This is a great story with lots of depth. I hope you continue writing it.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/10/10 03:49 pm
YAY, FINALLY!!! I have wanted so long for you and an update! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I hear you and understand you. There are many skillful writers on this site but you're good and unique. Your story has brought something different and is just as good! I truely enjoyed this chapter. I know Noah can be viewed as a selfish bastard but I love him, lol!...It's not going to be easy for the trio but I'm going to enjoy the read/ride to the end! Thank you! Hope you update soooon!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 11:25 am
Right now, I'm just doing the Happy dance because you are back posting!
Thanks again for sharing your gift of storytelling with us ! Did I say how much I love you writing ?
I really loved this chapter, and while I really feel for Jude, I am starting to empathize with Noah ( and I wasn't before)
Samara is a lucky woman , one brother love her dearly and dying, the other is in definite lust and living , and she can do the deed guilt free. Many women would envy her position!
I'm just wondering how this will end if it turns out Noah isn't terminal after all... Because now that the brother have mended fences, and there is no battle for the woman, what would happen if...?
Also,when will you update A New ? You know this story is very close to my heart, and I want to see where you take it next.
Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 10:24 am
I can't blame Samara for her initial reaction. I know Noah's heart is in the right place, but he seems so...i don't blase about the idea of her sleeping with his brother. I know he got choked up, but he just seemed so matter of fact.
Don't judge you're writing based on someone elses. Each writer grows at his/her own pace. I think you're doing a good job. :D
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 09:57 am
This is one great story. I absolutely love it. I love the conflict between the two brothers and the bond of them being twins. Please come back with an update soon. Can't wait to see how Jude finally forgives his brother and they find a way to make peace before Noah dies (if he dies). You are a very talented writer.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/10 09:54 am
Really love this story, I hope you update soon cheers
Reviewer: Dela Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/10/10 01:30 am
wow!!! my heart aches for Jude..i know noah is dying but jude's hurts seem so far reaching...great chapter, next please :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/09/10 10:22 pm
Wow. I suspected that Noah wanted Jude to father a kid with Samara. I did not suspect the method or anticipate Jude's issue which is completely believable, by the way.
Really can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/09/10 04:54 am
That was so good. I actually felt Jude's pain. Ok Noah I get your position but you really need to discuss your wife having a baby by your brother with um...your wife. I just came across this story and I love it!!! Next chapter soon rather than later. Great job with the drama I love it!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/10 03:46 am
Damn! - this was such a wonderful chapter! Love the interaction between the brothers and between Samara and Jude! And Noah is kind of being selfish...god, you have to update soooon! I can't wait!!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/09/10 01:49 pm
That was good, I know that he's dying but Jude spent 3 years in the big house for a crime that he didn't commit. I don't blame him for his reaction, I ain't going to jail for anyone. Family aint all that special, and he had done just fine with his Noah's presence in his life. With that being said, he should forgive his brother for himself and no one else. Jude need to have peace, an done way is to forgive that lying sack of shit!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/09/10 12:32 am
This was really,however, I Was hoping for another chapter. It ended to soon! I could not read some of the part about being in prison and what he went through due to personal reasons and also find it to disturbing!! I an looking forward to an update soon, I hope!!!
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/10 08:16 am
Wow, what an intense update. I loved it!!! But my heart goes out to Jude. Sad what he suffered but hope they can all make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/10 08:11 am
Jude was right about Noah. I sort of understand Noah's pov, but he should have told him wife. I don't think she's appreciate him pimping her out.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/10 03:02 am
Awesome!!!! Can't wait to hear Samara's thoughts on having a baby with Jude.
Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/10 11:11 pm
I'm loving this story, can't wait until the next chapter. I know Jude is dying,but I feel more for Noah. keep up the great work. Hopefully the next chapter is coming soon!!!
Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/10 10:23 pm
This story is really good. The emotion between Jude and Noah and Jude story had me shedding a tear.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/10 05:59 pm
i'm liking this story. awesome tension. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/10 02:49 am
I'M REALLY ENJOING THIS STORY .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/10 06:36 pm
Oh my god...that was the hotness. I love this story and Hugh Jackman as twins...yummy. Keep writing and I can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: mocasoul Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 06:16 am
Loved it!! Hmm, Samara and Jude seem to be thinking about dangerous territory. Can't wait to see what happens there.... Hope Noah and Jude can make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 02:23 am
I'm so loving the twin story. I have twins in my family and the idea of twins being inseparable and two people sharing the same spirit, is so on point.
Since Noah was unable to give Samara a child, is that the favor he wants to ask his twin? After all since they share each others pain, is it possible that Noah knew his twin would also be equally attracted to his wife? Introducing Samara to his twin is also a way of ensuring that neither of them are alone once Noah passes.
Looking forward to the next installment~
[Report This]Date: 23/08/10 12:19 am
Great start...is he going to want his brother to marry his wife after he is gone?
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 05:46 pm
HOT!! HAUTE!! HAWT!! Oh man...Jude and Samara? Is this the favor Noah wants? wow...they are both hot for each other..is that why Noah told Jude to meet his wife before he says no to his favor? More please..I need more sooner rather than later. Great Job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 05:41 pm
Oh my...Samara and Jude are "feeling" each other and if that's Noah's plan then kudos to him but still...I got a knot in my tummy when I read she O:d to Jude on her mind and that's a good thing, lol! It shows I have developed an attachment with your characters and that's after 3 chs! I'm amazed!...Looking forward to the couple's stay at the ranch and with Samara and Jude having a hard to time keeping their minds off each other - who knows how it will go...Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 09:46 am