That's dead wrong! You stop noooo. That was so freakin HOT!! Please hurry back women.
Reviewer: The Keeper Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 11:31 am
*gapping* I can't speak. I think my head just exploded - it was too damn hot for my own good, lol!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/12/10 11:19 am
That was so mind blowing and intense. Mia is one lucky lucky girl. She has 2 strong, handsome, loving , passionate etc etc men P-Whipped and wrapped around her litle finger oh the power she hails and she slap put Kale our and if they were in a bed she probably would have done the same to Aidan.
Now as for as the limited condom use between the 2 handsome ones. I thought that all thru the loving making and was going now wouldn't it be something if Mia got pregnant her first time out the gate it is not uncommon u know and oh lord if she think they are bad now with wanting to carry her and touch her, pamper her and take care of her she may as well forget it that's a wrapt they will hard if ever let her do anything at all again as Kale said earlier she was on lockdown then that would truly be the ultimate statement then if that happy and I aint even mad either about that pregnancy I know she had big plan for her furture career wish but sista may as well hang it up for awhile if not forever cause Aidan seems like he would be the stay @ home type of husband if not father he has already dreamed and fantazied and selected names for the future Kale jr, Aidan Jr, and Mia Jr of their join.
Girl look at me I am just rambling.
Loved the update Mia is finally physically theirs cause they have had her emotionally for a long while now.
*CLAP* *CLAP* *CLAP* I APPLAUD YOUR CREATIVITY CHICA!!!!!
See you on the flip side
Thank you !
Happy Writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 10:32 am
Oh My gosh I love the beginning of this fic. I was so excited I didn't sign in LOL I can't wait to read more of this beautiful story.
Reviewer: EdenWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 10:20 am
Finally, they DID IT! I am glad she chose Kale first based upon his reaction. He changed him in a wonderful way to be chosen first. And Aidan is a man after my own heart. And no condom?.......well, I can hardly wait to see if there will be any consequence(s). LOL.
This Update was more than a "10"!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 10:12 am
I love hot, butt naked sex, and you did not disappoint!!! That was hot!!! There could be baby forming right now, Mia has nothing to worry about Kale and Aidan aren't letting her leave them. Loving this story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 10:11 am
I followed you here from fiction press. Just to be sure. Which chapters did you change up so I know where to start from?
Reviewer: Chrissa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 03:27 am
Finally, I get to review this chapter. First, I'd like to say that I hate you. Second, I'd like to say that I love you. Okay, now that part is done and over with. I need to jump into the Arctic Ocean because that was just HOT, HOT, HOT! As I was reading this chapter, I had the song 'Disco Inferno' in my brain playing over and over and I could have sworn that I smelled something burning because it was just that hot.
I was actually surprised that she wanted Kale to do it and not Aidan especially considering she has more of a sensual connection with Aidan while her relationship with Kale is more like budding heads but in a really sexy way, LOL.
Update, update, update! I demand it. Please.
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 09:49 pm
i just think that was so mean to drop us right there. i dont want to rush you or anything but update soon! please!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 06:32 pm
Lawd! (fans self) Those three are scorching HAWT!
Kale! That was a sweet emotional decision. I think we will see a very different side of Kale in his lovemaking.
This was yet another wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait for part 2!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 11:54 am
You can't stop right there in the story! Stop teasing!!!
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 08:34 am
NiaZ gurl you are crazy! You lok like you are having a fit. But I total understand maybe we al should be down there with you. Miss KM you are the woman. HAIL KM. LOVING EVERYTHING about this story. I has a WOW fact, excuse me TWO WOW FACT! Glad she pick Kale, this will go a long way in makeing him feel accepted I think. But alas it is only a story. But I love it. NOW give us more before we hurt you Sucka!!!
Just joking!!!!!
UPDATE PLEASE!! I need something to read at work tomorrow!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 06:50 am
That was pretty hot. I figured she would choose Kale, and I'm happy she did.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 03:54 am
I love Kale, I don’t know why exactly but I do…he cracks me up when he’s being an ass! It’s part of his charm. lol There’s just something about him that is very appealing. I guess it’s the testosterone he exudes so openly and the fact the he’s very candid with no apologies. (His admittance of his wayward youth makes me wonder about his past.) And although he’s a little rough around the edges, one can clearly see how gentle yet passionate he will be. I'm glad she chose him to be her ‘first’. He’ll make it especially sensual for her, they both will.
Aiden is a sweetheart, a little too sensitive for my tastes (I like roughnecks lol), nevertheless, Aiden balances those two out. He’s the calm in between two hot-heads.
Next up…? A little less talking and a whole lotta LOVING. Hehehe Can’t wait for the pillow-talk afterwards.
Very nice chapter katherine! Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 03:39 am
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *FAINTS*
Author's Response: What the hell? Is that you..Is she dying? I see death written across the screen...O_O Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 03:13 am
i so love you so much for this but not in a weird way i can't wait for the next add
Author's Response: Awww...feels the love too, but not in a weird way also lmao
Date: 01/12/10 02:50 am
that was hot u. had me moaning. lol
Author's Response: Oh my! LOL
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 02:25 am
Why should Mia have all the fun!! I want one of those sexy as heck men!! Lawd they were wearing that sista out..what a way to lose your virginity.
But they are still so loving to her...Aiden is one sweet talking gorgeous man...and sexy as heck. It was funny when he said he always thought he derserved her..lol.
Kale insecure..I am not shocked though and that is why Mia choose Kale I think.she is a loving person and he will probably surprise us with his tenderness.
I cannot wait for more...Absolutely hawtness sweeetie!
Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review I love the way you described the Kale and Aidan, I would think you've met them in person. LOL Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 02:22 am
Okay, so normally I hate when writers post one version and then revise it but this. I love this new direction. It's really moving the story along and is HOTTTT. Please update tonight!
Author's Response: Thanks for being so opened-minded. The previous version was bugging the heck out of me and I realize I took it down the wrong road, but I'm back on track. This is something I never do and I was afraid some of my older fans wouldn't like it. Some of them did, others were angry, but what can I do? One thing for sure, it won't happen again.
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 01:51 am
kale going to lay down the law ... city warrior style
Author's Response: Hell yeah!
Date: 01/12/10 12:25 am
Oh my I didn't even know this chapter was here already and was beggin like crazy checking in almost several times a day It 's sucha influx of new stories I had to go to the most recent to finally find it thank u!!!LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 12:04 am
I only have one word...hot Hot HOTT. Personally I would have chosen Aidan to be first...but that's just me. Anywho...Mia is living the DREAM. Two hot sexy men wanting her at the same time... I think you may have inspired me to write my own story...but maybe with a little Seoulsinger twist! Hahha The story is fabulous...keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well if you write it, I will read it! I love threesome stories as you can see. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 10:06 pm
well it own like pop corn dammmm lol. i wouldnt' able to talked myelf either lol. wow thought she would pick aidan as her first but let see how kale going to handle the loving thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: I'm interested in seeing how my man Kale is going to deal with it too. LOL I just never know what my characters are going to do next.
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 08:56 pm
Dam!! That was good.
I can't wait for Mia and Kale.
I better have a glas of water beside me, when I'll be reading their chapter.
Author's Response: LMAO! Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 08:16 pm
Love this story! Please submit more than one chapter at a time!! You are kiling me :)
Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 07:17 pm