I can't wait for more of this story, It is gooood! After readung this chapter I feel the need for the next chapter real sooon!
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 06:35 am
Great story so far. I'm interested to see where this headed. More please.
Reviewer: SassyKia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/08/10 04:43 am
I'M HOOKED!!! i love everything about this story - definitely looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: medicateme :) Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 02:05 am
Great update, and well written! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 12:39 am
Hmm what is the favor? Can I guess that it has something to do with Jude giving Samara a baby or just plan old giving it to her?
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/08/10 12:10 am
Ohh and the plot thickens. I like the interactions between all of the parties. Jude's attraction to Samara and vice versa is going to be interesting.
Again, this story is very easy to read. The transitions between paragraphs, and characters are seemless.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:55 pm
Great start, Kelly! I'm very interested to find out what this favor is. I think I have an idea but I'll continue to read before I put my two sense in :)
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:50 pm
Intriguing. I like your riding style, its very easy to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:39 pm
Im glad Jude is going to work towards having a relationship with Noah. Its going to be interesting what happens with Samara and Jude. I think Noah is going to eventually push her towards Jude to know that she is well taken care of when he is gone.
Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:09 pm
Maybe Noah wants to ask him to be a husband to his wife after he dies? I think that is the other matter that he wants to talk about.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:59 pm
Awesome update. Is this what Noah wanted to accomplish on this trip to reconcile with is brother, for him to take care of his wife, interesting?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:46 pm
What is he asking of his brother, this is getting good. What does Noah and Mari do for a living? Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:28 pm
What is he asking of his brother, this is getting good. What does Noah and Mari do for a living? Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:28 pm
Ten years is a long time to not have said something, and the first thing you say to him is you're dying. Why did he feel the need to lie in the first place and why did Jude take responsibility for it.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:16 pm
I really like this sentence:
"He always wanted a big family and had enhanced the ranch over the years in anticipation of the day that his big family would show up and claim him."
I really like the image behind it. Very nice.
And Noah refusing chemo is a thinker....hmm.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Yep Noah not wanting to lose his hair speaks to his vanity. I have two dear relatives who have bested cancer and the tales that I can tell about treatments and patients..well it would be a very lenghty one. To my surprise I learned that quite a bit of cancer patients refuse chemo treatments. Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:01 pm
This is really good!! I'm totally hooked. Both brothers are so interesting and hot! It's exciting so see how Jude reacted to Samara. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I am glad that you are enjoying it. I am working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 07:40 pm
Great start . Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. I am finishing up the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 03:49 pm
I love this.
I'm not even going to guess where you are going because I don't want to be wrong. Please update frequently. Who have you cast as Samara? I can't quite make out the face.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. And I am a huge fan of your writing. Samara is soul singer Vivian Green. I am working on the next chpater, stay tunrd. Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 02:53 pm
Great update. Hope Jude gives Noah a chance. After 10yrs, he really needs to try to move on and stop dwelling on the past. Hmm, a spark between him and Samara huh. Wonder what the favor is????
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I know after 10 years and therapy Jude should be happier, maybe be he will be now that his brother is back in his life. The favor.heehehe..we'll just have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 04:35 am
I like the story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 3 is on deck. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 20/08/10 04:20 am
Me likey. This story started with a bang!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 20/08/10 04:07 am
wow...good start. Samara and those sexy twins... i am so jealous. What is the favor that Noah needs from Jude?
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I know right sexy twins..drooling :-). Thank you for reading. Chapter 3 will be up shortly. the favor? hmm what could possibly need from Noah after all these years? Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 02:44 am
This is a very complex emotional story. I cant wait to see what transpires between Noah and Jude and Mari and Jude.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Chapter 3 is in the works,
[Report This]Date: 19/08/10 11:34 pm
I know that he's dying but did he really expect Jude to just welcome back and I forgive you. He stole three years of his life, jail is not a pretty place. He will always have the stain on his record so it's a good thing that he had his Uncle Pete. Russell is a traiter!!! I am loving this story already, it probably has something to do with Hugh being cast as both leads. The man is hot!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. lol @ Russell is a traitor. Hugh as the twins, nothing but hotness all day long. Chapter 3 will be out shortly.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/10 09:28 pm