You are killing me, this story is excellent, supreb and it kick ass. I should be studying for my midterm.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 06:51 am
I so like this story, the writing is supreb and real.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 04:54 am
Well I wonder who might be pregnant? Intense, well I guess we have another example of the love these two have for little Miss Mia. How well she completes them.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 04:25 am
I started reading this on fictionpress and I have to tell you that I am so glad that you are finishing it on here. To have the love of two guys like this is something ;)
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 10:21 pm
Adian is such a cutie. Can't wait for the next part.
Reviewer: Lorrnae Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 10:15 pm
OMG another update! Please update again over the weekend! I loved this chapter.
Favorite parts: Kale grabbing Aidan and telling him to FIX this. I don't know about anyone else, but that was so touching to me.
Aidan sitting outside all night in the cold refusing to leave Mia and then making passionate desperate love to her when she let him in. I could have fainted reading that scene. It was so heart touching.
Oh and I liked when Mia slapped Aidan. LOL The boy didn't know what hit him. That took me by surprise too. Oh! and even after the slap and the nasty argument, he still made Kale drive her home because she had been drinking. So precious...I love Aidan for that.
By the way, I agree with Este78, it seems like a few people are really trying hard to find "something" bad to say about your story when there really isn't. Some of what they are saying don't make sense to me. I suggest they reread the story before they try to talk down about it.
Well remember this, you can't please EVERYONE someone is always going to say something negative. I read a lot of reviews about very popular books and they go through the same thing. Look at Twilight! Half a million people love it and half a million people talk bad about it, but the author is making lots of money so who cares!
Keep writing because you are an awesome, talented author.
Reviewer: Jasmine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 09:25 pm
For the ones who complain so much about the story do yourself a favor and don't read it. Ugh, the annoyance is so overwhelming.
Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 02:30 pm
Dang Kathy you doing it again girl you go!! I was saving this for another post but Dayuuuum....
Haha your the best!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 12:25 pm
Also, Mia doesn't seem to be taking the fact the Aidan purposely got her fired too seriously. That is an intense betrayl, especially since you spent an entire expository chapter on how hard Mia worked to get the job she had. I hope they really talk about how terrible that is other than, "I just love you so much, Mia, and I wanted to protect you. I just couldn't control myself" and amazing sex.
It would be so disappointing to for Mia to get pregnant. I know it seems really romantic but it would pretty much negate all the hard work she supposedly did to get away from the South and work toward becoming an acutal executive in her industry of choice. Besides that, pregnancy is cliche. I love this story; I think it's the hottest thing on this site right now. I'd hate to see it go in that direction!
Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 09:11 am
I love this story, but this chapter makes Mia seem so materialistic. Her boyfriend tells her she looks like a hooker for wearing resort wear and then it's all better because they got a her a very exclusive credit card and fuck her in the back of the car in a restaurant parking lot? That's abusive on Kale's part and shallow on Mia's.
Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 09:05 am
Dang Kathy you doing it again girl you go!! I was saving this for another post but Dayuuuum....
Haha your the best!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 08:39 am
OOOOOO so glad u updated but i dont want mia to be pregnant just yet lol! but if thats where the story is going well wat can i do! yeah thanks soooooo much for the update i absolutly loved it!! poor aiden and kale i did think they were really possesive of her in the last chapter but i felt really sorry for them in this one especially aiden he was soooo sweet to wait for her lol! made me go all funny i love them both i want an aiden and kale hahaha great chapter update soon XxX
Reviewer: BubbleGum7 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/01/11 12:38 am
That was so great! I am LOOOVVVING IT! Seriously. When I first read the story I didn't think it could work and still be an interesting story line, but the characters make it work and in a way that is so refreshing. Please update soon. I need me a fix already.
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:31 pm
Aiden can be a tad....scary. But he's pretty awesome. For some reason this chapter reminds me of that Chrisette Michele song-porcelain doll. This was really good. The more I read this story the more I like it.
Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 09:08 pm
OMG!
A friend of mine recommended this story to read and i must say this has not failed expectations. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I love the Kale Kyra and Aiden mix and PREGNANT!!! I must say you have some major writing skills i can't wait to the next update.
Reviewer: L'CleirSun Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 09:19 am
Loved the update! Wow, Mia was a tough cookie on the guys but glad she made up with Aidan. Now she just has to work on Kale now.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 07:05 am
Sooo Mia almost made me slap her on that one. Like seriously...its that big of a deal that he wanted her to move in...and used a little manipulation to do so. IDK but I think those kinds of things are cute, it shows how serious he was about her coming to stay with them. Call me crazy.
Anyways! Thanks got the good update!
Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 06:23 am
:) WONDERFUL!!! I am happy she could not stay mad long @ Aiden shoot I couldn't either cause I was feeling her plyt with everything she said and i was a bit peaved @ him too but when she broke I broke too.
Yes, Mia baby girl you are so pregnant.
Thank you for sharing
Happy Writing
[Report This]Date: 14/01/11 03:18 am
:) WONDERFUL!!! I am happy she could not stay mad long @ Aiden shoot I couldn't either cause I was feeling her plyt with everything she said and i was a bit peaved @ him too but when she broke I broke too.
Yes, Mia baby girl you are so pregnant.
Thank you for sharing
Happy Writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 03:18 am
wow he stood out in the cold waiting for her yeah he is in love for sure. I think that so sweet he did for her and now she understand why he did it but hope adien and kale learn from this. when they try to control her it back fires big time so it best to give her a little room every now and then. but if she going to have a baby watch out these two proably never let her out their sight lol. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 02:03 am
Ok I was starting to feel so badly for Aiden...I know she was mad at him and teh boys are very controlling but they do love her endlessly..she had to know that and that they were very selfish with her as well.
I don't think Aiden will ever make that mistake again...and even Kale may calm down some...I am so relieved they made up because I could not take a break up either. The boys put it all out there for her..I just want them to be happy!!
Oh boy a baby maybe..I think everyone will be happy about that but Aiden's parents..lol lol!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 01:07 am
Thank you for this update! It was sooo great.Finally Mia grown a backbone and said her piece. I have high hope that changed things a bit and those guys keep treating her right. That he saw his mistake… what he done so she forgives him… all very sweet. I like it.
Reviewer: ella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 12:14 am
Great update. Those boys are crazy, but, Mia has a point, they are too controlling.
Thanks
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 11:58 pm
PREGNANT???
Wow, could that change the whole dynamic of their relationship? I am proper looking forward to what ensues...
Ahh I actually did feel sorry Andrew, poor lad. He was lucky that Mia was there...or Aiden would of destroyed him mate.
Ahh love this story Katmad!! Looking forward to more..!!
Reviewer: MissVee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 10:09 pm
Yep!! She's sooo pregnant.
The question is who will be the father.
Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 09:08 pm