So I take it his has Dissociative Identity Disorder? I suppuse its because of his childhood trauma.
Olivia is sort of flat. I'm liking Ian, but some of their 'feelings' don't really make any sense.
Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 05/10/10 08:42 am
"O" my gosh. I love it! It's so hot, creepy, and intense. More please and soon! Thanks.
Reviewer: Shanee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/10/10 07:43 am
THIS SHOULD BE VERY interesting. I personally would not fool around with crazy boy that can be very dangerous for them both. Can't wait to see where this is going.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/10/10 03:49 am
Well we are not Ethan now, so is this the evil twin playing around in his head waiting for the next update Thank you.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/10/10 03:42 am
Oh hell!!!! The man has a split personality.. This can't be good.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/10/10 03:28 am
I love Eth--I mean Ian!!! *swoons*Now if only the guy that I liked would just take me, damn it! LOL.
Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/10/10 02:52 am
I think Jean already knows about Olivia's feelings for Ethan. o: And I'm also going to assume that Ethan has some sort of Schitzophrenia.
Aaron Johnson...I *knew* he was familiar! I think I love him even more now. XD I can't wait until the next update. ^_^
Date: 23/09/10 02:48 am
I can't say that I didn't see this coming. Looking forward to their next conversation, because they really do need one.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/10 04:23 am
Hmm, interesting story so far.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/10 01:16 am
Oh...hell! I did NOT see that coming! That explains a lot, lol! Hope you update soon. Will be interesting to see Liv's reaction's to that news
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 11:29 am
Oh My God! I can't handle the suspence!
Reviewer: Aimee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 04:03 am
i am to excited to see where your story leads.. keep up the work girl!
Reviewer: utterlydivine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 04:00 am
So I see we have a multiple personality thing going on right now. This should be interesting. I loved the Vicky/Tori/Princess/Jean/Tommy on One Life to Live. I'm down for the ride.
Bring it on Baby!
Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 02:13 am
GREAT!!!!! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/10 12:25 am
He must have a split personality or something. Childhood trauma can bring them on. It would be different if he weren't aware of what he was doing in the moment, but he does know. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks! hmmm..... we'll see. :)
[Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:50 am
It was pretty intense, but I don't understand why she's so into him. Yeah, he's a good lay, but so far nothing else. She's stupid if she thinks he doesn't remember, unless he has a split personality.
Author's Response: well.... i can't exactly say but... :)
[Report This]Date: 20/09/10 02:39 am
WTH??? Ethan was abused as a child??? Still doesn't clarify or justify what he's doing.
Author's Response: i just wanted to give a little of his back story, it'll make a lot of sense in the future.
[Report This]Date: 19/09/10 09:57 am
More Proof that not everyone is meant to be a parent. Great story .Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/10 01:52 pm
Wow so Ethan thinks he is to damaged to love Olivia the way she should be loved? Or does he think he will be abusive? Great update.
Author's Response: he has a lot of shame and low self esteem. lets hope she can cure him of that.
[Report This]Date: 17/09/10 02:23 am
That was powerful
Author's Response: Thank you JJ!
[Report This]Date: 14/09/10 03:56 am
Hmm, just abit weird but its still got my attention. Why can't the connection be broken??? She is selling herself short as it seems to be all about sex/lust and not love.
Author's Response: i know it seems that way now, but i hope i can clear that stuff up for you baha. :)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/10 01:28 am
This story sure started with a bang!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks baha!
[Report This]Date: 09/09/10 01:15 am
Great start!! Keep it coming. Cant wait to see if she gets her man or moves on.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09/09/10 12:41 am
Yeah this was hot! So I'm going to need you to puc some quick on that next update? Yes? Yes!
I can't wait to see the juicy goodness you have in sotre for us!
Author's Response: Thanks Sebine! i hope you like whats next! Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/09/10 08:58 pm
So Sexy!!! I can't wait to read more.I wanna see what's going on with these two . More Please.
Author's Response: Thanks! i hope to have another chapter out soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/10 06:14 pm