I bow down to the talent that is yours KM. This chapter was off the hook. Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! I loved how Aiden showed her how much he loved her by staying out on her porch all night, I loved how they came together at the end. And I loved how Kale seemed to lose it when he realized their family could break up. This chapter was the bomb diggity. And no. Mia isn't so pregnant. She's SOOOOOOOO VERY VERY VERY PREGNANT!! LOL An insy weensy little request though, I know its extremely rare possibly one in 20 million, but could she have twins, with both Aiden and Kale fathering one child each. I have read cases where that has happened, and you're good enough to pull that off.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/01/11 09:05 pm
Loved the update!! Mia may be pregnant, Kale and Aiden will get their wish.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 08:15 pm
i'm soo pregnant... you don't say, Mia!!!? lol! loved the update. the emotions the characters went through from beginning to end was realistic and understandable - really well written. thank you so much for the update! i wish the rating could be higher than 10 because this story is more than a ten!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 04:58 pm
I'm glad that she forgave Aidan. He loves her and he made a mistake. His waiting outside so long was his penance. I'm glad she finally let him inside the house. She clearly loves him back. And yeah....she is soooooo pregnant. LOL. I hope its Aidan's child.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 01:30 pm
Mia is surely love indeed I agree about the title it fits each of them. Now, the scene with Adian outside with the flowers and chocolates had me rollin.
Great update!
Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/01/11 11:38 am
Another great chapter. I think the chapter title fit the moment. Everyone from Mia to Kale to Aidan was torn about the what was happening around them.
I mean Aidan is so about protecting Mia that he sometimes forgets that she isn't a "China Doll" that can't handle him having a true open and honest conversation with her. He has been the protector so long that sometimes I think he forgets that he doesn't have to smoother others to make them see his way. I am glad that Mia made him realize that when she shut him out.
Kale cracks me up because for such a "Bully" at times he surely doesn't know how to handle the other emotionsthat come along with being in a serious relationship. He couldn't wrap his mind around being with Mia and Aidan not being their because Aidan is always there. Him telling Aidan to fix things with Mia or they would be over was too much. All I kept thinking was Kale would break up with Aidan but Kale would not know how to function.
Mia doesn't truly understand the powers she has over Kale and Aidan, and even other men. She doesn't see how she puts herself in certain situations where others feel like they have to manipulate her in a sense to keep her safe. Mia could probably protect herself, but I don't think she always understands who "they" are that she should be protecting herself from. She trust so openly that it makes sense for Aidan to want to manipulate her.
In the end each one of the main characters where torn and need reassurance to what was going on and in the end I think they all got it. I look forward to finding out if Mia is truly pregnant or not. But since a woman tends to know her own body she probably is. Twins by to different men, very interesting story I would have to say. ;)
Looking forward to the next update, and thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 11:08 am
OMG OMG OMG I finally got an update message YEAH. I loved the last two sections very much. Aidan was so cute the way he waited for her to open the door and I am glad Kale left him to deal with it. I have really enjoyed this fic from the start. I can't wait to see what happens next and I do hope Mia is pregnant. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: EdenWrites Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/11 08:57 am
ok so I love this story, so funny AND hot. However I do sometimes think Mia, Aidan and Kale won't end up together forever lol. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: alphabet_girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 10:55 pm
Wow… I read it all at once.You really are a great writer and the story is good. It’s something else… a women who get’s two hot men.. I like that.I just hope you don’t make those two guys to possessive and controlling. Don’t get me wrong I like stories with strong men but I also like strong women. When he said that she looks like a hooker I was like WTF?! To say it’s part her fault because she dresses provocative is just wrong. It’s not her fault when they don’t have control of their dicks. It’s like you say a victim of rape it’s her fault because she dressed like she did. That’s just wrong.I’m just saying this because I like this story and I like Mia’s character… it would be a shame if she just became the doll of those two. People often confuse controlling with caring and love. It those men love her they let her be herself and support her.
