nice ohcould mia be preg oh hmm thanks for kicking eric ass...
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 03:25 pm
My boys to the rescue but Ms.Mia was trying to handle her business first!!! I love she did not bow down to that trash Eric though it almost cost her life!!
The boys opened a huge bag of whip arse on Eric and I am sure Kale made him pay seriously for touching our mia!!
I am concerned about the baby?? Does this mean she was not pregnant?? With only one chapter to go (crying) there is so much to cover..maybe you can stretch it to two more chapters???
I absolutely love this story!!!Great job sweetie!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/02/11 02:09 pm
WHOA THAT WAS INTENSE!!!! i hate that he beat her so badly but im soooo glad he didnt rape her too!!! poor jasmine - no woman deserves that. did she die? seems like the guys didnt wanna talk about her.i was cringing majorly when 'he who shall not be named' aka F**kface kept sitting on her stomach. i was like 'nooooo the baby!!!' so i guess she isnt pregnant after all huh? they wouldve found out at the hospital. its prolly for the best anyway. shes gonna be on pain killers and other stuff to help her heal. her body needs time to recuperate fully before taking on the fulltime very exhausting job of growing a baby. WONDERFUL AND POIGNANT KATHERINE!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! i gotta figure out how to get this on my reader like yesterday lol!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 01:24 pm
Aww, that ending part was very sweet. I loved that Mia got a good kick in before Eric did his damage, and I really like how Kale put a serious beatdown on him.
Sad that it's almost over, but thanks for writing it and bringing these characters to life.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 01:05 pm
Thank God, the guys made there in time and Kale godsmacked Eric - that made my day, lol! and also i'm mad proud over Mia - she didn't go down without a fight!
can't believe there's only one chapter left - i'm going to miss this story like crazy! thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 12/02/11 10:49 am
Whoa! I can't believe Eric was able to leave a mark on her period. However, I'm still glad Kale and Adian got to Mia before any really serious damage occur.
Great update.
Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 09:03 am
Good for Mia fighting Eric off for as long as she did. And good thing Aiden and Kale got there in time. Is the baby okay?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/02/11 09:00 am
I am so glad that she fought off Eric, that damn Jasmine. I would feel sorry for her but she is the that brought Eric into Mia's life. That fool was crazy and too bad he's still alive.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 08:03 am
God I love this story! Girl, you did your thing with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, even though it's the last.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 07:24 am
I am so glad Mia is okay and Eric got a massive beat down, I think you can write an extra ten chapters. Hint.........
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 07:13 am
All hell Naw!
Oh snap Aiden and Kale bout open up a can of whoopazz!
Author's Response: You and these videos. LOL I love it! Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 02:02 pm
great updates!!!!! can't wait to see what happens!! i wanna kill eric..asshole!!!!
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 06:27 am
Jasmine traitor cow...drug Mia in the arms of this psycho!!! What a friend..so scared for own life that she would give up Mia's what a piece of work!!
Eric the rejected want a be boyfirend/blind date...really why I am I not surprised especially since I know Jasmine brought this crack head in their lives.
I hope Mia whips his tail before the boys get there and finsih him off..somebody needs to show this fool all women are not helpless slutty bimbos like Jasmine!!!Whip his butt Mia for all the women he has hurt and for trying to kill your men!!
It si getting good sweeetie..I cannit wait for more!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 05:06 am
First of all I'm really enjoying your story. Mia sometimes slips into the tstl stage, but the story is still fun.
Secondly, you are just evil leaving us hanging like this, :-) I hope the next update is coming soon. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.
Reviewer: Annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 02:41 am
Excellent story, it's thoroughly engrossing. I love all your characters and this story reminded me why I ever liked romance stories in the first place. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: nadine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 01:32 am
Get back over her KAT, no you didn't give us a cliffhanger LOL That was so good I am glad I know u going to add more today right ?? I want to read about the guys kicking Eric's A** ..............Loved the update. I hope Mia don't get mad that they put a tracker on her phone and that everyone was watching over her.
Reviewer: EdenWrites Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/11 12:54 am
Oh my god!!!!! Eric is a psycho what a freak!!!! Please please update again lol!! i cant believe it nearly over i dont want it to be lol!! great chapter, but u gotta give us more soon lol! no pressure though :D x
Reviewer: bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 10:45 pm
I knew it was that sick freak Eric.
Fight Mia until you men get there to take over.
I wonder where he has Jas tied up @ now and if her leg is really broken.
Thank you for the great update. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 10:00 pm
OMG, CHICKADEE!!! I'm irritated by Jasmine's lack of ability to keep her friend safe, I admire Mia's loyalty to those she loves, and I hope Aidan and Kale can save her maybe preggers self. All in all, THANK YOU!!!! 3 updates in less than half a week? It's like my birthday and Christmas and the end of school all in one! (to save you from concern, I'm 17 and a senior.) Love your work and still a ginormous fan. :D
Reviewer: bcamille4225 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 05:48 pm
KatMad, you are killing me with with these cliffhangers. I know Mia was only trying to be a good friend but that was crazy of her to run out without calling one of the guys especially after she's being targeted. Mia deserves that spanking Kale and Aiden are going to give her. I love this story so much. I can't believe you're not published because you have so much talent. I am sort of sad though to see this story coming to an end soon, but its been a pleasure to read so far. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 02:07 pm
That poor Bastard is so dead. As for Jasmine she need her ASS WOOP! No walking away from this.
Great update.
Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 11:07 am
KALE & AIDAN - HUUUURRY!
thanks for another great update - ch 24 is going to be a nail biter, for sure!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 11:02 am
Damn! Mia is in some major trouble now. I guess poor Jasmine is probably dead. Yeah, Jasmine was a mess, but I still feel bad for her. Eric is just one crazy asshole, and I can't wait until the guys get there and take him down.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/11 10:25 am
So, in the chapter, the news said that the cops knew the rapist was the ex-boyfriend of one of the victims; doesn't that imply they already know who the rapist is...? Shouldn't they be spreading word on who it is, trying to catch this psycho before he gets Mia!?!?
Author's Response: Very good question! The thing is Mia turned away from the television after the reporters interrupted the police chief before he could finish talking. After that, she didn't get the chance to see what else they had to say or pay much attention to the news afterwards. And ofcourse they haven't been able to catch him, yet. Cunning person that Eric is.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/11 08:42 am