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Title: Deception

Poor Kale, he sounds so hurt that Mia's in trouble. I felt so badly for him. And Aidan too, sitting in the seat rocking back and forths. You do know how to bring on the emotions. 

I Love THIS CHAPTER. THe emotions the guys display when they find out mia is introuble is very touching.

Now as for Jasmine, not to be mistaken as me. LOL I think Eric is holding a gun to her head and making her call Mia. Wasn't she next on his list? I figured it out when he yelled at her in the background during the phone call.

I feel sorry for Mia too. She's so trusting, placing your trust in the wrong person can always be a person's downfall... 

Can't wait to read more, your everloving fan 

Reviewer: Jasmine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 08:14 am

Title: Deception

Mia I know you are not stupid, Jasmine has never been your friend and Eric is going to be taken care of. I am so hook on this story. You need to published this story. I am so move by the devotion and the love that Aidan and Kale  has for Mia. Mia need to have twins.Yes I want them to be happy.

Author's Response: Mia has blind trust in the wrong person. Everyone wants the twins LOL. Like I said before, so happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 06:18 am

Title: Deception

I knew it was someone she knew!!! Now I want to know if Jasmine is a victim or if she was apart of this whole set up to hurt Mia??? I hope they find her in time as Eric is definitely a SICKO!!!

Author's Response: Definitely not a set up,well sort of is, but even Jasmine wouldn't knowingly participate in something this evil, she doesn't hate Mia. And yep, crimes like these are usually someone people know. 

Author's Response: Definitely not a set up,well sort of is, but even Jasmine wouldn't knowingly participate in something this evil, she doesn't hate Mia. And yep, crimes like these are usually someone people know. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 05:56 am

Title: Deception

That was just PLAIN STUPID!!! She should have called the ambulance while she on the way there so she could have some witnesses....SMH.



Author's Response:

Jasmine claimed she didn't have any money to pay for an ambulance bill and Mia promised her she would take her to the hospital. She also promised she wouldn't get off the phone with her while she rode over there. This is all from Mia's point of view in the story. She thinks she's doing the right thing, but people do make mistakes. Besides, Mia doesn't know she's in danger until she actually steps in the house. All she knows is that Jasmine has a broken leg and she needs her help. 

 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 05:09 am

Title: Deception

Mia makes me want to slap her some times, because Jasmine has done enough shit to her to last a life time and she still puts herself in danger to run over to help her. I so hope Kale and Aidan get there in time, and Mia kicks Jasmines ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yep, Mia is so busy trying to show Jasmine that she's her best friend that she gets herself in trouble. However,Mia doesn't know Jasmine is decieving her. All she knows is that her friend who she cares about is hurt, has a broken leg, and no one is there for her. So, she treats her like she'd wanted to be treated in her situation. If you read closely, you can see Jasmine is being forced to lie to Mia and Jasmine is trying to apologize to Mia in her own secret way while talking to her on the phone. 

 

Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:50 am

Title: Deception

oh crap that s.o.b I hope kale and aiden get there in time before that sick bastard do anything to her and her friend. Did her friend set her up or she victm like the other women? it must be my birthday to see loving mia twice once yesterday and now today yes lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Jasmine is also a victim who's being forced to lure in another victim, Mia. Oh and Happy Birthday!! 

Author's Response: Jasmine is also a victim who's being forced to lure in another victim, Mia. Oh and Happy Birthday!! 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:38 am

Title: Deception

I knew that it was a trap but she was so stupid,  Who is this Eric?  I don't remember an Eric I need to reread the story.  Eric is in trouble.

Author's Response:

Eric was a guy Jasmine set Mia up with in the chapter Blind Date and yes he is in sooo much trouble. 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:35 am

Title: Deception

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! you cant leave us hangin like that!!!!!!! tomorrow is like a million years away!!!!!! cant you please give us some more crack i mean the next chapter tonite??!?!?!?!??? please!!!!!!!im soooo addicted!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry! I promise to have the next chapter tommorrow. LOL Crack! 

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:34 am

Title: Deception

I knew it had to be someone she knew.

Jasmine is not a good friend.

I hope they get to her soon 



Author's Response: And the drama continues! LOL 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 04:27 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Do your thing Mia...You got them whipped and wrapped around your fingers.

I am suprised Aidan and Kale did not say anything about her ordering groceries and letting a stranger come to the apartment.

I was laugh my but off about the sandwhiches.

Mia found Aidan's to do list...LOL!!!

Great update as usual I can't help but think though this is the calm before the storm.



Author's Response:

They didn't say anything because they were in the apartment with her. They're only worried when they leave and she's alone. 

That list was funny! But it's something Aidan would do. LOL  

You're right, there is a calm before the storm....

