That.... was... whoo I am so hot right now I need a cold glass of water hell I need a cold bucket of water splashed on me all over me... Damn I know what i will be doing tonight... playing boss and secretary.. ;)
Thank you for this.. I loved every bit of it.
Reviewer: meme Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/10/11 03:48 am
Wow...now here I was just randomly checking out the authors link and I found this gem. I'm already a fan of your work and I'm was trying to remember this Profit series. So a sista go on Wiki (my best friend) and I read up on it. I remember this show!!, but anyway I luv this piece of work, thanks for sharing!!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 06:29 am
That's was excellent and very HAWT!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 05:14 am
Hot.
I enjoyed reading this.
I've never understood cutting. I swear I suffer everytime I accidentally cut myself. I don't get doing so on purpose.
Thanks for the one shot.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/10 06:25 pm
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Shit....
I’ve heard of the legendary movie that is Secretary but have never seen it after my friend said it was sexist. I mean, that’s not the reason I didn’t watch the movie, I was just told it was crap and then I was too lazy to make an effort to check it out.
I’m going to get that movie first thing next weekend.
Either my friend is being oversensitive or your short one fic story did the movie justice. I mean yes, Alice may have been dominated by her boss but only cause she wanted to. That’s a big difference for me.
Overall, very sexy story! That was hot, Angel!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/09 03:06 am
hahaha
he fucked str8 hahahaha
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/09 08:05 pm
Hello Token,
I have to say I just discovered your staoies and I am totally in love with this story and The Lover.I think maybe you should write some more control type stories .I love them. PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading my stories! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :) Reviewer: stacie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/04/09 05:15 am
This is my third attempt at a review. I keep getting the code wrong for some reason. I was completely enthralled by this story.
Author's Response: I"m sorry you're having trouble with the codes, but thank you so much for the review. I'm really glad you liked this one! :D
[Report This]Date: 22/03/09 12:41 am
I actually love The Secretary and this was a sweet and exy play off of it!! Well Done..
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love that movie too. :)
[Report This]Date: 25/01/09 09:40 pm
I loved that film "Secretary". Nice take on it. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Loved that movie too, so this was really fun to write. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 09:28 am
I loved this story! I love the dark elements as well as the explicit ones! Well written!! One of my favorites!
Author's Response:
Hey bella!
Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed this. It was one of my favorites too, Profit is one of my favorite characters. :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: bellamafia08 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/08 12:20 am
Loved the story and I remember the show Profit and loved this character, I also saw the movie Secretary with James Spader and Maggie Gyllenhaal as the secretary and enjoyed the quirkiness of the character. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Author's Response:
Woohoo, another Profit fan! I knew there were some still out there. I'm so glad you liked this, and I loved that movie as well, it was so great. Thanks so much for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/08/08 08:33 am
Great Story
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)
Date: 26/08/08 04:55 am
I LOVED THIS!!! Although I find that being at work and reading this type of fanfic certainly does wonders for the imagination..:)
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it.
Date: 18/08/08 05:57 pm
WOW.. this was my first introduction in the world of Profit... and I loved every controling min..
ahem, 
I mean, I loved everything about the story.. Where do I sign up! 
Author's Response: Oh, you are so welcome. Profit's world is so wonderfully twisted, I'm just glad I could go there for a moment. So glad you liked this Zeta, and thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/08/08 01:32 pm
So first of Secretary is one of my all time favorite movies, I love the way you did this. You fit so much information into such a short story but it didn't feel cluttered or like the reader was being given too much. It flowed effortlessly. And the sex was hotness. I like the kinky TBG you should keep going with that. handcuffs? threesomes? use of prosthetic limbs? what's coming next?
Author's Response:
Hey Greaodin,
It's great that you enjoyed this, espeically knowing how much you like Secretary, that movie's awesome. This was very experimental for me, so I'm happy it turned out the way it did. And the kinky was fun, though I always wonder if I go a bit too far sometimes. I guess that's what the reviews will tell me. ;)
Thanks so much for the read and reveiw!
Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/08 03:18 am
This is some freaky shit...and I gotta say I LOVE IT!!!!
Brava TBG!!!
You've inspired me!
Author's Response:
I love freaky, it's where I live.
No seriously, thanks so much for the reivew. I'm so happy you liked this..:)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/08/08 03:28 pm
Love it. I never saw the TV series so all I can hear in my head is James Spader's voice as Mr. Profit.
Author's Response:
James Spader works too, he was awesome in that movie. I'm glad you liked this though, even if you haven't seen the show.
Thanks so much for reading and the review!
Reviewer: shocol Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/08 02:39 pm
Oh yes, I second BlackMamba's little smiley-thingys.
I pray you indulge us again in the future with another Profit treat. So glad you tackled him. I have NOT the balls to do so. ;)
Author's Response:
Heh, aren't the smiley's cute?
As for another Profit, I'd love to. I have so much planned already though, I'm not sure when I could get back to him. But it's totally not out of the question.
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/08 01:34 pm
I COULD SO KISS YOU RIGHT NOW!!!! (no lezzie ha ha)
I'm dying here. Dead. I love this so freakin' much. Who ARE you, Token? You're insanely awesome, AWESOME! at capturing voices! I can SEE Jim and HEAR Jim and *sits down* this was so fucking GOOD!
This is SOOO Jim =>
She puts them at ease when they walk inside my office.
And as a result, they never see me coming.
This and other bits you've inflected here; hell the whole damn story is Jim!
*screams* How awesome are you!?!?!?! I LOVE THIS *hugs* Thanks so much for this gem!
Author's Response:
LOL, Hey MZ!
So happy you like this, I know how much you love the show and wanted to do him justice. And that line...hell, don't know where it came from, just one of those things I could hear him saying. That's kind of how I write all my characters really, I hear them talking in my head somehow. Especially ones with distinctive voices and mannerisms like Profit. I just love dialouge period really, it's my favorite thing about televison and movies. And books too.
Thanks for the awesome review, I'm so happy this worked out as well as it did. :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/08 01:26 pm
kinky, yes but f**uckin awesome, hell yeah!!!
Author's Response: Heh, thanks Hershey. Happy you like the kink, I had a lot of fun writing this...
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 08:22 am
I like it! I would have made a great novel. Yes the story is kinky but where is the sex. Okay it have "sex" but no intercoarse. Don't get me wrong I did enjoy the story. I was intertain and intrique...all in all it was good.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked this. A novel...hmm..not sure I can delve too much into the kink (don't know if I have enough to say) but that is an interesting thought. And no, no intercourse, I wanted the story to be more about their connection then the acutal act of sex. Their newfound intimacy, as much as he can have anyway. He is a little crazy and all...
Reviewer: darkfaer Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 06:14 am
Very, very, very kinky indeed! Damn, that was really good.
Author's Response:
So happy you enjoyed the kink, I had fun writing it too...Thanks so much for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: bballangel726 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/08 06:00 am
That was . . . hold on I need a minute . . . I need another minute . . . . Damn it you know it was good!
Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much. I didn't think this would take quite as long to write as it did, but I wanted to get it right. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/08 05:50 am