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Title: Chapter 1

love this story more like ch 2,3,4 ,5 more so good more

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/06/13 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

LOL good for a one shot but the cursing was a little too much!!!

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

i Love it.

Could you please contine their story.

more please.

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/01/10 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 1

They both were fighting the attraction. They have a lot of time to make up for!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 07:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Where is the rest of the story?  I hope that you plan to continue the story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/08 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That last line made the story for me. It just put a huge smile on my face. Cute. To think they wasted their time fighting when they could have been having fun this much fun for years.

I really liked the dynamic between the two and I definitely feel that there's more to know about these two characters (I know it's a oneshot, I'm just putting it out there. ;))



Author's Response: I would LOVE to do a prequel for these guys. Hmm....

Reviewer: Village Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 08:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was so hot! It does kinda make me upset that they wasted so much time hating each other, and they could have been have GREAT SEX!!!!

Author's Response:

Hate and love are twins

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great job bscl! I really liked this!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this little piece. Very sexy and hot!! Do you get to see more of these two?

Author's Response: I don't know...maybe.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/08 06:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

*sings* OOOhhh, there's a thin line, between love and hate. LOL Loved this piece! There were some serious fireworks betwixt the two. Like verging on WWIII fireworks. I'd like to see some backstory on these two. :) But since they don't get freaky until the present, then this will suffice :) Thanks for sharing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It seems that a lot of folks want a prequel.

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/08 02:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

GREAT START. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/08/08 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story...these two are to funny I was ROFLMAO.  So where is Lins husband?  why would he be working on Thanksgiving?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/08/08 02:40 am

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