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Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

I'm loving the story. Please, please, please, please, please update! That's right six pleases.

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/11 11:02 pm

Title: Cast

Hey, your story is really good, PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE IT!

Reviewer: I Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/11 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

I'm rating it a ten because I am loving this story!!!

Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 05:57 pm

Title: Cast

may I say addictive. kept me intriqued and wanting Frank is 1 hot alpha # can't wait 4 more . this sory is sooooo good has me hooked. so more pleaz keep on bringin it.

Author's Response:

Yes, Frank is so alpha and addictive!

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/04/11 07:11 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

please continue love the story and the cast



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/04/11 02:48 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

great



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 08:13 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

Loved the update. Wow, Frank was getting down. A pity they woke up!! They definitely have the hots for each other. Can't wait until they make it official.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 06:51 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

loved it soo glad to finally see an update thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You're so welcome!

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:45 am

Title: Cast

So, good to see you writing again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Cimmy1!

 

I'm glad to be writing again also!

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 

 

 

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:10 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Three-The Past

ooooo frank won't know what hit him when he see rachel in that dress and those shoes she going to rock his world. Frank lesson one never ever ever teast a woman we don't like that lol.  I can't belive her nana gave her a sex book lol. glad you update miss this story and thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Yes, Frank will not know what hit him.

Grand-mere is a Jill of all trades lol.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 01:54 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

please update

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 02:40 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

I want a bodyguard like Frank.

Author's Response:

Girl, so do I lol! 

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 07:22 am

Title: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

Marcus was hilarious. Love her grand-mere. Can't wait to hear how she knows his family. Wonderful update.

Author's Response:

Marcus is h.a.m (hot ass mess) but I love writing him.  Grand-mere is the glue holding it all together.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 06:21 am

Title: Chapter One

Loving it so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 05:53 am

Title: Prologue

I like it. I didn't read the original one. She will need protection now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 05:46 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

wow can this man get more sexy. He helps with the center and pays for everything . He save rachel not once but twice and he took control oooooooo sexy. I wouldn't mind that man spakinkg me lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hey WWE!

Oh yes, frank is a very sexy  and in control man lol. As for the spanking. . . wait and see lol

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 05:39 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

Good job on this chapter. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 04:49 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

Rachel needs to learn to listen! Can't wait until they make it official.

Author's Response:

Yes, Rachel is very headstrong, but so is Frank lol.

 

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 03:40 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

Wow, Frank, just wow. He's ALL Alpha. Let's see if he continue to resist the pull to Rachel. And there will be more fireworks with them clashing so much.

Marcus is a hot ass mess.

I so enjoy when you update this story.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Frank ain't no joke lol.

Marcus is the orginal H.A.M. lol.  The thing he is going to do.  . .crazy lol

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 02:57 am

Title: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

this is awful.  you need to learn to spell check.  your beta nneds to do better.

Author's Response:

Bless your heart. 

I'm sorry that you feel that way.  You have a right to your opinion. 

BUT my beta June does above and beyond for reviewing this story before I post it.  She does one DAMN FANTASTIC job and I appriciate it.  She has a LOT going on and for her to take her time to do this is FANTASTIC.

Hey, you can read/dislike my stories or not. Cool, but DO NOT go after my beta June!  It is rude, crude and socially unacceptable.

Chel

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

I like this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 06:38 am

Title: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

ABSOLOUTLY LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS REVAMP.

At first when I saw revamp, I thought, 'oh no not another one of those blatent copy cat tales from lazy writers.' But you have seriously made me fall in love with it!!! I think I may even just prefer this version to the original!!!!!!!!!

I love the character developments, I especially love that Rachel is not a bitch with a chip on her shoulder. I love how you have totally made Whitney housten's portrayal of her totally different from yours. It makes the story, newer, fresher and more modern. I feel like I can really connect to it more.

I am soooooooooooooo excited for this story and I really cannot wait for more updates *wink wink*

You are an amazing amazing writer and I am totally and irrevocably in love with the story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment!  I'm trying to do it justice lol.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: dazed Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/10 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

WEL,WELL,WELL. Those two should have come together and stayed back when they were younger. To bad, wish those were his kids. Can they be? That would be nice.Can't wait for the updates. Welcome back!!! I know what a struggle it can be to get it right :0).

Author's Response:

It will all become clearer.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 01:25 pm

Title: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

Chel you are a trip one minute I am laughing and the next I am frowning.

Poor Frank is going to suffer so much because he has met the woman of his dreams and she is off limits for numerious reasons. A less honorable man would not think twice about tapping that ass.

Rachel has remained sweet and caring despite the obvious disdain of her parents and neglect of her brother who hasn't seen fit to stand up to their parents on her behalf.

Thank goodness for her Grand-Mere, Mr. Etienne and Marcus or she would be totally beaten down by her mother who sounds like a hot mess. Although maybe Rachel had better come clean to Frank about Marcus before he kills him.

Loving it girl don't keep us hanging again. I missed these characters and their drama.

  



Author's Response:

Hey June!

Yeah, they got a lot to work through in the past and the present. 

Rachel is going to need that support system for what's to come. . .

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BETA'ING THIS STORY!  I APPRICIATE MORE THAN YOU COULD EVER KNOW!

Chel

 

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 05:52 pm

Title: Chapter One

First I gotta say London Ramada! Is she blonde by any chance? Girl you are all kinds of wrong for that I love it! Magic T is a trip and I can't wait to see more of him. Rachel is a strong lady and I hope that she doesn't turn into one of those Divas. She can be a little divalicious but I get the feeling Frank can handle that. Glad to see Big Sexy back! 



Author's Response:

Hey June!

I'll never tell about London Ramada lol.  She may make another apperance, but don't hold me to it.

Rachel has a LOT of Diva in her but she's never ran into a man like Frank!  

I LOVE working Dave I mean working with Dave. Yeah that's it.

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 

 

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 05:08 pm

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