I hope she pushed it through his back. She's a real fool if she didn't. She should have keep stabbing him with the spike until he's dead.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 11:08 pm
She didn't stab Tyler in the place, she stabbed in the artery in his neck. So he pulled it out he would bleed to death. I want those crazy aholes dead. Thanks for the update it was much appreciated.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 08:19 pm
I love this story can't wait for another update, i love dark obsessive love stories like this, your doing a great job
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/10/10 06:52 pm
Is it wrong of me to have screamed and wanted Keisha to have stabbed Tyler in the throat or head so we can get the HELL out of there and just leave him there?!...keep it coming. Somehow I sense we reaching the end - thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 11:57 am
Can Tyler and Jade die already...I mean, c'mon...this torture of their victims is just so sick...and the sick puppies get off on inflicting pain on others...it's not enough that they plan on killing them...but they have to humiliate and slowly turn the knife (okay, spikes) while they are doing it...death is almost too good a punishment for their evil ways...glad to see Keisha trying to fight back...and even though Tyler acts like her aborting his baby wasn't such a big deal...I could tell that got under his skin...but Will really needs to shut up...he's making the situation worse for the both of them...I still can't figure out why no one knows as yet they're missing...you'd think there'd be an APB out if a sicko like Tyler escaped in real life...I just want Tyler and Jade to suffer...I almost can't take anymore of them...great update...awaiting more...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 02:06 pm
Another great update! I wished Tyler & Jade got a taste of their on medicine. Death is too nice - thanks for the update! I hope help comes soon because I can't take it anymore, lol! And Tyler - stay away from Will!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 11:15 am
Oh man!!! Please KILL those two sickos!!! How is it that no one has realised they are missing??? Can the tables be turned on Tyler and Jade??? They need abit of their own medicine. Urgh!!! I'm sooo mad right now!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 07:54 am
Another great update.
I really loved Keisha fighting back and getting into Tyler's head. Jade is just nasty. I still don't like Will for some reason. I really wish Tyler would stop stabbing Keisha in the leg...I know he's a psycho but gawd...I cringe everytime he does it.
Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 07:34 am
Jade is a sick shit!!! Ooooh Please let Tyler suffer this time around. He thinks he's too smart and needs to be taken down a notch or TWO!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 07:13 am
Keisha was total Kick Ass. Loved it.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 07:02 am
Great update. I like Keisha the fighter.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 06:34 am
Oh Will, dude you need to shutup. LOL. You are chained to a chair, withouth any way of escaping. You are making things worse for the both of you.
I hope Keisha tortures Tyler this time. I think that's the only way she might be free of him, after everythings said and done. I'm happy that she's growing a little more backbone, and standing up to him like she had previously.
I want to know how Tyler really feels about the abortion.
What if Tyler got her pregnant, moved them to an another location, and held her hostage until she had the baby. I saw something like that ona Lifetime movie. Lifetime *cringe*
It would have been a more complex story if she'd actually kept the child. Maybe her child lives with her parents. She could escape, but he's not caught and he discovers the truth, and that would lead to a trilogy and a different story. Ok, just ignore me. LOL My imagination is getting the best of me.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 24/10/10 03:59 am
Well...... I did not see that coming :o
great update!
Keep it comin!
Please.............
Reviewer: Shanee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/10/10 04:39 pm
^Oops, there is no editing button but I meant to say Will/Keisha instead of Tyler/Will. lol
Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/10 09:05 am
This is very interesting story, I'm loving it. For some odd reason...I kind of wish Tyler wasn't such a sick evil twisted bastard. I like the idea of Tyler/Keisha more than Tyler/Will. But everytime Tyler stabs her...that feeling goes away and I want Will to kill him. I can't wait for the next post!
Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/10 09:04 am
Way to go Keisha. Lets see how Tyler will react to that news. Jade is just sick. Where are the police? Why is it that no one knows they are missing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/10/10 04:52 am
Hurt him back Keisha... why do we have to deal with so much pain and abuse. How will she recover from this. Will too.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 04:07 pm
Ah hell...! You can't end it there after dropped that bomb!!! Oh pleeease update soon soon soon!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 11:46 am
Dayum. I didn't see that last part coming.
I need an update now, lol
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 07:32 am
Something tells me that she didn't abortion the baby and just lied to spite him. Or maybe I could be wrong. I can't wait to see how this story turns out. This story is well written out and also nicely spaced out. Well done!!!
Anon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 05:39 am
Oh wow. What a sad, interesting turn of event that ending was.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 05:34 am
That shut Tyler's crazy ass up now didn't it!!! Where are the damn police? Why haven't the neighbors called the cops with all the screaming that have got to be hearinf? Please give the woman a break. You are so wrong for ending the update after she tells him about the abortion!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/10 05:10 am
Julie, where the *beep* are you?!! Lord...now Tyler has entered the damn room - oh hell!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 19/10/10 01:41 pm
That was umm...I'm speechless.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 19/10/10 08:58 am