Reviewer: ella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 07:34 pm
Loved the update. Mia was playing with fire and got burnt!! I hope Aiden does not do damage to Andrew as he didn't know Mia was in a relationship.
Please update soon!!
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/01/11 10:52 am
Aidan is off the chain its the soft ones you have to watch!!!!! kale is the nice one
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 04:44 am
WELL, MIA YOU BETTER WAKE UP AND STOP FOOLING. THESE MEN ARE SERIOUS!!! LOVE THE UPDATE!! THANK YOU!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 03:59 am
OMG! Mia is definitily on lockdown now. All these men coming out the work...
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 03:24 am
OOOOOH SOMEBODY'S GONNA GET THEIR A-- BEAT ! BITTING MY NAILS ! :->
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 03:09 am
How dare you?? How could you end it right there.
I'm so addicted to this story. Please update quickly.
I want to know what Aiden's gonna do to Andrew.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 02:36 am
It looks like Aidan is going to beat Andrew to a pulp. Please post the next chapter SOON.
Reviewer: Tia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 12:59 am
Okay...now I like the thought of Mia having 2 good looking wealthy men but they are TOO OVERPROTECTIVE and POSSESSIVE. They're telling her what to wear...they don't want her to work in their office....she can't talk to men in social gatherings...WTH???? That's TOO POSSESSIVE...
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 10:09 pm
Fuck K that was hot, all I can say is damn!
Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 05:15 pm
OMG!!!!!! UPDATED SOON LIKE RIGHT NOW!!
Reviewer: SAILOR V19 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 04:09 pm
Thanks for a great update. Aidan is not a happy guy and Mia is going to actually see how much she means to him. Andrew is a little stalkerish if you ask me. The man couldn't figure out that Mia was with Aidan/Kale. But I guess he is going to learn it the hard way.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Aidan has never shown this side and I think it is time that Mia see it because she will finally realize how intense Aidan truly loves her. It is a good thing that is was just Aidan, he has some restraint but not much, if it was Kale he would have punched first and moved Mia out of the way later.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 04:02 pm
Faint! Great Update.
Reviewer: Este78 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 03:53 pm
OMG..Mia should have known the boys would be following her everywhere she went..they are already crazy jealous and Andrew trying to kiss her was over the top.
He had to have seen her walking around on Aiden's arm all night. Mia really should not have let Andrew get that close. She knows her boys. Yes, the boys are wayyy to possessive but I think in this situation they have just caused.
Mia might have a chance to talk to Aiden..he is normally rational so I think Andrew better be glad he is not now facing Kale..or he might be dead. I hope this does not damage their relationship or make them even more possessive.
BTW I was laughing hysterically with the boys dreaming about a pregnant Mia in the sundress , barefoot with her hair flowing..it was hysterical..they are so gone!!
OMG sex with two in back seat of a car..uhh yeah..too hawwt!!
Welccome back sweetie...the updt was off the chain good!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 02:51 pm
This story is really heating up. But it still sound like Mia is still conflicted about the relationship. Everyone's expectations needs to be laid out. She seems to want to date and they want to own. I hope they figure it out.
Reviewer: shereads48 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 02:08 pm
Well now that is how you do a threesome!!! Wow. I knew I loved this story for a reason.
Looks like there is a new sheriff in town named Aiden, but I want to see what my tiger Kale is going to do!!!!! Love it
Ro
Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 02:02 pm
You left us hanging like that??? You are so wrong for that.. Can we get an update today or tomorrow? That would be nice..
She got a Black Card.. You go Mia.. I ain't mad at cha one bit..
Poor Andrew, he didn't know Mia had a man or two.. Hahaha.. It's not his fault.. Don't hurt him too much Aidan.. We knew Adian had a violent side to him but never really seen it now we are going to get a full picture..
I have a feeling Mia will be punished and on locked down for a while when they get her home.. I want to be punished so good the was I know Kale and Aidan will punish her..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 01:29 pm