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Title: Chapter 75.2

I am on the fence about Caesar's father on if he should be tested or night because so long ago this man turned his back on his only son and treated him like dirt like he did not exist. Then I say would that make him no better then that man.

I am going for the don't even get tested but...I don't know sooooo hard so hard.

Ricky has killed another woman. Well put one in a coma and didn't know that she was in a coma persumed dead instead....Anyway his ass needs to go to hell or jail one no get out of jail free card.  I know he made cause he has the HIV virus but damn you brought tht like other things onto yourself playa.  I wonder if Binky has the virus too.  She said they have been sexing up protected.

And the drama just keeps coming.



Author's Response:

Yes, the drama keeps coming. I love all the points you made. So valid.

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Date: 18/04/11 12:20 pm

Title: Chapter 73.1

Well you know I am a big fan of you writing but I just wanted to say I love how you intertwine and make things come together so smoothly.

Great update as always on to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Awwwww, thanks for the compliment, Thundakat! U rock!

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Date: 18/04/11 11:41 am

Title: Chapter 71.2

I love Nana so much and her bossiness, her teaching and preaching, her strength her courage her high spirit just love her.

Bree I am happy that you want to get pregnant but I don't know if you should keep that from Caesar I think he would be able to get over the decit of your idenity way quicker then the decit of you getting pregnant.

He went thru that with Rae and you see the effects that had on him even though it will be his and you want this baby so no abortions will be in question that is still decit for not reason.  You thinking emotionally at this point not logically.  Never get pregnant to keep a man that is what Avalon did and we all know how that worked out the only thing is that Ceasar would no doubt be happy about the baby he would not be happy for the reason and the man already thinking about babies with you so again I don't agree with this decit baby-girl.

Great update. Love this story



Author's Response:

I know of a woman right now that's tryna to trap a man with a baby. It's a very sad situation. I personally want a man to be with me for ME, not some baby.

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Date: 18/04/11 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 71.1

Awww! No! Nana has cancer or it has come back.  OMG! Girl ok the last two chapters have had me in tears the first one good tears cause mother and daughter hashed it out but Nana my favorite Nana is suffering from cancer. No wonder she is so enthustic about a baby from Bree and her getting married.

She is the thread that binds it all.

Great update. Thank you



Author's Response:

Yeah, this one had me pretty teary-eyed too. Nana is a favorite of mine as well.

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Date: 18/04/11 10:51 am

Title: Chapter 70.2

Ahhhh! I had tears on this chapter.  They have finally purged all that ugly stuff out and now are able to bond like mother and daughter should.

Great update loved it.



Author's Response:

Ohhhhhh...your reaction to this chapter nearly brought me to tears.

Thanks so much for sharing this comment with me!

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Date: 18/04/11 10:45 am

Title: Chapter 70.1

This couple is just so hot goodness gracious.  Been not reading in awhile but it apprears that I left off and came back at a very very hot and steamy love making scene.

Great update as always.  I am sure I have lots to catch up on so on to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Goodness gracious indeed. lol.

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Date: 18/04/11 10:35 am

Title: Chapter 33.2

Caesar, sir, she has yet to become your woman. LOL! I know he meant well, but it just seemed funny to me. I've been watching a fair bit of anime lately and he took me to a place.

In my head I saw him walking away, muscles tightened in anger, hunched, moving quickly, kicking up dust and pebbles, with steam coming out of his ears and strange lines floating around his head! Then when he threw his hand up, it just made my vision that much more ridiculous.

X_x That's probably not what you were going for, but I'm glad to see funny somewhere. 

-Peace.

P.S. Do you read lesbian fiction? I have this one I've been thinking of posting, with some tweaking, in a few days. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!! That was a hilarious vision you painted with your words. Too funny!

As for lesbian fiction, it's not really my cup of tea. But if that's what you wanna write, do you! Either way, I'd like to check out your writing style because you are certainly entertaining me in the comment section.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 18/04/11 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 33.1

Yes, I've noticed that he's keeping a pretty sweet stash tucked away. It makes sense, money causes people to show their true colors and those colors are not always pretty. Subrina and Caesar have it right. Suge let Subrina know what everyone at the P-Ranch thinks. Funny she never noticed, where was all that deductive reasoning, SuBree? Was it that good-good that got you all confuzzled? -Peace.

