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Title: No Flames

Alcide/Tara? :)

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 10:41 am

Title: Dusk

I was reading this chapter and "Dido and Aeneas When I am Laid in the Earth" came on. It was the most perfect song for this chapter and felt like I was watching a hollywood film. 

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 10:30 am

Title: No Flames

Yeahhh! Just caught up with update.  Sookie is getting on my nerves like usual.

Tara crushing on Alcide getting all hot and bother. Bill seems to be crushing on Tara shoot he didn't even run to Sookie's bec and command when she arrived and I have yet to see him go to her during the agenda giving.

Erica hasn't paid her any mind and what was that with Lu not wanting to touch her.

Alcide hasn't even paid her no mind. The sistas are getting all the attention it would seem hot damn loving it. More please

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/04/11 01:54 am

Title: Cast

WoW!!  WHat a story!!  I love that I can't figure out what is going to happen.  Such an original take with these characters....Prima!!  Bring it on Sista Girl,  I am ready for more!!!

 

Reviewer: Sammie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/11 11:54 am

Title: No Flames

I love it but for a minute though, I was kind of acting a little dumb when she said thay were going to Cairo. I was like: why in the hell are they coming to Cairo, GA (my home town, btw)?  I know, I had a dumb moment there and I swear it won't happen again.  LOL.  Please, please get Eric and Bill some knew clothes and a bath quickly, I can't stand picturing them covered in vomit especially sexy ass Eric.  Also, Lucifer is one hot sexy beast and don't get me wrong, I LOVE me some Higher Power and all but a sistah can get weak, I'm just saying.......PLUS Gale Harold is Lucifer, I don't think no one understands the significance of that?!?!  Lord, I'm scared to find out who you got playing Michael. And does Sookie really have to be there, she annoys me and I get the feeling I'm not the only one that she is bothering...lol.

Author's Response: Exactly, people have been sleeping on Gale Harold for years. I really think only a handful of readers understand that this is Gale Harold, FUCKING GALE HAROLD. I'm currently writing the next xhapter and its funny that you mentioned them needing to clean up because Tara says the same thing the next morning.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/11 02:38 am

Title: Cast

Okay, I just want to let you know that was honestly looking at the characters in this story before I decided to dig in but then I looked at a review and seen Gale Harold's name and my heart stopped literally, that damn man gets my heart fluttering. I so loved Queer As Folk solely for Brian's sexy self and you are right, he could pull Lucifer off on a bad day in his dreams with a hang over....you can tell I so LUST this amn.  Now, I'm all hot and botherd and want to see Queer As Folk again, curse you for making me remeber.....I also watched because of Hal Sparks too...Brian and Michael was just to die for.  So missy, I will defintiely be reading this story PLUS I am a TARA THORNTON fan PERIOD!!!!!!!  Hands down, she rocks!!!

Author's Response: gale harold is my soulmate in my head.  i have the complete series of queer as folk on dvd and gale harold will always get me all hot and bothered.  i am writing the next chapter tomorrow, i love this story.  i actually have another story that he is one of the main characters but i am thinking of starting that one over.  people are sleeping on the sexiness that is gale harold.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/03/11 04:47 am

Title: No Flames

great chapter

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/03/11 05:32 am

Title: No Flames

Hope she listen to her friend and relize that he not good guy before it too late. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/11 04:08 am

Title: No Flames

Lafeyette is too much but loving this story so far. Wonder who's the big huncho in Cairo???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/11 03:41 am

Title: Son of the Morning (Part II)

Lmao, why did Lucifer play Sookie out like that? though i did enjoy it. Sookie's so damn annoying. love that Lucifer and Lafayette are getting along like that, and go 'head, Tara! rack up all the fine ones! nice progession, lady. excited for more.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 04:00 am

Title: Son of the Morning (Part II)

Love the interaction between the group. Had me cracking up! :) Lu is gonna be trouble.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 03:16 am

Title: Cast

I love Lu's response to Sookie..  "Kinda don't want to touch her" I'm so glad she's not everyone's favorite.. Sookie can work my last good nerve..

Keep the chapters coming.. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 01:19 am

Title: Son of the Morning (Part II)

loving this story :D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/03/11 12:29 am

Title: Son of the Morning

that's deep, homie. i have no qualms with your use of God/Lucifer in your story. you're working it well and respecting the Word gracefully. this story is amazing so far and i can't wait to read more.

and, yes, Gale Harold is delish!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 08:02 pm

Title: Son of the Morning

Glad they're getting some help from the big L. Hope they can all escape safely.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 04:31 am

Title: Cast

I know Eric maybe the one she ends up with but i'm definitely liking the Lucifer twist. I also like that you put in there that he wish he had never went against I AM and he wish he could just be with his wife again.. Interesting..

Laffy, blowing chucks on Eric!!! Laffy's is lucky Eric didn't drop his ass.. Hahaha..

Looking forward to the next chapter..



Author's Response: My personal love for God is the only thing not making me make this a redemptive story for Lucifer as well.  i feel like I would be tip toeing the blasphemy line, because if Lucifer would be accepted it would make a good chunk of the bible, but Luci will be a part of the story no doubt.  Plus I just fucking LOVE Gale Harold!

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 03:48 am

Title: Son of the Morning

Wow that devil he hot lol. But hope they beat the devil and able to live their lives agian. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Lucifer himself has a role in the prophacy, he has had a role for quite some time.  He is realizing that they all have their roles to play in the story of the world.  For years he has played his role to the t, but now that his wife is back he longs to change his ways though he knows he can't.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 03:14 am

Title: The First of Many

Well I kind understand why tara didnt' want to get in the middle lol. Me proablem run and like I don't know anything didn't see any thing either lol.  Glad they all got out safe and they better make sure the get ready for a huge battle. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 03:12 am

Title: The Beginnin

Glad sam didn't get kill. So Eric found her and make sure she safe because the others want to kill her because she will destory all of them? I hope I'm right lol. Well they better run fast because something tells me these other vampiers not givng up thanks for the update.

Author's Response: In there eyes her being back is the destruction of the Vampires, but really it will make them more humane.  They have grown love and accept their place as monters and don't want to be able to live with humans as equals.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 03:03 am

Title: Dusk

Dam this woman must be very special for every vampier to look for her. Is she the queen of vampiers or human? I hope sam and them able to keep her safe from who looking for her. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 02:59 am

Title: The Awakening

What happen to her did Eric attack her trying to kill her? It good thing Sam found her to help her out. Why would he attack her? thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 02:50 am

Title: The Call

who are all the searching for? Is it this sookie person? intersting start to story like it. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: This is a no Sookie zone...lol Keep reading, I'm really excited to be writing this!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 02:39 am

Title: Cast

nice pic of the cast.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/11 02:37 am

Title: The First of Many

nice. this is epic, girlie, and you are delivering. good stuff! and i too cannot stand Suckie. she's the worst.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 10:14 pm

Title: The First of Many

Interesting update. Glad she's trying to save them. Hope she's able to escape too.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 03:58 am

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