Wow, drama, drama.
That take huge gutts to ask a favor like that but I understand where he stands.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/11 08:02 am
Jude how rude of you!!
Think his the one that acting like a school girl ^_^
Seems that Samara made a first great impression.
Liked it i'm on the next one.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/11 03:32 am
Ohh and the plot thickens. I like the interactions between all of the parties. Jude's attraction to Samara and vice versa is going to be interesting.
Again, this story is very easy to read. The transitions between paragraphs, and characters are seemless.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:55 pm
What is he asking of his brother, this is getting good. What does Noah and Mari do for a living? Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:28 pm
What is he asking of his brother, this is getting good. What does Noah and Mari do for a living? Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:28 pm
This is really good!! I'm totally hooked. Both brothers are so interesting and hot! It's exciting so see how Jude reacted to Samara. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I am glad that you are enjoying it. I am working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 07:40 pm
Great start . Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. I am finishing up the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 03:49 pm
I love this.
I'm not even going to guess where you are going because I don't want to be wrong. Please update frequently. Who have you cast as Samara? I can't quite make out the face.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. And I am a huge fan of your writing. Samara is soul singer Vivian Green. I am working on the next chpater, stay tunrd. Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 02:53 pm
Great update. Hope Jude gives Noah a chance. After 10yrs, he really needs to try to move on and stop dwelling on the past. Hmm, a spark between him and Samara huh. Wonder what the favor is????
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I know after 10 years and therapy Jude should be happier, maybe be he will be now that his brother is back in his life. The favor.heehehe..we'll just have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 04:35 am
I like the story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 3 is on deck. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 04:20 am
wow...good start. Samara and those sexy twins... i am so jealous. What is the favor that Noah needs from Jude?
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I know right sexy twins..drooling :-). Thank you for reading. Chapter 3 will be up shortly. the favor? hmm what could possibly need from Noah after all these years? Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 02:44 am
This is a very complex emotional story. I cant wait to see what transpires between Noah and Jude and Mari and Jude.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Chapter 3 is in the works,
[Report This]Date: 19/08/10 11:34 pm
I know that he's dying but did he really expect Jude to just welcome back and I forgive you. He stole three years of his life, jail is not a pretty place. He will always have the stain on his record so it's a good thing that he had his Uncle Pete. Russell is a traiter!!! I am loving this story already, it probably has something to do with Hugh being cast as both leads. The man is hot!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. lol @ Russell is a traitor. Hugh as the twins, nothing but hotness all day long. Chapter 3 will be out shortly.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/10 09:28 pm
I love this story. Oh my gosh..sexy twins..they are so hot!! Jude, Jude,...though shall not covet thy brothers wife...even if she sends your heart racing. Noah, you let your brother go to jail for you? Shame!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Jude is...going through something unexpected and Noah, is in the same boat. But the brothers will find away to reconcile before it's too late. Thank you for reading and commenting. I am working on the next chapter now. Reviewer: Macy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/10 09:01 pm
Really interesting story, starting off with a dying twin and Hugh Jackman clones..*drool* Great cast and I love their names, especially Samara. Can't wait for the next chapter - soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Next chapter is in the works, stay tuned. Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/10 07:42 pm
Oh yes, I'm going to like this story - very much and look forward to upcoming chapters!!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The comments help me to keep typing away. Chapter 3 is in the works.
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/10 07:20 pm