Author's Response:

Yeah, that good-good had do strange things to a person's mind, even the strongest and most intuitive person. Real talk.

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Date: 18/04/11 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 32.4

Suge and SuBree are cute, yet she's one more person that Subrina's gotten close to that doesn't know she's an angent. Of course, Suge might take it better than Caesar, seeing what they've been through already. Yeah.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Suge will take the news much better than Caesar. He's pretty stubborn. Keep reading. You'll see.

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Date: 17/04/11 09:05 pm

Title: Chapter 32.3

Oh, cry me a river, Blaine!

Author's Response:

tee-hee. Enuff said.

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Date: 17/04/11 10:45 am

Title: Chapter 32.2

Mental fortitude, I can dig that. Now, if only I had something that I just had to do in order to push my feelings aside. I envy Bree right about now, she has her emotions in check and I... I let mine get the better of me just this evening past. Ah, well, tomorrow (or, rather, today) is a new day, and I will find something to do. Something bigger than just these crazy, overwhelming emotions.

Thanks for that.

-Peace. 

P.S. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

I understand where you're coming from. My emotions haven't been as much in check as they usually are. That normally happens whenever I'm very stressed though. Are you stressed? Maybe we BOTH need a vacation. :)

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Date: 17/04/11 08:38 am

Title: Chapter 32.1

LoL, please already, people! You two need to jump one anothers bones or... stop all that. Both of you have stuff to do, worrying about getting busy instead of actually getting busy... with helping, nasty!

Aha, SuBree is putting her cookies on displaine for Blaine, huh? I get that, he'll be too busy ogling her to actually worry about what "retirement" means. At least that seems to be the plan. Blaine loves him some big girl trim, and SuBree just keeps setting the cookies out there without giving him a bite.

But has she underestimated him, I wonder? With Blaine, just about anything is possible.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

tee-hee. Look at your tryna get them hooked up already. LOL!!!!

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Date: 17/04/11 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 30

I wonder. I am currently food-deprived, thinking is not currently my strongest suit.

Blaine, that Dirty Bird, I cannot stand that dude. He gets grimier and grimier, the more I read about him. Someone (Subrina) should run him over in an unmarked car checked out from evidence. No one would miss Blaine. Okay, maybe Vickie but she would get over it.

I cannot wait to see how Caesar takes seeing SuBree so soon after she floored him.

-Peace, 



Author's Response:

Blaine is definitely a grimy dude. He's going to get his. No worries on that one.

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Date: 16/04/11 03:36 am

Title: Epilogue

Awww...this is so bittersweet for me.  I absolutely love this story but I am sooo sad to see it end! 

I loved that you gave closure for all of the characters, and I was glad that most of the characters got their HEA! 

Was not suprised that Blaine took himself out, there was no way he was going to allow himself to be in a situation he couldn't control.  Most definitely not for the rest of his life.

I am glad that Binky and Ricky were able to work things out and fall in love!  I love what you did with his character the most.  To have us all hate him so much and then to redeem him bit by bit throughout the story was a stroke of genius and a testament to what a brilliant writer you are!

I also loved the theme of forgiveness in this story! 

It goes without saying that I was happy to see Ceasar and Subrina work things out in the end!  My favorite couple was still Burt and Avalon!  They were so adorable!  :)

Okay...I'm done gushing now!  This was one of my favorite stories on this board!  Thank you for taking the time to share this wonderful story with us!  You have me thinking of blowing off the dust on a story I started here and seeing if I can finish it!!

Good luck with tax season, I am sure you are swamped this weekend!



Author's Response:

Girrrrrrrrl, your comment touched my heart so much that I had to share it with others. I even posted an excerpt of it on FB. I hope you don't mind. Thanks sooooo much for reading along with us and for giving me such valuable feedback.

And by all means, PLEASE, pretty please with sugar on top, finish that story you wrote. I'd love to read it. Thanks again!

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Date: 16/04/11 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 29.3

Oh, wow. This has Blaine written all over it. I wouldn't put it past that slime-ball to pull a Jack Nicholson, The Departed style.

In other news: Suge really has it bad for Neelam, coming to SuBree's room all shook up 'cause he's been arrested. Tell him that the Pokey is figurative... for prison sex. Not the kind he likes, either!

