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Title: Confessions Part 2


Is this story eventually going to be continued? I'd like to know where it's eventually going.

Reviewer: Leighsi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/06/15 11:20 am

Title: Confessions Part 2

Love the story. Please finish it!

Reviewer: justprecious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/13 06:48 am

Title: Confessions Part 2

i so love this story, and i really would like to  see a happy ending.  i kinda dig ian,  i think i love him too.

Reviewer: dreamama Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/13 01:00 pm

Title: Confessions Part 2

I'm surprised that Ethan's mother sustains a picture on her apartment wall of her father who sexually abused her and indicates she still loves him.  That does not speak well for her own state of wellness, not that she should be steeped under the burden of hate and resentment, however???

Anyway, Oliva needs to careful in reveailing any truths about Ethan's mental problem to his mother, I'd rather she reveal it to the psychiatrist because mom may not be really stable and trustworthy.

Also, although Ethan/Olivia sexing was brief it was still HOT!  

Thank you for this Update!


Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/12 10:55 am

Title: It all leads to this

Oh my! I am a little late to this story, but it has hooked me instantly. It's like Mr. Hyde's lover is writing a letter to Dr. Jeckell. A very steamy, very twisted, yet very sweet letter. 

Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 12:08 pm

Title: Confessions Part 2

First let me say that I fucking love this story!!! The narrator view is a bit unorthodox but it absolutely works. Its raw and gritty and has the right mix of sex and insanity!!! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 07:38 pm

Title: Confessions Part 2

oh yes! when i saw this update it made my day! i have missed this story ( and teenage dream *hint, hint, wink, wink* so glad Liv listened to Jean because i sure as don't trust Ian...! don't how it will end but damn i look forward to the next update (hopefully soon *cough*) thanks!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 12:14 pm

Title: Confessions Part 2

WOW!!! This entire story is amazing. I'm so glad I took the time to read it. Mental health disorders are really hard in relationships. I cant wait to see how Olivia will deal with everything. I am looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/11 05:58 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

  Poor Olivia-she's definitely between a rock and a hard place. Ethan is her friend, her roomie...and Ian-well there ain't no denying the chemistry between them is hawt!! With a capital A-W buuuuuuuut I think she should tell the truth. I'm fond of the honesty is the best policy thing. I'm not gonna get upset if that's not how the story goes though...I wanna see this through til the end ^^ 

Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/07/11 11:55 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

Great story! I want moooreee!!! :D Please post the next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: fruit_candy89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 11:42 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

please update soon

Reviewer: Anya_Iris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 07:30 am

Title: Possession


I liked the piece u started out with and the story was hot!!!!

Reviewer: AubreySimone Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 04:20 am

Title: Confessions part 1

So, this mental illness split-personality that Ethan has, unbeknownst to himself, he's had since he was a child.  But, Ian is not just a very affectionate cool lover he is also cruelly destructive to others, Ethan needs help because what further destruction will Ian do?  


Olivia loves both Ian and Ethan, but now her love must also also be a helpmate!  However, now is not the time to tell on Ian because, Ethan is in emotional turmoil at this knowledge coupled with the emotional onslaught of being unexpectedly in the presence of his worst enemy, his vicious mother.  He's probably in fearful panic and strongly needs to depend that he has one friend there with him, Olivia; if she now tells on Ian, Ethan will feel betrayed and surrounded by enemies.   Olivia should delay her answer until she can privately talk to Ethan and possibly also the Doctor in private.  


She can pretend confusion at the Doctor's question and this "surprising" news about Ethan, to the extent that she wants time to really review his actions to determine if there was anything abnormal, as opposed to just eccentric.  Also, cause further delay by questioning the Doctor as to why he wants this review of Ethan, especially since his mentally ill mother is not a reliable witness and what will be his therapeutic actions.


After, both mother and Doctor are gone talk to Ethan and tell him about Ian.  Acknowledge him about his need for help, then he will also see that in her he has a dependable friend to give him support along the way.  


