this is a badass story i brought a book on alromancebook store  yestarday,      and this story is so much more better than what i had paid for i wish some of these well know authers would take the time like yourself and so meny on this site to write good strong black femal chacraters this is a great story and if you were to publish this story for dame sure i would most def, would buy it thank you for sharing your wonderful work please keep writing because i most def, will be reading have to say it again badass storylol.

Awesome,  so who is the love that Alana will fall for?  Is is Nathan?  Who?? Please inquiring minds want to know!!

This undercover stuff  continues getting deeper, I LOVE IT!

I wonder did Ally do a mercy killing of her mother with that tea, knowing Section was going to kill her when they arrived?  Ally in this chapter does say that that mom along with her sisters and dad are all gone. 

To the Marine's special operations, people are just expendable objects including assassinators like Ally; that's why she was scheduled for termination, I guess they figure after 15years of devious under cover work and murders the assassinator is so destroyed as a human she could also become a danger to the civility of American society, as well, as no longer a dependable operative.

Yep!  This story continues to be real good, evidencing it has everything!  So, Alec believes Ally is dead , doesen't yet no she was revived and he suffers in deep mourning.  I'm supposing that it is Ally who is the mysterious person at the end of this chapter in Alec's room while he is asleep and taking the document folder in order to dispose of the rapist/murderer or get evidence that nails the rapist for his crimes.  

I wonder, when Alec will discover she is alive, and be happy! 

There are some people that I want her to kill, starting with Thomas.  I am loving this story.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Great update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you

Wow, what mystery develops??? Hope Ally can save her mom.

Nathan had a thing for Ally I guess and Thomas doesn't seem to please by this.  Actually, Ally doesn't seem to please either.  Now when you introduced Alec, I thought that he didn't know where Adam was. But it appears that Adam is living in the same building.  I hope that they get her mother out in time.  The story is definitely flowing better.  Thanks

So Alana drugged her mother to make it seem that she was the one that killed her father.  I guess the mother was angry with the dad for getting her children involved with this organization so she killed him. What a terrible thing for a father to do.  Now two of their children are dead and they had husbands.  No one know where the brother is.  WOW.  Thanks

Thanks for the update.  So now her two sisters are dead...her father is dead.  She was lovers with the guy she is in the car with when she was 18.  She likes to kill people with poison and stays with them until they die.  And she is trying to understand why she was brought back from the dead.  Ok, thanks.

Author's Response: You've got it. I have a total of two more characters to introduce. Nathan and her brother Adam. So I may go back and reedit to make things easier. Bear with me this is the first original fiction that I'm sharing with people outside my family and I'm trying to remember you all don't have the benefit of already having the back story.

Interesting update.

Author's Response: I totally left out a chapter in my last update. I replaced chapter one because I couldn't find anyother way to introduce Alec.

Interesting start to the story to have known that you died and were back to life.  Chilling actually...what kind of organization is she with?  Thanks

Author's Response: That comes a little later. I didn't want to explain section just yet.

Love it. Can't wait to read more.