So, she did not, in any shape or form, shimmy? Aww, damn, Gina. I was kind of enjoying that imagined scene; good times, good times. I hope Subrina can work through this, maybe help Neelam; he seems like a good enough dude. You know. So, yeah, do your thug-thizzle, Bree Sheero, and bring Suge's man home! Or at least to a low-level security prison. 

P.S. Bree knows she IS going back over to Caesar's. Stop all that lyin'! To yourself, 'cause you're fooling nobody else.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

No, SuBree (as you call her) didn't shimmy. It was a brilliant idea though. Wish I'd thought of it. lol.

And yeah, Bree is lying to herself. tee-hee

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Date: 15/04/11 09:21 am

Title: Chapter 29.2

If the smell is that potent in the room, Caesar, than that air freshener might not make a bit of difference.

I wonder how Aunt Vickie is doing, I also wonder if Avalon saw Bree shimmy down a drainpipe, lol. That would be so funny. Goodness me, that would be brilliant.

That G-string, he's planning on keeping it and - what? -sniffing it every now and again? It would be bad if that was the worse thing that came to my mind, lol. Gutter brain is what I'm guilty of.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

It's that potent, but Avalon is too distracted to pay attention to that right now. And yes, that WOULD have been funny if Avalon had caught Subrina doing that. LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!

Yeah, it sounds like you are suffering from a bit of the gutter brain today. LOL!!!!

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Date: 13/04/11 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 29.1

Oh, my! Her behavior was horrible! Subrina, woman, you deserve a definite time-out! Go sit on the stairs. Kicking people in the nuts, that is SO wrong. She could have waited for Avalon to be safely inside or until she left again with Vickie's change of clothes.

She's lucky he doesn't play the game I do, it's an old one called: Slap Me and I'll Slap You Back. It includes hits, kicks ang pinches, lol.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Subrina didn't want to chance it with Avalon. Plus she didn't know how long his mother would be there.

I remember that old game of GET-MY-LICK-BACK. LOL!

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Date: 13/04/11 07:30 pm

Title: Chapter 28.3

Well, she failed, lol. Just kidding, but she totally did fail at going over there to smooth things out. I mean, he is definitely a Complication and, oh, when he finds out! I cannot wait to see how this spirals.

Tomorrow.

I will find out tomorrow.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Tomorrow it is then. Thanks for all the laughs and witty comments! :)

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Date: 13/04/11 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 28.2

Hah, lol, that last line tickled my funny bone. Work it out, Ms. Sheero, show him what you're working with!

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

tee-hee.

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Date: 13/04/11 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 28.1

^_^ Glad that their enjoying one another. He's taking charge. that's alone is enough of an aprhrodisiac to drive a woman crazy! Go Caesar! You're the man, obviously, lol.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

You got that right, TRaberah. I LOVE an alpha male.

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Date: 13/04/11 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 27.3

"On to the imminent love scene..." LOL. Seriously, best end note to a chapter yet!

I guess they will be doing the do, eh. Live long and prosper.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that endnote. :)

Live long and prosper? LOLOLOLOL!!!! Too funny!

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Date: 13/04/11 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 27.2

I wonder what else will follow. And if Karianne will ever find out about it. I bet she does. I hope she does.

He's not that mad? Men never are. Lol. Mom once told me "Men are easy." I wonder how you feel about this, Suprina.

This is going wonderfully.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Naw, men NEVER are that mad. And your mom was/is so right. lol.

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Date: 13/04/11 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 27.1

Aww, there sure does seem to be a bit of drama. Caesar's heart is just a breakin' over there at the S-Ranch, poor baby. SuBree is hurting, too, but I think she'll go over there and make boo-boo all better.

More drama, more, more, more! 

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

lol. Look at your calling for more drama. tee-hee. It's a'coming.

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Date: 13/04/11 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 26.2

I'm loving it. Poor Caesar, poor SuBree, they both seem heartbroken. Maybe she should just tell him... His Mom already knows, so, why not?

Does she wonder if she can trust him? 



Author's Response:

Subrina can't risk telling C her real mission right now. It's definitely a trust issue. At this point, the less people that knows the better.

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Date: 13/04/11 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 26.1

Oh, damn! No more need be said.

Author's Response:

Okay. lol

Thanks for what you DID say. lol

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Date: 13/04/11 02:17 am

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