This is so sad but I'm glad u made a sequeal to the original one. Tyler loves Keisha in a sick, demented way. I hope Will and Keisha are able to ge together. I also hope that Keisha doesn't let Tyler into her mind by him saying she was just like him. What happened to Tyler to make him the kind of man he is now? Will there be help for him? Will he attempt another prison break and find Keisha again OMG what will happen next?
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Date: 24/05/13 02:19 am
Wonderful story, update please.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/03/11 04:45 am
I just discover this story, Excellent........................Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 06:14 pm
OMG!!! This story was the shiznic....You have another coming after this one right. That ending had me on the edge of my seat and Julie's promise that Tyler would get the death penalty and a speedy one. I wonder if they took him back to the same prison he was in before since he knows the escape routes or was that all Mack.
Tyler is one sick cookie and he survived all those stabs and still lived though in critical condition.
Thanks for sharing yoru imagination this could be a movie. Better the some of the others I've seen of this genre.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 11:54 pm
It can't end like this!
There are so many unanswered questions.
You have to write a third part. please.
I love a good thriller.
thank you :)
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Date: 02/11/10 10:45 pm
Dying and still talking crazy, Tyler is certifiable.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 06:07 am
I really hope you won't take this the wrong way, but I really did not understand the point of this story. I really like the first story, but this one was like, I don't know. Nothing really excited happened in it. Just torturing the whole time and it was like getting old and a little boring. There wasn't much drama. Just Tyler speaking stupid things and stabbing with a spike. You didn't reveal anything about why Tyler like to torture people and you make Will seems like he is stupid or something. I was really excited for this sequel, but i expected a little more. The first one was way better.Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/10 04:39 am
If Keisha kills Tyler she will be giving him what he wants. I can understand her anger, but she is better than that. He wants her to be like him a killer, please do not allow that to happen. Time for the police to come to the rescue. Now Jade need to die and I was pleased Tyler was the one who killed her. You are a great writer, thank you. Is there some type of feeling between Will and Keisha? Was Will just waitnig until Keisha was ready for a relationship? It would be nice if he help in the rescue. Be her knight in armor type of thing.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 06:42 am
Okay I am going to say this. Please don’t hold it against me.
I almost feel sorry for Tyler.. I know. He loves Keisha but he hurts her physically and mentally. I was hoping at one point the would have gotten rid of Will (set him free), not kill him. Then tried to make it up to Keisha. There have been case when the kidnapped falls in love with the kidnapper. Not sure what the correct name is. I know I sounds crazy but it was wishful thinking. Thanks for a terrific update. Earlier I wanted it to end now I am sad that it its almost over. You really are talented. Thank you again for taking the time and energy to write and share your story.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 05:51 am
I am not sure of what else to say. THANK YOUReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 05:32 am
That was a great update and I am nglad to see Keisha get some fight in her. Tyler is crazy son of a biscuit!!! I am so glad that he kill Jade but I wanted Keisha to kill Jade.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:57 am
Waiting for the next updateReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:09 am
You are taking a good story and turning it bad. You have all the components to make it great. Please stop dragging it out. Tyler and Jade are crazy. They get off on pain and humiliating others. We your readers get that. How much pain and suffering does Keisha have to endure? She had an abortion after the first rape and torturing at Tyler’s hand. You are making Will appear less of a man. He is bound and uable to help himself or his friend. Please this is not meant to be judgmental or critical. I really loved the first story. Was happy to see that you did are part II. It is just time to end it.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 02:04 am
How are you going to leave us wondering what happened next. It’s Halloween we waited to see who was going to die and how they are going to get away from the crazies. Please update again soon .Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/10 01:54 am
*sigh*. This story had so much potential but then Jade and Will came into the picture... Too bad.Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/10/10 02:20 pm
okay... if Tyler knows that the police are on his trail....why has he not moved to a new location? Please allow Jade and Tyler to be punished. I was hoping she stake him in the eye as he turned around. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/10 01:21 am