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Title: Chapter 4

I really like this story and hope that you will come back and finish it.

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/01/11 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 4

I just caught up with this wonderful story, I'm so enjoying reading it and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 12:25 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Glad that he got to meet the kids. Liking how Kylie is handling herself and hope Kyle Jr comes around soon.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 07:32 am

Title: Chapter 4

Tonya is stupid,and those poor babies were traumitized by her choices in men. I loc=ve Kyle!!! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great update.  I am glad that one of the twins gave him a chance but they long road ahead.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

Well wonderful...You are turning out the chapters and I am patiently waiting. 

Nice, it will always be the girl who is sweet and nice and wants to know  her daddy.  Kyle needs to know that his mother didn't tell his real dad anything about them.  He shouldn't think his father abandoned them.

 

Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 4

What a sweet update!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 12:51 am

Title: Chapter 4

Girls and their dads! I'm not surprised that Kylie was the easier twin. Kyle, Jr. will come around. Also I know Kyle will be making moves on Tonya soon enough. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/10 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

i am now officially stalking you! that was a great update!

Reviewer: monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Glad they met.  I don't understand she could give them his name and no one know they were his children, or at least him mother who seems to be still friendly with Tonya's mom?

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Kyle Jr will come around once they get a chance to talk with each other. Wonderful update!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 11:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh my, my goodness.  I can understand that Kyle is angry and disappointed but come on he is going to remove the children from the family that they have only known.  Just because he is a doctor and a new one at that he thinks that he can care for two children without help?  Is he demented or what?  Tonya was definitely wrong in for not telling him that she was pregnant.  I don't think the answer is that he goes to her parents house and say to the the twins that they are coming to live with him because their mother is stoopid and BTW I just found out that I am your father,  It isn't going to work for a few reasons.  First, their grandfather is going to beat the shit out of him, second because the children don't know him at least one of them will object if not both, third because of his job as a new physician someone will, probably his best friend will be like dude WTF?  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 02:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh nooo, this is NOT turning out so good. Hope someone can talk some sense to him before he burns his bridges with the kids and Tonya. He has to remember he's a stranger to them.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 10:19 am

Title: Chapter 3

I can see Why Kyle would want to get the kids. To let children see such abuse is heart breaking. Would she still be with that fool if he didnt want to move on to someone else, but Like Tonya said the kids dont know him.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow very exposive chapter.  I don't know how it feels to be in an abusive relationship but I know it shakes you to the core and cause you to make choices that are not valid.  Grayson is mad and fuming but he shouldnt take her kids.   Yes Kevin could have harm the children more but Thank God she survive and know she needs to change and move on with her life in a different manner.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/07/10 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update.  This is getting good. Yeah. Will he really take the kids.  He needs to think straight.  Well, never keep a man away from his kids.  

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I understand Grayson and i agree. He has a right to prioritize  the children in this domestic abuse. How can she be so sure Kevin didn't hurt those kids? An emotional abuse or verbal abuse is just as truamatizing as physical or sexual. Children will not easily get over it. Her character seems ambiguous between weak and strong. How did she end up with such low self esteem about herself. Is she a victim also and repeating the cycle of victimization. It is a good story. I just can't seem to garner sympathy other than the miscarriage right now?

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Even though the kids are no longer in danger since she is no longer with Kevin, I can see how Grayson feels about wanting custody of them. When he stops and thinks about what he said out of anger hopefully he will change his mind. He also has to think about how the kids will react to him and how it would affect them mentality! Wonderful update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Great start to this story can’t wait to read chapter 3….. I also love your story Karma's B***H  I hope you find some free time to post the next chapter of Karma's B***H .

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

I hope they catch Kevin! Great story!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 2

That police officer act like she messing with Kevin.  I like the subtle chemistry between kyle and Tonya.  Keep them chappters coming

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, she's been hiding a lot for the past 10 years.  I wonder how he will react once he finds out she kept his children away.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great update. Wow, I think Kyle is gonna be pissed when he finds out but I hope he'll give her a second chance.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

So new story that u managed to update on. Good so far, does all this means ur back for good? I hope so! Keep writing!

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/07/10 01:17 am

Title: Chapter 2

Nine yesrs is still a long  time. She even put in his on the birth certificate. She really didn't hide it, but nine years, that's too much time. File charges on Kevin and let him lose that wonderful new promotion he just got. Awesome story.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/07/10 07:56 pm

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