i think mia picked kale to be the one to 'officially' take her virginity to help him truly understand how much she loves him and that he really DOES deserve her. also things seem to flow so naturally with her and aidan that kale could be thinking she doesnt love him as much as she does aidan that and the fact that she and kale are so much alike theyre always butting heads. im very glad that theyre all experiencing this moment together instead of her being with each of them separately. thank you sooo much katherine! i really love this story and i cant wait for the rest. i would love to see these three married and pregnant (swoon).
Author's Response: You are exactly right, I was wondering if anyone would understand why she chose Kale instead. Thank you for so much for loving the story! Married and pregnant, I may just have to write a sequel. hehe
Date: 30/11/10 05:14 pm
That was hot, those two men are fine as hell. They are going to do Mia so good. I am never been jealous of character in a story until now. 15l64
Author's Response: I'm jealous too. LOL
Date: 30/11/10 04:52 pm
Hot Damn!!!
I swear Aidan and Kale are Yin/Yang.
Author's Response: Yes they are, which makes them so sexy. Reviewer: The Keeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/10 04:07 pm
Woohoo! They have or are about to make it offical.
Mia no longer a virgin and her belong to her 2 big handsome hunk of a men.
Wonderful update and intimate scene was hot ta death.
thank you
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yep, Mia is about to belong only to them, poor girl. She's really in for it. LOL Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 03:01 pm
Holy cockerspaniels! That was the shyt! Next chapter please!
Author's Response: LOL cockerspaniels...
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 02:32 pm
Wow!! This is a real fantasy story!! There's nothing wrong with that! :) Love the writing style its so easy to read and get totally absorbed in what's happening. I'm at work at the moment and I've not been able to do any work!! So that should tell you how awesome this story is. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 01:59 pm
HOT DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOWEE!!!!!! its about time they got busy lol!! you are soooo wrong to stop it there though katherine hee hee!!! that was HAWT!!!! cant wait for part 2!!!THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome! It was good for me too. LMAO
Date: 30/11/10 01:41 pm
YES!!! At last, they are coming together! And all three of them need to loosen up. LOL.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: LOL I know. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 12:54 pm
Kat.M, no freakin words! That update was mind-blowing! I'm having a hard time catching my breath, lol! I can only imagine how the next is going to be!!!
So HOT HOT HOOOTTT!!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it LOL Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 11:23 am
Jesus! Have mercy on my soul! That was hot! Loving this story!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 05:33 am
All I can say is Mia has wayyyyyyyy more self control then I ever could. Just sayin
Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]Date: 29/11/10 09:23 am
I just started reading this story yesterday and I must say that I'm enjoying it. Aiden and Kale – who is my fav treat, yummy – initially seemed…desperate or young or something I can’t quite put my finger on but they’ve grown on me and I see understand their unique bond, and especially the love they have for Mia.
I also realize Mia’s apprehension and vulnerabilities now that she knows how they feel about her and more importantly, how she feels about them. During the last scene I was like, ‘oh no, they’re going to consummate their relationship without Kale!’ But I'm glad they, or rather Mia, pumped the brakes b/c the trio are a couple now…especially since this will be special time of her life; she’ll ‘become a woman’ as it were and that should include both of them making love to her…not just one.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/11/10 02:08 am
I just started reading this wonderful story yesterday and I am hooked.
I love Mia and the boys and how their elationships have blossomed...I think Mia will come to undersand that Aiden as her first was a good idea even though the boys didnt give her chance to make that decision ...also the boys, espeecially Kale , are going to have to let Mia be herself and makee her own decisions good or bad..she did evnetually choose them afteralll....
Great job sweetie!!Cannot wait for more
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 29/11/10 02:06 am
please update.....
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 10:30 pm
wow can these men get any more crazy and stupid lol. first you deicde for a grown woman who was going to be her first wow so crazy lol. he lucky she didnt' hit him in the balls lol. i hope they fix it thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 08:57 pm
bahaha... the last part of this story is hilarious! i <3 how she is sticking up for herself right now... those two are too much sometimes. looking forward to seeing how this pans out
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 06:33 pm
Great update!
Damn, I'm going to shake Mia like a rag doll! Girl, is such a buzz killer. So, she's a virgin. Kale freaked out. He admitted liking it hard and fast. He told her that Aidan is the gentle nurturing one. She knows Kale is a bit wild and untamed.
It makes sense to me that Aidan would be her first. She wants him just as much. So when is she going to stop with the temper tantrums?? Kale and Aidan are who they are. She knows that too.
As for the ass-whoppin' they put on the two guys... more power to them, especially to Aidan who obviously acted out of character.
Aidan and Mia together are HOT.
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 12:19 pm
Good for Mia! She needs to let them know who runs things, lol.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 09:53 am
Oh well! So sorry Aidan you and Kale messed up she is a grown woman and has a mind of her own. I think she would have chosen you to be her first but now I don't know. I think you should myself b/c you seem more romantic, patient and gentle as to my boo Kale he is a little rough around the edges brasser and harder so to speake in the making love department don't get me wrong he woudl be gentle with you if he was first but hey
Great update I thought so sure that was going to be some hot hot love making but noooooooo Aidan and Kale being their domineering selves in their own ways franked that up.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 09:47 am
I'm so happy Kale said what I was thinking. Mia, girl stop! *smh*
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 09:22 am
I love Aidan! He's so sweet and adorable!
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 08:39 am
Another stunning chapter!!! Now Update!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 08:06 am
Interesting update. Loved it. This relationship is definitely challenging.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 07:50 am
LOL. Poor Aidan. Talk about having blueballs!
That's what his behind gets. Apparently he and Kale are determined to learn the hard way that loving Mia doesn't mean that they get to make all decisions for her without her input or consent.
Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 07:27 am
you so made up for posting late with this chapter i loved it
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 05:43 am