Awesome as always!!!
Hate to see this story come to an end.. So this means we get another chapter tonight??? Can't wait!!!!
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 09:24 pm
So it has begun. Please let Mia be safe Jas too. I love how protective Kale and Aidan are of Mia.
Mr. Adair seems to be the only one that has sense where the parents are concerned...Mr. Brayden loves him some brown sugar it would appear as well but decided to go with his wife what a shame.
Great update and glad to hear we will be getting an update nightly until finished.
Happy writing keep up the great workReviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 03:17 pm
Mia,mia you are still stuck on stpid I see!!! I see why Kale haed issues his father is an ass!!! Their parents are a tripp, it was kid of funny. Great chapter.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 08:00 am
Is the hit and run car driven by the Black guy that Jasmine introduced Mia to and set her up on a date? He wasn't happy that Mia wasn't interested, as I recall. Nice update. And an Update every night this week....WOW!
NyeeshaReviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 07:34 am
Ahhhhh intrigue the plot thickens !! This was a cool chapter with the relatives in the hospital room LOL wow crazy stuff there. The moms and the dads are very how do u say blunt. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.Reviewer: EdenWrites Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 06:35 am
wow i'm glad that kale stand up to his dad and adien did the same with his mom. you can't help who you fall in love with and mia make them very happy. so kale dad like the dark meat well we know where kale get it from lol. like they say once you go black you don't turn back lol. i hope mia stay safe that creepy that person giving her that call stalking her and then running over kale and adien. so sad how kale father treat him know wonder why he has such huge issus thanks for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 05:26 am
I read all the chapters again, You have spoil me. Waiting patiently.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 12:29 am
although I'm not a member on here, I love your story and man, was I happy when you said on Twitter(*wink wink, nudge nudge, cough cough*) that the update would be today or tommorrow. Girl, I love this story. And Eric needs to back his rapist self up off of these girls. That's why he's a rapist, ain't nobody wantin' him. He's lucky I can't jump through my phone and whoop his dumb ass. Oh well, Aiden and Kale will do it for me, should he touch Mia in any way. Anywhoo, did he start raping girls before or after his not-so-real date with Mia? Oh, plus Mia finally got the threesome she wanted and mentioned in the chapter where she loses her virginity. Now that was HAWT!!!! Loved it. :DReviewer: bcamille4225 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/02/11 09:39 pm
interesting ending... kinda worried about this Eric fellow haha
but looved the update!!! hot, intense and amazing!!! and in my opinion & input.. If she had to choose one to marry.. i say Kale.. even though the love for both of course is there.. :)Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 03:27 am
Ok...first things first. Eric is sooooooooo creepy. Now that the obvious is out of the way. This was an interesting chapter. I liked it. To be honest at first I was a little annoyed with the fact that Mia kept getting mad with Kale and Aidan but then you explained where she was coming from and it made more sense. And she does tend to do some weird stuff when she's upset. But they are all lovable characters. I can't wait to see what happens next.Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 04:44 am
That was great... and the plot goes on...
I just really hate what Kale did to her in the pool. I mean it was hot but she was drunk and he just took her against her will... anal sex without preparation is very hurtful. water is no preparation. Pool or not. Because water is NO lube. And I agree with an other comment. Mia should buy some toys and show the boys how it feels to have something in your ass when you not prepared. ;) pay back can be really sweet.
But again, great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens nex!
Author's Response: I agree Kale was being sort of an ass, no pun intended, for using that as her punishment, but he did make sure she didn't feel too much pain by quickly taking her mind off it by doing other things to her. Maybe Mia will stick a dildo up Kale while he's sleeping. LOL J/K Reviewer: ella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 06:38 pm
OMG! So Eric is the rapist and Jasmine is his next victim then he is going to try and go after Mia.
I so hope he is not successful with that.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Well you definitely figured out what he was up to! LOL We'll just have to wait and see. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 04:15 am
Eric must be the rapist..well he is about to get a box of whoop ass opened up on him if he tries anything with Mia!!
Ok that blonde got an elbow to the gut and almostt a little more fromn that little fire cracker..the boys are protective of Mia but she is just as protective of them!!
I am glad they are getting there past out in the open..it will assist them in framing their future!!
OK THE THREESOME WAS OFF THE CHAIN THIS TIME..DOUBLE PENETRATION..OH YEAH BABY!!
Great job sweetie...I do love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 10:49 pm
Are you should this is 16 pages, Excellent story. Next time can you write move then one chapter. Kale need to be slap; he did not get permission from Mia to used the back door. Mia should do the same to him. Please update soon.
Author's Response: That's what Microsoft Word told me. LOL I don't know if I can write more than one chapter at once since I'm working on like 3 stories on here and one on fanfiction.net LOL. Kale and Aidan were punishing Mia. We'll see how she handles it in the morning if she's not suffering from a hangover.
Date: 29/01/11 09:06 pm
I have a weird feeling that Eric could be the rapist we heard about. I hope he doesnt hurt Mia.
But on a happer note. Damn that was hot!!! I mean really HOT!! I always wondered if they were every going to try that.
I can not wait till the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: They got to it sooner or later. Poor Mia didn't know what hit her...LOL Thanks for the review! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 08:34 pm
Loved it!!! You outdid yourself with this one KatMad!!!! I laughed so hard at the line, "it looks like we're being invaded by ants!!" Hahahaha. I hope Mia at least gave that trifling Jasmine a piece of her mind before recruiting her to piss Kale and Aiden off. I am so glad she didn't take any mess from that skank Arianna, and so glad Kale and Aiden didn't put up with her bull crap either. Nothing drives me crazier than when I'm reading a story and there's some trifling skank mouthing off to the heroine while her man stands by amused. So happy with the way you handled that scene.
And of no!! Eric is the rapist!!! I can't believe it. I hope Mia puts her high heels in his scrotum and fends him off to show Kale and Aiden that she's stronger than she looks although yeah, they do owe Eric a beat down as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. My hats off to you!!
Author's Response: I hear ya with the herorine Happy, I can't stand to read about a man just standing there while someone else insults his woman even if it is a female. Thanks for the great review! Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 07:34 pm
Yaay, I have been lookin forward to this for this update katmad!
Their relationship is starting to change. Especially in the alst chapter when Aidan got locked out. It will be intresting to see how they deal with this.
Blimey this jasmin girl is a bit of a nutter aint she!?! She has never had Mia's best intrest at all.
Ahh and who is this Eric fella? The plot unravels...
BRILLIANT UPDATE!!!Reviewer: MissVee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 06:36 pm