enjoying the story. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Apple. Hang in there will be back soon ;0)!

Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 4

loving this story

Author's Response: Hi mfoto22, Gurl what are you doing up so early. Thank You.

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 11:27 am

Title: Chapter 3

When is the next update? It has been quite a while since the last chapter. Your work is great and Trey is so dammed sexy. Please hurry cause your readers are hungry for more! 

Author's Response: Hi Amelia, How about now, for the update! Just because you have been faithful. Thank You!

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 09:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

I love this story, I live in the DC area so im excited to see what u gonna write bout it, but the question is... where the hell r u? lol plz update soon!

Author's Response: Hi Anonymous, I love D.C. also. Lots of things going on there, I just love it. I have fallen of the writing wagon horribly. FORGIVE ME. LIFE HAS BEEN REALLY BEEN GIVEN IT TO me for the past few months . But I promise JUNEBUG that I would try to do something soon. THANK FOR READING ;0)!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/11 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I agree with the previous comment, please come back and update! You cannot leave us hanging.

Author's Response:

Hi, San234

Thank for reading, Hope to update soon. Things are begining to buzz in D.C. ;0)!!!

Reviewer: san234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow, great story...What has happen , no updates since August!?  You just can't start a story as good as this one, and just leave your readers STRANDED. Especially with such a fione naked man in the mix.  Come on now and get that muse back...Please

Author's Response: HI VAL1, I am really sorry about the absents. No real excuse. Life has been really stomping my butt (family). I don't know how you found this story after all this time but THANK YOU for the REVIEW;0)! 

Reviewer: VAL1 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like need an update.

Author's Response: Hi Guest, Thanks for reading hope you will be back when I update ;0)!!!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3

this story is really good and interesting so far, keep it up!!



Author's Response:

None, Thank  YOU for the review. I am sorry that it has taken me 4 months to respond but hopeful the new update will be acceptable ;0). 

Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 10:07 am

Title: Chapter 3

please show more of Trey (ehhe) and Noelle!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry Trey had to be reworked so to speak. Hope the new Trey is acceptable.

Reviewer: tinytim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Well, I like this story so far. It has some real potential to be something with some meat on it.

Nice!



Author's Response: Flikchick, THank YOU for the review. Sorry I did not answer before. Thanks for taking the time to respond ;0)!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 3

Very nice start and I love the cast pictures. Sounds this is gong to be a really good read. Keep it coming

Author's Response:

THANK YOU Cali2mt406 for the review, 6 months ago. I kind of left it alone cause my brain was ceasing up on me. FORGIVE ME PLEASE. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW THAT YOU LEFT.

I changed Trey, I wnated some other picture of him and could fine anything I like.  Seems someone else like him alot also.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update. I would like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: I am interested in seeing where this goes also. Thank for reading.

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 10:22 am

Title: Chapter 3

Nice story..but, I think you made a reference to some place in NYC not the DC area of which, I beleive the story takes place.

Author's Response: Thank You. But I am not sure what you are referring to, the story is taking place in  the D.C. area.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 3

Loved the update. Can't wait until they meet face to face.

Author's Response: Thank You. Sorry it took so long to update. Life is kicking. Trying to kicking now. Face to face hopefully will be soon. Stay turn, Please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 06:34 am

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