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Title: Chapter 1

And?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/16 05:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You should develop this more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/06/14 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Please tell me that there will be more to this story!!!



Author's Response:

i hadnt planned on it, but i just might....

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/11 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 1

That man is fine I would go to Europe with him!!!

Author's Response:

He is super gorgeous....

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 07:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

Really intense, I like how you say the viper thing was messing with his mind. I've watched him on tv and I can only imagine what he would be like in real life. Enjoyed it and would like to see where it goes.

Author's Response:

It was a one shot, but I may pull something out for him later.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/09/10 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning!!! Too bad it's for the "less is more" challenge...darn-tootin'..lol

Author's Response:

Thanks...

Reviewer: dirtydiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/10 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

understand it a one shot deal but i hope one day you do right a story with orton as main charcter i think you do a great job on it and look foward to reading it one day.

Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

how dar he talked to her like that i would been up set then ask for cash no checks or credit cards lol. but this is getting good and look foward to read more about this story . oh by the way if you didnt know they say cena going to be a bad guy. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: It's a one shot and I can't see Cena going rogue!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

no you can't end it there that's unacceptable!!!!

 

chants continue!!!



Author's Response: Nope it's a one shot baby!

Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

intriguing! sounds pretty good

Author's Response:

Thanks...

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 06:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

WOW!

Author's Response: I hope that was a good wow...

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 10:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

YAY DS, you did it! I remember you mentioning that you were nervous about writing a bad boy, but you did a great job. :D

I don't know if Larissa should trust him, lol. He is the viper after all.



Author's Response: Yeah it was ripe for the one shot...

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, for $10000 I would go too especially as he said he only wants friendship. I think that's his ploy to try to get to know her better but he seems abit hard which can make one wary. Loved it. Hope to see them again somewhere in the future.

Author's Response: Umm, I really don't know if I'm gonna go further with it...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a good short.

Author's Response: glad you liked it...

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back sweetie....I think this is a goos start but lawd knows we need more...what happens on this trip?? Will she give it up..lol!!! Why her and what has he got up his sleeve?? We need more....Great job sweetie!!!

Author's Response: Nope Nene...its a one shot...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 01:38 am

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love it and want more .

Author's Response: Nope its a one shot>>>

Reviewer: lilmama2325 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice shortie, but would like p read a sequel!

Author's Response: Nah... LOL... I may think about it

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I just read the first part you added. Are you sure you don't want to write more for them?



Author's Response: Hmmm. not sure. I'm thinking about it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OMG that was HOT, and I'm glad that you used Randy Orton, I pictured him though out that whole story, plus the man is HAWT, I got a chance to see in live and in person when I went to a RAW show, (SWOON)

IMO this should be an actual story.



Author's Response: Really, hmm... I'mma have to think about it... and Orton is my fantasy...LOL Him and Cena both!!!

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

She should have bartered with him for more than 10,000. she needs more than that for the month, lol! She sure did decide quickly.



Author's Response: This was a one shot... :) That's why she decided so quickly...

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 06:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh I'm loving this!!! I love me some Randy Orton....can't wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response: Nope, no more... this was just a one shot deal....

Reviewer: thicknsweet88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/10 06:27 pm

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