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 06:43 pm

Title: Mia's New Life

Aidan is a trip and a half with that list of his!!!  I wonder if anything has happened to Jasmine, because she also has the target qualities the rapist is looking for with all of her sugar daddies... When Kale and Aidan find out who the rapist is, (which I think is creepy Eric) he's gonna get the beatdown of his life...

Author's Response:

Well there's definitely going to be some heart felt drama in the upcoming chapters, funny you should mention Jasmine. 

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 06:11 pm

Title: Cast Pictures for Loving Mia

Great update.

Way to go Mia, great sandwhich.

I kinda feel sorry for the rapist, when Kale and Aidan finds him, he's gonna wish he didn't set his sights on Mia.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:19 pm

Title: Mia's New Life

AN UPDATE EVERY NITE??!?!?! it feels like Christmas in february lol!!!!! i hate that the guys had an accident but im glad it brought the danger to the forefront. the fathers are just as f-ed up as the mothers aint they?!?!?!? aidens daddy in particular. ima have to watch him. at least kales daddy put his lust right out there for everyone to see. i love that shes living with them now and i think its sooo cute how she found aidens relationship 'to do' list. i think i just may be getting my wish of twins by both of them <swoons>!!!!! if she thought she was on lockdown before just wait lol!!! apple juice indeed hee hee!!!! I FLOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! please tell me youre gonna publish it!!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Merry Christmas? I will try to get it published that's for sure. Your excitement makes me excited too! 

 

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 12:55 pm

Title: Mia's New Life

I sure as hell wouldn't mind having Mia's life *sighs dreamily* thanks for the update - made my day!

Author's Response: You're welcome! Heck, I wouldn't mind having her life either. LOL

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:08 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Just Love!

NiaZ ur crazy girl. smh funny.



Author's Response: Thanks! Niaz is too funny. LOL

Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:04 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Gosh there there so gorgeous and in love with Mia I heart this story so much I'm gonna be mad its gonna be gone soon...*pouts*

 

LMAO 



Author's Response: LMAO!!! That's too funny. He really is pouting!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 08:37 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Loved it! Glad she's finally listening to them.

Author's Response: Me too! Glad you loved it. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 05:16 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Who is the serial rapists?  Is that man that was involved with her so called friend Jasmine?  I am loving this story.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough, believe me. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 05:14 am

Title: Mia's New Life

Now that is the life....when they get rid of the crazy..which I really believe is the guy Jasmine set her up with more and more..then they can reallt complete Aiden's list!!!

Twin girls sound perfect cause those women will rule that house for sure....!!!Keep em coming sweeetie..it is soo godd..



Author's Response: Aidan would want twin girls LOL. But we will see! 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 04:41 am

Title: Prank Call

I am trying to guess who it is..I think it is either the boy who jasmine tried to fix her up with or the old white man Jasmine was dating...we will see but his crazy behind has picked the wrong one this time!!

The boys families are a trp..Kale's dad is a big racist bully like his mom but I do like Aiden's dad..at least somebody has sense in the family.

I love the thought of them getting married!! Which one will make it legal..what kind of ceremony?? I love them together...and making it official is going to be beautiful!!

I hate this story is coming to an end,it is one of my all time favorites ..I wwill miss the kids so much!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 04:18 am

Title: Mia's New Life

I feel so giddy and happy. You know how to write a story, complex characters that a person fall in love with. You are such a wonderful writer. I am going to take another break from studying and read the chapters again. Excellent...........

Author's Response: Aww thanks, stop making me blush. LOL I'm really happy you're enjoying the story so much. 

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 04:08 am

Title: Mia's New Life

wow these two are going to break  mia back into two lol. i hope they figuer out soon who it is before that sick s.o.b rape another woman and try to get to mia. i just love kale he so crazy sexy lol. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Good thing Mia is in good health or she'd never be able to handle those two LOL. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 03:34 am

Title: Mia's New Life

I loved the update.  I am so jealous that you were able to do two updates back to back I wish I could do that these days.  I loved how the guys went and just moved Mia out of her apartment LOL that was cute but she got them back that was slick.  Still loving this fic; I can't wait for more. 

Author's Response: It's not easy believe me writing a chapter everyday, believe me, but it's a challenge I have for myself. LOL 

Reviewer: EdenWrites Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:49 am

Title: Prank Call

Thanks for the update. Kale's father is a straight up mess, and I'm glad Kale went at him. As for Aidan's father, I'm still leery of him, especially with the way he was looking at Mia.

I'm happy that they're engaged, but crazy Eric is running around and they don't know it's him to look out for.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:04 am

Title: Prank Call

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 01:32 am

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