Reviews For The Arrival
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Title: The First of Many

wow forgot about this one sooo happy to see thats it is back and is full of all kick ass action keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 11:17 am
Title: The Beginnin

Difficult to read as it was all one straight paragraph but I'm liking this story so far.

Author's Response: I know I apologize, for some reason that's the way it kept formatting. I tried like 6 times. I'm about to try again

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 01:36 am
Title: The Call

Amen sister about your comment on Sookie. Great story . I hate it's taken me so long to read it . Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 03/03/11 06:15 pm
Title: Cast

SEXY cast! I love it.

 Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 04:38 pm
Title: The Call

Great job!  I love Tara...Update soon please.

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Date: 13/02/11 11:02 pm
Title: Dusk

Don't keep us hanging forever.

 Reviewer: Xiomara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 10:33 pm
Title: Dusk

Oh please please please update soon.  I am really interested in this story.  I want to know if she is an angel or what.  she has to hollow out scars on her back where maybe wings may have been.  Apparently she was made for Eric cause he is the only one that feels his heartbeat and it being parall to hers.

Again please update soon.  I was kind of skeptical about reading this story because of the time it was published and the number of updates from the last update.

Now I am hooked and want more so I hope the update will be soon. very very soon.



Author's Response: I'm working on a new update this weekend. I've just been ridiculously busy, but I need to update a few stories. I'm still super excited about this story

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 04:14 am
Title: The Call

I agree with you and glad this will not be a Sookie friendly story which is find by me.  I tolerate Sookie but Tara will always and forever be my girl.  Sookie makes me sick sometimes uggh.  Glad to know I am not the only one.

Interesting story so far can't wait to see what you have in store.

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Date: 10/11/10 03:48 am
Title: Dusk

I'm loving this story. Can't Wait to read what happens when the sun goes down and how Tara plays into this.

 Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 02:57 am
Title: The Call

STOP PLAYING WITH MY EMOTIONS AND GET ON WITH IT! ALREADY!! LOL I am very intrigued by your story and waiting really impatiently for you to continue!  :)

 Reviewer: Bee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 02:25 am
Title: Dusk

This story continues to be interesting. Love it!!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/10 01:44 am
Title: The Awakening

Me likey. Can't wait to find out the mystery!

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Date: 22/10/10 09:08 am
Title: The Awakening

Very interesting start!! Please update soon. Great Job :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/10/10 06:41 am
Title: The Awakening

loving it so far whoo bill interested in someone other than sookie!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 03:16 am
Title: The Call

I agree with sookie character being a waste of time and script it should all be about tara but i am so biased to her but any who i going to enjoy this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 02:45 am
Title: The Call

Love the story and its concept so far!

I admit, Sookie's character is pretty sucky on the show. The way some of the characters are in both the books and the t.v. show is vastly different. For example, in the books Sookie is pretty kick-ass and Tara is L-A-M-E!

 Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 01:57 am
Title: The Call

Just after reading the fisrt paragraph I was hooked. I'm not really sure of the pairings, but I hope it heads more towards Eric & this "new charachter"

 Any character pics????

 Keep up the good work, I'm lovin IT!!!

 

Reviewer: Fabiola22 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 01:35 am
Title: The Call

Yes Sookie on the show is a waste of space.  Read the book so much better than the show.   I am liking the story so far.  Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks doll.  I just downloaded an App where I can write chapters on my phone and email them to myself for later uploads.  One of the reasons that my other stories never get updated is because I'm just never on my computer, because when I have the time to write I'm usually doing something a lot more fun. So now with this App I can write whenever so there should be more steady updates.

Also Tara and this new character aptly called she will be the major females in this. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 12:19 am
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