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Title: Epilogue

Wow! You did it again! Love the scripture references. The spiritual encouragement to embrace Christ. 

You are using your God given talents to glorify Him and He is pleased!

Pris 



Author's Response:

This comment encouraged me to keep doing what I'm doing! Brought tears to my eyes.

THANKS so much!!!!!!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 16

"This chapter cracks me up every time. lol. I hope you got in a good laugh as well."

SURE DID !!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm THRILLED that you enjoyed it so much!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 10:27 am

Title: Extra Stuff

thanks for the meaning of the words and like xander name it good name.

Author's Response: You're welcome. In case I haven't said it enough already, THANKS again for all the comments you've left along the way. You rock!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 12:08 am

Title: Epilogue

aww they got married going to have babies and have a healthy and happy life. glad her dad meet someone and is very happy too. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Big Grin! Yes, all the good people in the story got their HEA's. Thanks again for all the continual feedback!

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Date: 20/08/10 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 32

glad that she made it and that the misson was done and nassi home and earth was saved. love the story good job suprize and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: All's well that ends well, I say. You're welcome about the story. Thanks for reading along with me, wwefanforlife!

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Date: 20/08/10 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 31

omg i hope she make it if xander lose her i dont know what he do. glad that jay got was coming to him he a evil man and thank god he gone. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Jay had to get his. He was evil to the core. No redeeming qualities at all. Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 20/08/10 12:02 am

Title: Chapter 30

oh crap is she going to be able to get to her father on time or lose another parent? that so slick how the got the conffession out of him and everyone around earth heard it. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Yes, that was pretty slick. lol. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 19/08/10 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 29

i hope everyone comes out alive but i have a feeling that is afu dad that going to die just something in my gut tells me that. well let the battle begin. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Keep reading. You'll see who gets hurt and who dies soon enough. Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 18/08/10 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 28

glad that afu put her in her place and let her know that xander is her man and she not letting him go for no one wtg. glad they work things out now the can focus on the misson. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: I'm glad they worked it out too. The mission is way more important than a catfight anyway. Though the catfight might have been fun to write. lol. Thanks for leaving another comment!

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Date: 18/08/10 12:46 am

Title: Chapter 27

i hear you girl that ship sound heaven on earth. glad that that crazy rodi didnt do any thing to afu but she need to expect  that xander  is in love with someone else. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: That Roni is a trip all by herself. You'll see what happens to her soon enough. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 18/08/10 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 25

wow i agree with dad is great he ask her to marry him and she said yes but they have to rember to focus on the task of saving both their homes. earth and where xander comes from. they are so cute together blushing and holding hands . thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: tee-hee. I'm glad you think they were cute together. You know I agree. lol. Thanks once again for all the feedback. You rock!

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Date: 13/08/10 03:18 am

Title: Chapter 24

Good thing his best friend walked in or that room would been filled with the whole rainbow colors in it lol. but glad she if relax around him and that he make her feel safe and speical. heck the K people have no wrinkles sign me up to go to that place lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Yes, that no wrinkles thing is a great motivator to live on Katan. lol. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 13/08/10 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 23

well glad afua and xander talked about what love realy means to each other and they going to wait before the go to far. I wish able to give my V to somone one but it was tooken away at early age for me it sad when that happens to young women and men. like the story girl and glad that brua and afu had good people looking out for the them. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Sorry that happened to you, girl. Grrr....it burns me up whenever I hear about someone taking away the innocence of another. Keep your heart up!

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Date: 13/08/10 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 22

i'm glad she talked to the lord about this and that she finaly listen that xander is her soul mate and they ment to do great things on both earth and his home for some many people as well. glad they got out saftly and hope it not jay evil men afte them thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Yes, Jay is a VERY evil man! But he's gonna be dealt with soon enough and it ain't gonna be pretty. Thanks again for the feedback!

