I have been waiting for this story, outstanding. I can wait patiently for you to finish.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 06:02 pm
Oh lord, this is going to get really ugly!!! On the plus side the real story may come out. You left us hanging so I can't wait to see what happens next. You are great at the suspense!Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 04:02 pm
Well, wish I could say I thought better of him. But no. Stupidity grows on trees in their part of town, huh? If it isn't one thing it's another, if it isn't one person... - you're picking up what I'm putting down, I'm sure.
It's a shame that he took it so far. Rape? Really, bro? And then his Father. He's even more of a disgrace. I would never cover for a rapist, family or no family they all deserve to be castrated.
I wonder why Sarah would not be insistent upon accompanying her black/lesbian girlfriend in this part of town, with these people?
I look forward to seeing what happens from here.Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/10 06:27 am
Oh hell No!!! I hope that shithead gets what's coming to him and SOON!!! Attacking Chantal like that???!! His dad is also an **hole covering this crime. I hope Billy gets back what he did to Chantal and more as he sure was delusional when he never even had a relationship with Sarah. Chantal should have kept her mouth shut around strangers she really didn't know. Mouthing off only leads to trouble sometimes. Chantal needs to get the hell out of dogde when she gets better if she gets better. That was a terrible life lesson for her. Sarah, Sarah what you gonna do when you find out the truth???!!!Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/10 12:47 am
"It's okay. Maybe one day, you'll be able to watch." Chantal said with a wink and Jared smiled. -A joke, right? Pretty please let this be a joke.
"I didn't mess her up...being a lesbian is just as normal as...I don't know...you fucking a horse. If that's the norm here." Chantal knew that insult was not necessary for this dangerous situation, but she couldn't help it. -She couldn't help being stupid? It's this kind of behavior that lands a person in the hospital or worse in real-life moments like these.
Up until this chapter I actually thought Chantal to be kind of smart. Now I doubt that. And Billy's reaction isn't as much a surprise to me as it is to her. He'd saved her from an inevitable hillbilly beat-down, and possible rape for good measure, and then she mouths off. Instead of, oh, I don't know, being rescued!
W.T.H.Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 03:32 pm
I would have thought Chantal's skin was thicker than that. In that situation I might have felt used and I would have been peeved, but running out? Never that. I would have let Sarah have her dramatic moment and later on she would have gotten my view on the whole thing, and she would have known from then not to use me to prove a point. So, that confused me a bit.
And I'm wondering, how was Sarah ever in love with a man, if she's always been a Lesbian?Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/10 01:48 pm
Why doesn't Sarah just tell Billy and Jared and whoever else that she's a lesbian straight-up? I mean, dropping hints could lead to them thinking she's just experimenting, instead of what's right in front of 'em. Plus guys are... thick. Chantal is so pretty, and now I know where I knew her from. Scanned the comments and somebody pointed out that Cold Case episode. It's one of my favorites. She is Brilliant. Her parents seem nice enough, but I wonder how they really feel about Chantal and Sarah. It's one thing when you just know your daughter's a Lesbian, it's another thing when it's right there in your face. ^_^ I'm hoping they really are Cool. So, uh, yeah, I'm waiting for more. ♣Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/08/10 05:43 am
I really love this story.
Its really nice to see some other stories besides hetero relationships.
But can I ask, What is Chantel's real name?
I remember her from a episode of COLD CASE.
She played a lesbian on there too.
THanks fo the great read,
Author's Response: She's an actress named Tessa Thompson. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: Keikochan100 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 09:46 pm
So, Chantal is going on down to Texas. Aubrey, Texas. And they just had sex. I guess they have been going out for a while but the sex did throw me off a bit. I haven't been with them for very long (a chapter ~_~). so it just felt a little quick. Maybe a little rushed. But they seem good together. Muddin', that made me laugh out loud. Because I found out that my little brother's best friend is a redneck and he goes mud-digging. Do I even wanna know? My sentiments exactly. Other than asking that you make sure to re-read and build a little more on the scene, I'm totally into this. I'd like to see where these two girls go.
Billy is a super cute piece of pie, I don't know if I mentioned that before. ♥Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 08:41 am
Love it , can't wait for more .Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/10 07:30 pm
love it! finally something different. hope the story plays out well to the end.
Reviewer: lis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/10 03:05 am