Thank you Thespiandiva for this very interesting update.  I greatly enjoy this story and have much affection for Ian/Olivia/Ethan.  So glad this story is continuing!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/11 03:00 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

I am on vaca in Mexico reading your story.  That should tell you how I feel-  I love it, just make the updates longer please.

Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/02/11 07:12 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

I just started this story and I have to say I LOVE IT!

I hope she says something so that Ethan/Ian could get the help that he needs.  Him and his mom might be bipolar but they chose their split personality to fit the traumatic experience in their lives.

His mom bitchy dope head persona came about as a way to protect herself from every being on the brunt of someone else temper.  His father leaving her when he found out she was pregnant set his into motion. 

I believe the Ethan persona is fake.  It seems like it was put into place because thats who he believed he was.  he believe he was a wimp, cry baby, and not man enough just like his mother said.  A child should listen to their mother and thats who Ethan is. Ian is his protector who fights for what he feels belong to him...LOVE.

Their not too far off from one another as we saw in his sex scene with Erica.  E/I both want Liv, Ian just has the courage to claim her which would explain why he is showing up more and more.  ian is who Ethan really wants to be, a confident and dominant person.

What is it that Liv likes more in Ian that she does not see in Ethan? Is it his confidence and his ability to express himslef?

Sorry for the long review but this story speaks to me since I am a Psyche major.  I cannot wait for the update.


Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/02/11 03:10 am

Title: Confessions part 1

MORE MORE MORE !!!! Can't wait to see what happens next !!!!! Please don't make me wait so long for an update .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 04:33 pm

Title: Confessions part 1

YAAAAY, been missing this story like crazy!!! XD

i hope Olivia tells the truth. Ethan needs help and deserves to become "a whole person." however i don't think Oliva will do it. at least not yet...look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 11:33 am

Title: Confessions part 1

WTH??? Is he a sociopath???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 05:34 am

Title: Confessions part 1

You are so talented. I like this story a lot.

Reviewer: Aimee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 04:11 am

Title: Confessions part 1

Wow, what a choice to make!!! Poor Olivia...... But Ethan is in denial. Sigh. Deep denial. 

Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 02:00 am

Title: Head Games

OH!  So Ethan has a split personality and his alter's name is Ian and Ian is doing all this other sex life with Olivia but also wants OLivia romantically but he interferes with Ethan's ability to really be into his own girlfriend!  Yeah, this is mysteriously weird and HOT!

This also reminds me of that old 1960's song:  "He's got a split personality!  Oh, I've got two lovers and I ain't ashamed, love them both the same, cause both of them are you."


Yeah!  Mary Wells sang that and it was called "Two Lovers"

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 05:49 am

Title: Love and other drugs

I feel sorry for Olivia she's almost in love with a ghost since Ian is Ethan's alter, he's not real.

And Ian is in love with Olivia and fears losing her, probably because he knows his existence is rather temporary, since its dependent on Ethan.

What a perilous romance for these two!

Great story, I LOVE IT!  Anxious for next update!  

Thank you Thespiandiva 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 01:32 pm

Title: The Breaking Point

AH!  That was good, Olivia I think may just go after her man, even though he is an alter ego;  HELL! figure it out later!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 01:16 pm

Title: Distractions

This is crazy, Ethan wants amnesiac sex with Olivia again; and if I were her I probably would start being afraid of Ethan.  


I am so glad you have finally given the main two characters of this story names; Ethan and Olivia.  It was really irritating, they had no identity, constantly referring to them as he and her, I was getting a little dizzy!  I even started wondering if Jean was the "her" referred to.


Not good to keep the reader in that confusion for nearly 5 chapters.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 12:46 pm

Title: Alive

So Ethan suffers from childhood abuse and it was then his black out of memory began?  This story is very intriguing but from pictures given are any of them Ethan or the girl roommate that is his friend whom he has un-remembered sex with?  I wish this was not in question for me.

That was so HOT in a weird way that he could not climax with his girlfriend because he wants to have sex with his friend/roommate so he goes into bathroom and fantasizes about sex with her and has his huge climax.  But, doesn't know his fantasies are real. 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 11:55 am

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