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Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

I agree with Matthew, I don't like Evan either.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/10 06:05 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Thanks for a great update. Not sure she is still agreeing to marry Evan when she has strong feelings for Matthew.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

This is really good.  Noel doesn't really seem to want to get married.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 04:33 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Poor Matt...so heart sick over this beautiful ebony woman. I wonder does she eeven realize how much he loves her or is she clueless as she kinda seems.

I hope she does not marry Evan...he does not seem like her type..too possessive and suffocating...maybe I am pre judging because I want her to realize how much Matt loves her..

I am loving this story sweetie and I cannot wait to see where it leads us...excellent job excellent!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 02:19 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Oh this is getting GOOD... I love the chemestry between Matt and Noel, and I can't wait to find out why she wants to see him the night b4 her wedding, I wonder if she is starting to feel for Matt what he feels for her.

I already don't like Evan, not only his he a JERK, but I have a feeling that its either her father wants them to marry b/c he's "The RIGHT Guy" or Evan is just marrying her to get in good with Dad.

Please don't be long with more.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 01:10 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

What the heck is wrong with Noel??? Can't she make up her mind about which man she wants??? Evan seems kinda pushy. Hope she knows what she's getting into. Great update!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/10 12:40 am

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Is she going to marry Evan or is going to go with her feelings for Matthew?  Please say the later.  She didn't seem to happy to see Evan, me thinks that she doesn't want to marry him.  This may be a marriage that her parents want, not one of love.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Her fiance doesn't sound like he is a very nice person. I'm wondering if she called him over to tell him she is not going through with the wedding.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

I don't like Evan. I love Matt. Noel needs to get real! I love this story, if there is no HEA I will get on th first plane to The US and have words with you!  :)

Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 09:14 pm

Title: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

I'm really liking this story so far. I'm liking the buildup that you have going and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/10 06:21 pm

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