Surprised at Sammy reaction.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/11 08:58 am
Not trying to sound like a stalker. But I check the site several times a day looking to see if you have updated. If you have not consider it before, you really may want to publish the story as a complete book. I am not trying tell you how to run your life so please don’t be offended. Just stating that you are a good writer.
I know that there are several others who visit that site that feel the same. I look forward to an update whenever you have the time and patience to place one. Thank you in advance.
GREAT STORY I am not sure if I said that prior to asking for an update.
Author's Response:
Wow!! Thank you so much for supporting my efforts.
I am a novice and just started writing one day because I was tired of wasting money on reading books that lacked true romance or even a decent plot. It was like reading the same things over and over just with different character names. I was so happy when I came across this site and read all of the wonderful stories and for free; so I thought hey why not try it and here we are. I haven't thought about publishing so thank you for planting that seed.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/10 12:18 am
Please continue your writing. You can not leave us hanging..... Great story I love the story line.
Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:15 am
I am so liking the story. Please update soon. I am trying to figure out how the story will play out. I know I would like to see the brothers make up. I hope Jude gives his brothers wife a baby the old fashion way. Hell they can even comfort each other when Noah passes away and find love with each other.
Your rating is 100 in my book. We are only able to go to 10 here on the site.
Reviewer: Antonette Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:13 am
I LOVE THE STORY……
I have read all three that you posted to the site. I strongly disagree with you. You are a very good writer. You stories flow and are easy and very enjoyable to read.
You take the time and give each character great detail. It allows us to have a visual along with the written words. We as your faithful reader/followers are never left guessing. Well only when we wait for your latest updates.
You are gifted and bless us with your stories. If you are new to writing trust me when I say “YOU ARE THE BOMB!”. I have been reading romance novels for over twenty nine years (29). I started when I was fourteen (14). Your stories are better than some that I have paid money for.
I sit back and wait for the next update. I am sure that everyday life make take it’s toll. So once again thank you for the time and imagination you have taken to create wonderful works of written art.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 05:02 am
Please continue this story. I just came across it today. You are a gifted and talented writer thank you for sharing your gift with us. I would buy this if you wrote and sold as a book.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 01:14 am
I just found the this latest update, thank you I love this story. There is not amount of an apology that Noah could offer that give back to Jude what his lie took from him. I feel for Noah because he's lying but what he is doing to Jude is selfish!! Love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 09:33 pm
If you put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard) and tell of a world that only exists in your head then you are a writer.
On to the story.
Really enjoyed the flashback to the crime. Good to see both their perspectives because I was (and still am a little bit) finding it hard to feel for Noah. How could he let his brother serve his time, the plotting behind Jude and Samara's back...he is an interesting one.
Samara would view it as Jude's baby...interesting and thought-provoking.
I love this story and can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/10 05:09 am
Yay!!!! next update please! So Samara has Noah's ok to do the dead with Jude. Wow. I love the emotion of the characters, i feel it all. great job. this is a well written story, don't doubt that. Heep writing so that I can keep readying.
Reviewer: Stacey Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/10/10 10:47 pm
Well I think this was wonderful and have to disagree that you're not a real writer. So much emotion here that I could feel. I think this will only get better.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/10 12:40 am
I just adore this story, and your writing skills are awesome! Please update soon!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 11:55 pm
I love this story! great update. You have me hooked. I feel for Noah, wow it takes a very strong man to care about his wife's sexual satisfaction. I get what he is trying to do, he is brave. And Samara....wow lucky girl.
You a good writer! I feel everything that your characters do, so trust me..you have skills. Next chapter please :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 09:02 pm
This is a great story with lots of depth. I hope you continue writing it.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 03:49 pm
YAY, FINALLY!!! I have wanted so long for you and an update! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I hear you and understand you. There are many skillful writers on this site but you're good and unique. Your story has brought something different and is just as good! I truely enjoyed this chapter. I know Noah can be viewed as a selfish bastard but I love him, lol!...It's not going to be easy for the trio but I'm going to enjoy the read/ride to the end! Thank you! Hope you update soooon!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 11:25 am
Right now, I'm just doing the Happy dance because you are back posting!
Thanks again for sharing your gift of storytelling with us ! Did I say how much I love you writing ?
I really loved this chapter, and while I really feel for Jude, I am starting to empathize with Noah ( and I wasn't before)
Samara is a lucky woman , one brother love her dearly and dying, the other is in definite lust and living , and she can do the deed guilt free. Many women would envy her position!
I'm just wondering how this will end if it turns out Noah isn't terminal after all... Because now that the brother have mended fences, and there is no battle for the woman, what would happen if...?
Also,when will you update A New ? You know this story is very close to my heart, and I want to see where you take it next.
Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 10:24 am
I can't blame Samara for her initial reaction. I know Noah's heart is in the right place, but he seems so...i don't blase about the idea of her sleeping with his brother. I know he got choked up, but he just seemed so matter of fact.
Don't judge you're writing based on someone elses. Each writer grows at his/her own pace. I think you're doing a good job. :D
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 09:57 am
This is one great story. I absolutely love it. I love the conflict between the two brothers and the bond of them being twins. Please come back with an update soon. Can't wait to see how Jude finally forgives his brother and they find a way to make peace before Noah dies (if he dies). You are a very talented writer.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 09:54 am