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Title: 2. New Arrival

This pretty much let us know how much she actually loves Karl.  I mean she just kiss a guy that she has just met and on top of that he is her boyfriend's roomate WTH!.

Reviewer: tragicheaven Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/11 09:07 am

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

Great start!!  I'm intrigued by this.  This roomate situation could go either great or terrible wrong and I'm looking foward to see how it goes.

Reviewer: tragicheaven Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/07/11 08:30 am

Title: 3. Taking Risks

Aw, sad to see Karl being hurt when he loves Mimi dearly. Both guys are hotties and it will be a further blow to Karl when he finds out about Mimi's feelings for Alessi.

Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 03:18 pm

Title: 3. Taking Risks

I feel really bad for Karl. she should have told the truth granted she is attracted to alesso and it will be awkward if she at the penthouse. I get the feeling its only a matter of time before the hook up. Loving your story and looking for the next update.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:42 am

Title: 2. New Arrival

Oh you know how to mix it up with the drama. Kissing her boyfriends new roomate. Connecting with his mother. Oh oh can t wait for the next update.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:39 am

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

I m looking forward to the next update. Great start.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:38 am

Title: Cast

Beautiful cast.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 05:37 am

Title: 3. Taking Risks

I like your story! Mimi really blew it with Karl plus kissing his roommate not good! Mimi is confused but she needs to decide how she really feels and what she wants.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 11:37 pm

Title: 3. Taking Risks

Sorry to hear about your difficult times and hope everything is on the way it should be.

Thank you for continuing this story.  Mimi is not a mature 21 yr old and doesn't seem to understand her boyfriend very well.  I look forward to the next update on how they move forward.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 05:55 pm

Title: 3. Taking Risks

uh oh - mimi sounds like a heartbreaker. dont trust. i dont think she knows how she is feeling about karl, and is out to prove something. please update soon! really lurviiin it!!

Reviewer: kelly Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 03:36 pm

Title: 2. New Arrival

omg LOVE it....cant believe mimi! *sigh* alessio sounds just as gorgeous as he looks, keep it up!

Reviewer: kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 03:35 pm

Title: Cast

wow alessio is a hottie!

Reviewer: kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 03:33 pm

Title: 2. New Arrival

Are you going to update?

Author's Response:

yes, I just have. Sorry I've been really busy :) hope you like it

Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 01:58 pm

Title: Cast

Please update this story, it's been a while...

Reviewer: beep Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 02:47 am

Title: 2. New Arrival

I see I was wrong it wasn't the man in the club. I am a little surprised that she was kissing the new rommmate already. I have to say Karl seems a little pushy to me though. Great update.

Author's Response:

Well, lets just say the man in the club will make his return somehow :) Glad you liked it, hope it keeps getting better for you.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 05:12 am

Title: 2. New Arrival

I see I was wrong it wasn't the man in the club. I am a little surprised that she was kissing the new rommmate already. I have to say Karl seems a little pushy to me though. Great update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 05:12 am

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

I'm wondering if the guy at the bar is going to be the new roommate. She doesn't seem like she is ready to make the ultimate commitment to him. Great beginning.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 02:06 am

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

I'm wondering if the guy at the bar is going to be the new roommate. She doesn't seem like she is ready to make the ultimate commitment to him. Great beginning.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 02:06 am

Title: Cast

Beautiful cast pics.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 01:47 am

Title: 2. New Arrival

I'm Loving this story. I have a feeling that Mimi is gonna do everything to forget about the kiss but Alessio not gonna let her. Can't Wait for update.

Author's Response:

Im glad, you're loving it :) Hope it gets better....just made a new update

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 02:16 am

Title: 2. New Arrival

Loving it!!! So we know the boyfriend it cheating correct??

Please lets have the next chapter soon!!!



Author's Response:

Hmmm - Karl is cheating? No he's not. Mimi is cheating on him.

Just added the new chapter :) hope you like it - let me know what you think.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 06:47 pm

Title: 2. New Arrival

Ahhh! I thought the kissing part and almost going further than that was unexpected and too soon. I mean they just met and she did not care she was dating Karl and forgot all about it!! I see there is going to be a Huggge problem between her and Karl and Alession. All three of them! The questions are rolling and forming in mind the next outcomes to come in this story. I she could have both men that would be NIce!!! However, I find Alessio as the more caring, loving , be there boyfriend more than Karl!! Karl is self centered and selfish, depending and manupilative. I would however see things slow down between her and Alessio!!! I also would like to see her Grow Alot of courage about letting her Father know who she is Dating despite what he feels and think!! It is her life and he lived his already!! I hope she becomes a stronger character in this EXposive DRAMA!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 06:34 am

Title: Cast

Interesting....I love it so far continue please

Reviewer: Miss_Carmel_smootee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/09/10 08:58 pm

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you find it more interesting a long the way :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 08:46 am

Title: 1. Birthday Wishes

I like that Mimi is just as wealthy as Karl. Although I get the feeling that she's not as into him, as he is to her.  

Karl doesn't like people touching what's his. Hmm, me smells jealous, possessive boyfriend.

Hmm. I have a feeling sex Pen guy, will be Karl's roommate.

 

 

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback! :)

You may be onto something.... I hope you find the story more interesting as it goes along!

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/10 11:56 pm

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