i understand why xander feels that way. he love his family and have great friend but it also nice that he can have someone like him that understand and get him. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: I agree. It is nice to have someone understand you. Thanks again for the continual feedback!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/10 10:30 pm
lol dont' blame nasiir i dont like libarans either lol. wow what to badru see xander he going to flip but be very happy to see him. i can't stand that evil doctor mess up his life and been band from the mission. I hope xander find true love one day and be very happy. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Badru and Xander's first meeting is a doozie that's for sure. lol. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/10 10:25 pm
wow so here he is in love and she in love with him but cant' be together because they so different that sucks. i hope he able to find true love and able be with someone that truly and deeply cares for him. glad his mother was able to have more children and that she still treat him like her son. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Girl, sometimes people are just TOO different to make this work. No worries about Xander. He'll be just fine. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/10 08:42 pm
OH ok he was feeling the sprit of God in him that why he was changing corlors . good frist thought he was half alien something lol. Glad her husband found something that not only help his wife but help many women who wanted to become mothers one day. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: No, Xander's not half alien. He really is all human. tee-hee. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/10 08:32 pm
me i proably ran out the room and scream and lose my mind if i seen my son recation when she was reading to him lol. glad they told him about his parents and he knows where he comes from. Now Noam didnt wanted her son to sever her i think nice she didnt but never hurts to get kids to do something for you. now my mom had no proably telling me to get up and fix food clean house or to get her something to drink lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!
Your reaction to that scene tickled the heck out of me. Still does. Giggle. Laugh. Guffaw!
Thanks for commenting~
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/10 08:28 pm
wow that jay guy is just pure evil. he has so much hated in his heart that he blind by it. now that he about to blame their deaths on their good friend badru and hope that he get caught and punshied real soon. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Your intuition is on point today, wwefanforlife...about a lot of things. lol. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/10 04:54 am
i think that sorry s.o.b had something do with the deaths of the mannings. like there good dear friend badru will find out who did it and make them pay for taking those nice people lives. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Can't say that your thinking is off, wwefanforlife. In fact, it's very ON. lol. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/10 04:51 am
omg they died the died that so sad. i hope the couple who the left the son too take realy good care of him. i like the fact they were able to see their son born before they went to a better and happy place. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, they really did die. :( And yes, Xander's new parents will do a great job of raising him. Thanks for leaving a comment.
[Report This]Date: 07/08/10 04:49 am
wow i dont blame they dont wanted to leave that sweet place with a home like that i wouldnt wanted to go back to earth either lol. i wonder what going to happen when they getting home will they be safe or is trouble brewing thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't mind visiting a planet like that, too. lol. Still so many questions, I see. I promise they will all be answered soon. I don't want to spoil the surprise for you, so stay tuned...
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/10 11:06 pm
are they alright did the misson over with what did the hit? mmmmmmmmm this is getting insterting and look foward to reading more thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
So many questions. They will get answered in due time. Just keep reading. lol
Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/10 11:02 pm
One word to describe this story would be Awesome!!! I finish this in one reading on last night also. In fact, i kept sneaking back after the bad weather calmed to see what you had done. I really enjoyed the whole essence of your storytelling and relevance but most of all the scriptural base. The word is a gift to be shared in all venues. This story was simply wonderful!!! Thank you again for sharing this talent of yours. Look forward to more and be blessed.
Author's Response: Awwww...Love Drama, now you got me blushing. Thanks so much for every word you said. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Feel free to visit with me anytime.
Date: 01/08/10 05:45 pm
This story was so interesting that I was determined to finish it and I did eventhough it took me most of the day. Thanks again for sharing this adorable tale. I absolutely loved it!!!! Look forward to reading from you again in the future.
Author's Response:
WOWWWWWW!!!!!
You finished it all in one day?! Kudos to you for such dedication. I feel honored that you spent so much of your time reading my work. And that you actually enjoyed the experience. Wow again! And THANK YOU immensely for providing such wonderful feedback along the way.
I look forward to hearing from you again in the future. Be blessed, Baha_Malo!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/08/10 08:02 am
Roni was determined to get her man but she saw in the end that it wasn't meant to be and that Afua was the better woman after all. Glad she had the grace to know when to stop fighting for Xander. Hope she finds another to love.
Author's Response: Afua was definitely a better fit for Xander's life than Roni. I'm glad the short Katanian wisely took a step back as well, lest Afua really show her claws. lol. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/10 07:36 am
Great job of writing this story and I'm so happy you decided to share. Awesome story so far and I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Each new comment I get from you, Baha_Malo, makes me smile even wider. :D
[Report This]Date: 01/08/10 04:46 am
This was a really nice story. Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response: You're welcome, Leso1. Thank you for leaving a comment. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/08/10 03:03 am
I really really like this story.
Author's Response: I really, REALLY like your comment, Prettywhitty! Thanks for leaving feedback. :)
[Report This]Date: 31/07/10 11:50 pm
Love me some Nasir! Real funny!
Author's Response: I luvs him too. tee-hee! Thanks for leaving a comment.
[Report This]Date: 31/07/10 11:20 pm
Definitely tugged at my heartstring. So sad that both of them died but happy Xander lived. Loving this story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for the continual feedback, Baha_Malo. It is sooooo appreciated. As for this chapter, I already told ya how broke up I was about them dying. Had to walk away from the computer for a while. lol. I know. I can be quite the softy at times. tee-hee.
[Report This]Date: 31/07/10 10:03 pm
I second that liking of this story. I find it to be unique, relevant, and the use of scriptures is very good way to tell this story. Thanks for sharing your talent and continue on with this beautiful story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouraging words, Love Drama! Your comments eased my mind about whether or not the story was coming across as too 'preachy'. I was trying to strike a good balance in that area.
Much appreciation for the feedback!
Reviewer: Love drama Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/10 09:39 pm
Me likey!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you likey, Baha_Malo. You rock! :)
Thanks for being the first to leave a comment on this story.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/10 09:08 pm