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Title: Chapter 52.1

I hate to tell ya...I'm so ready for the FBI to raid the place...so ready...

Author's Response:

I am too. But there's not enough hard evidence yet. It's coming though.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 50.3

You're right!! Ceasar is TOO TRUSTING!!!

Author's Response:

Yep! I gotta work with him on that weakness.

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Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 52.1

omg to use the bathroom on him that client is nasty ewwwwwwwwww he need help big time ok lol. so he has a grand daughter omg that crazy thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I never understood that particular fetish. I just can't see what kinda pleasure can be derived from someone treating you like toilet. Yuck!

Thanks for commenting!

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 51

i like the talked she has with her nana they so close it nice. it so funny that it always either nana's or mother's trying to get daughters to get married and have lots of kids lol but it show they care about your happiness. wow that not good seeing the photos what going to happen next? thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

That's a mama's job - to get our daughters married off to good men. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 01:58 am

Title: Chapter 50.3

SMH Damn shame. When will people learn that there is ALWAYS someone ready to bring you down? Even your own family. Oh well. People always gotta learn the hard way lol.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, some folks do have to learn the hard way.

Thanks for commenting, FrenchieJonesy!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, some folks do have to learn the hard way.

Thanks for commenting, FrenchieJonesy!

Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 48.2

Yes Brina please be duly noted on Blaine and Ricky cause hell is about to start with those 2 mo'fos and they are going to try and make yours and Ceasar's life miserable and anyone else that gets in their way.

I thought so sure when you said Ms. Vicky was away on a cruise that Blaine had found some way to stay behind so the could plot and scheme to get back at Brina for getting one over on him and with Vicky out of the way he and Ricky can do whatever they want to do.

Great update as always 

Happy Writing.



Author's Response:

Blaine can't weasel out of spending time with his wife all the time. If he didn't invest in that relationship at all, he'd lose it fast. The thing is he's gonna lose it anyway, just more slowly (spoiler).

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 50.3

wow this is just crazy first ran into her nana now the double mint trouble twin sister wow ok talk about crazy crazy lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Doublemint twins? LOLOLOLOL!!!!!

Thanks for the comment and the laugh!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 50.2

wow he meet nana that was a very close call thought she blow her cover. i love how sweet C is with bree making her feel like a queen. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

C is definitely a sweetie. I so luv me some him! lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:12 am

Title: Chapter 50.1

I hated that girl always starting stuff with bree and other girls. she just mad because C man not giving her any of his magic stick hefa. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

She's a hater for sure.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 50.1

Mercedes needs to mind her business, well she could if she had any business of her own.  I am so loving this story,  I want Blaine, Ricky and Mercedes to all pay for their evil ways.  I want it to be painful!!!

Author's Response:

You called it right - Mercedes ain't GOT no bizness of her own. That's why she in other's folks' kool-aid.

Thanks for loving the story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 48.1

Mama Ava is happy and I like her hope that there love grows strong enough for the storm that is coming.

Great update....off to read more 

Happy Writing



Author's Response:

I'm doing my best to put down strong roots in their love. One way or the other, this story will have a HEA!

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 49.3

wow that girl fooling herself if she don't think that she in love with this man. it hard not too be in love with Caesar he sexy got his own money he sexy have a kind heart and oh yeah he sexy lol thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I believe I get it - you think Caesar is SEXY. LOL!

Thanks for the animated feedback!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 49.2

they are so cute together. I like that C cry men don't cry unless they fav team lost a game that about it lol. love the story and thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I think they're pretty cute together too. tee-hee.

Thanks for the feedback!



Author's Response:

I think they're pretty cute together too. tee-hee.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 01:06 am

Title: Chapter 49.3

That was awesome!!! I just Ceasar, and he will so hurt when he finds out the truth about subrina.  He will eventually get over it.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that post, Pmgayles, and that you can feel C's pain already.

Appreciate that comment!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter 49.1

Dang, once again I'm reminded that ppl really don't realize they turn children into crazed adults. Blaine is slimey, but he is very smart and who knows what his life really would have been like if allowed to live a normal childhood.

Author's Response:

So true. Those wounded kids grow up one day and the results aren't pretty. Had Blaine even had a semi-normal childhood, he might have turned out like Caesar - more grounded and emotionally stable.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 10:19 pm

Title: Chapter 49.1

Whoa!! He was molested too? Jeez...I sincerely hope he isn't molesting Ricky too....

Author's Response:

No, Blaine never molested Ricky. Because he was molested as a child, he did what he could to protect his nephew. That's also why he killed for Ricky when his prison buddy violated the boy.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 03:01 am

Title: Chapter 49.1

oh my  this man had realy  lost his marbles he burn the house up where his step father and mom was. NOw i understand why he did it i do but omg he just not right in the head. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

He's not right in the head at all.

Thanks for commenting faithfully!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 48.2

Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 48.2

i like they family thing going on with these two. the food the laughs just having fun witch is very very good. ricky need to grow up and be a man instead of a child. i'm glad that they are together make cute couple. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Yes, it's a good day in the neighborhood today for Caesar, Bree, and Avalon.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 48.2

Wondful!!! Now we wait for the explosion when the raid occurs.

Author's Response:

You're VERY close to the truth.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 48.1

awwwwwwwwww  they are so cute together smile all over their faces  those kool aid smile too lol. glad they back together and everyone had a good christmas. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Kool-aid smiles for everyone today! lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 01:59 am

Title: Main Cast

Iight chica...do yo thang!  This is my Friday so I will be ready to read when I get off work.  Who am I kidding I will be reading b4 I get off see I am responding to you now and have been and still on the clock.  LOL!

Author's Response:

Yep! lol. Enjoy your day(s) off.

Thanks for all the comments!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 01:38 am

Title: Main Cast

Girl I broke that habit a long long time ago when I was working during the day...and never got back into them but my reading girl please I get pissed if my teenage sons come ask me to cook...I be like how old r u.  LOL!!

Happy Writing chica!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!! Them boys betta leave mama be. tee-hee.

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 01:31 am

Title: Main Cast

I gotchu I gotchu they got more dirty to dig up

Author's Response: Yep!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 12:32 am

Title: Main Cast

U know I was thinking.  Rick already coo-coo for coco puffs I hate to see how far his mind it blown when he finds out he not only kill the woman he was supposily in love with but he killed his child as well.

It still goes thru my mind when he said he was nothing like his father and that he did not kill his child's mother no poo-poo platter you killed her and you child so that makes you worse you get a 2 for 1 and it aint no sale buddy.

I don't think he is going to make it to jail...and he is to cowardly to take his own life and send himself to hell...plus I don't want him to get out of suffering so easily here on Earth.  His a$$ going completely over the bend will keep him locked here on Earth in his own little tortured world not ever realizing his surrounds cause all his deeds keep rolling around and around in his head and he think full moon nights are bad he aint seen nothing yet but that is just my opinion....I am sure you have an even better deed for his chump a$$.

Happy Writing...

Woah I am awfully talkative tonight.  Let me stop hogging up all the time.  :D



Author's Response:

I like how talkative you are. It keeps me on my toes. Helps me to stay encouraged especially on days like today when everything that could go wrong, DID. lol.

Anyhoo, let me get situated at home, then I'll start posting tonight's (Wednesday's) installment.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 03:15 am

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