Who is the young woman behind Edison's cast photo? I think she's very pretty, but does she fit, I wonder.
It's kind of obvious that "whatever" killed that woman in the woods is not human. Why they believe that to be a possibility is a mystery to me. Humans cannot, without some new-fangled torture device, inflict that sort of harm on one another. Not that we cannot do just as bad or worse, of course. It just doesn't seem likely.
Ryan and Thomas' dad happens to be a detective, eh? Interesting. Also, will we be meeting Aiden anytime soon?
I am getting a bit of a Teen Wolf vibe from this chapter, I don't know if that was intentional or not. I'd still like to see more of where this is going, though.Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/11 09:20 am
I wonder what it was that Ryan said to Edison. Also I don't really understand the relationship between Edison and her brothers. It's odd, the way they behave toward her, seeing as they were all born the same day. I'd think they would be closer than they are -- or than they appear to be. It's early in the story, though, so there is probably more to their sibling relationship than I know.
I wonder why Edison is so touchy where her name is concerned. My name was unique when I grew up, I loved it, I adored being different for whatever reason. Why does it bother her so?Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 03:28 am
PLEASE UPDATE!! It's gone far too long!Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 02:03 pm
This story is pure awsomeness!!! Gimme more!Reviewer: Whoppie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/10 07:31 pm
Wait, please come back here with the next part. What happens at the party??? And Josephine might be pregnant?!
Update!Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 09:15 am
Thanks for another great update. I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see what comes next. Edison is an interesting character and the fact that she is interested but not interested in Todd is very interesting. I love how you have defined her character because she seems to play a very important part. Looking forward to the next update.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 01:37 pm
Character pics?? Interesting story!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying to find some character pics. It's just so hard to get people who look exactly how you envisioned your characters, but I will def try to have some up by the end of this week. Thanks for reading.
Date: 06/11/10 12:42 am
I'm liking the pace of this! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The only thing I noticed that was a little confusing was your description of Edison. She's almost a contradiction to herself. The way you described her at first was "observant and mature" but then later in the paragraph you say she throws tantrums at random and steals things. Doesn't really sound like she's too mature to me, but that's just my opinion. Overall, I think you're on your way. Good start!
Author's Response: I actually responded to you in my next chapter, not only to you but to anyone else who gets confused. I wanted to make Edison as absurd as possible, one minute she's mature, but because she's been raised by wolves, literally, she has a tendency to fly off the handle, and the fact that she's the only girl in a house filled with testosterone can lead you to many an outbursts. Thanks for reading, I hope this kind of clears things up. ^_^
Date: 05/11/10 03:22 pm
Yay paranormal story, I like it so farReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 09:02 pm
I actually enjoyed the slowness of this chapter I got to know who Edison. I am looking forward to seeing the relationship between Todd, Ryan and Edison develop. And can so relate to Edison on so many levels. But I think she needs to give Todd a chance. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you liked how slow it was, it was a killer to actually get it presentable. I'm so happy to hear that you actually get Edison, she's quite the character. As for the Todd, Ryan, and Edison relationship it's going to be quite a ride the next couple of chapters.
Date: 04/11/10 05:12 pm