 

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Date: 11/08/10 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 21

well jay your worst nightmare  came true . the mannings are dead but their son is alvie and can't wait to he take him down and hope he begs on his knees for mercy for all the pain he cause people. now glad that badru and afu is getting out there saftly. so witch one is going to die i think i know who it is but not sure just yet. love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: I can't say whose gonna die. You'll have to keep on reading to find that nugget out. lol. Thanks for all the feedback, wwefanforlife!

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Date: 11/08/10 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 20

glad they both made it hope saftly and love the bond xander has with his family all waiting up for him he a very lucky man to have so many people care about him. wonder how the talked btween dad him is going to head? thanks for the updated can't wait to they meet afu.

Author's Response: Yes, the love of family is a wonderful thing to have. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/08/10 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 19

well glad lako deicde to move on from xander and focus on being a better child for god. i think she find her soul mate who knows it can be xander best friend? mmmmmmmm. it is sad such evil alwasy being spoke about and how cruel people can be but like the said the power of God can heal people if they truly wanted it. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: I got something special in store for Lady L. No worries about her. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/08/10 11:22 pm

Title: Chapter 18

i hope the women settle there diffents and know that xander cares for the both but hope lakota able to find someone for herself. it obivus that xander realy like afu alot and they are each other soul mate. thanks for the updated. wonder who came to the door for bible studies?

Author's Response:

Xander is definitely feeling Afua more than he does the ex-prostitute. Keep reading, you'll see who's at the door soon enough. 

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/08/10 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 17

glad xander stood up to the mother and was williing to help her out in time of need. now love how  his soul mate got so jeaously of him talking to another girl look like she wanted to kick her butt but she a lady. now love how his friend went to procted them and attack her lol to funnylol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: That was funny what Nasiir did. tee-hee. Thanks again for leaving so many comments as you read along. It's very encouraging.

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Date: 11/08/10 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 16

i'm happy he finlay turn his head i'm thinking when is the brother going to turn his head her father right there dude lol. but afua going to change her mind. xander is too good of a guy for her to just shut down her kind heart that not going to work. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Sounds like you might have the gift too, cause you're so right about Afua. lol. Thanks for the comment!

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Date: 11/08/10 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 15

uh oh the dows speaks lol  bad dog bad dog lol. wow so she can tell the furtuer the past and present cool. if i had that power i would freak out but would like it because i will know when wwe is coming to my home town agian and get front row tickets lol. i hope they able to stop this evil man thanks for the updated

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! Girl, you are off the chain! Just remember with great power comes great responsibility.

Looking forward to your next comment.

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Date: 11/08/10 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 14

well heck he found his soul mate. she human she speak a different lanauge and she a V wow  wtg xander. i thougth he wouldnt' find a V woman they so little her on earth mars jupiter any where lol. thanks for the updated story getting good.

Author's Response: I didn't say Afua was a V, so you might want to re-read that chapter. lol. But she is a holy woman. Thanks again for commenting!

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Date: 10/08/10 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 13

wow good thing they didnt' get arrested and that xander is safe and so is his best friend. glad they finaly meet and he can help him understand his birth mom and dad more and may be brdru name can be clear from the lies been told on him. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: No worries. Xander and Badru are gonna help each other in more ways than one. Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/08/10 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 12

well glad badru didnt faint when he seen xander lol but glad they finaly meeting and he getting the answer he been looking for. i think his best friend right lasko maybe they one for him i know he wanted a V woman good luck with that one lol. to find a vigian like trying to find a neeld in a hay stack lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Badru was stronger than me. I probably would have fainted. lol. And you're right, it's very hard to find a virgin in this day and age. No telling WHAT things will be like in the future. Sad, but true fact.

Thanks for commenting and following the story so steadily!

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Date: 10/08/10 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

wow i'm glad that xander help that woman and was helping so many other people in time of need. it shows he is rasie by two wonderfull people and his birth mom and dad was amazing too. can't see B recation when he seems him. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: I liked both sets of parents as well. Thanks so much for keeping the comments coming. You rock, wwefanforlife!

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Date: 08/08/10 10:37 pm

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