Lol..there definetly wont be a bad lay with two hunks around.
Reviewer: Lorrnae Signed [Report This]Date: 12/09/11 06:15 am
Aside from the miscarriage, glad of the happy ending(: Now she can give them both a child at the same time(:
My favorite man was Aidan. He was the perfect gentleman. So caring and had good intentions from the start. Kale is a little too rough for my personal taste.. I think Mia and Kale would make a great couple becuase they could butt heads all they wanted but at the end of the day still make up and be together.
Im so glad I had a chance to read this:) it was exciting and had alot of imagery which I love in a story. Nice details in the character's emotions. I hope you continue to write more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing all the chapters, I really appreciate it and enjoyed reading your reviews! I'm very glad you like Aidan, most people like Kale because of his aggressiveness lol. I'm happy you enjoyed reading the story, it was very fun for me to write! And welcome to The Chamber!!
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:32 pm
Kale should have killed him. I know I would have. smdh.
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:26 pm
this is where I fall back in love with Kale. sticking up for his woman EVEN AGAINST his own flesh and blood. thats what Im talking about(:
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:19 pm
lol youd think theyd use a dildo to make it easier on her for her first time and all.. smdh.
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:17 pm
lol awww Aidan<3<3 He stood outside in the freezing cold for her!!! God.. I think this is my favorite chapter. I like Aidan the best lol my goodness, how did you make me fall in love with these made up characters of yours?!?!
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:10 pm
I feel so dirty reading this O_O but its soooo good!!
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:07 pm
I seriously need Aidan in my life dammit. He's freakin perfct ahh.
this is the other chapter I love to come back and reread(: the datails you provide give me a movie to play in my head lol
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 10:02 pm
LMAOO!!! I love Mia's mom ^_^ glad she was able to accept their relationship.
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 09:57 pm
I come back and reread over this chapter >:) lol love it!!! Personally Id pick Aidan to take my virginity anyday over Kale. Hes so much more passionate and such a sweetheart(:
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 09:48 pm
I think its cute how well Kale and Aidan balance each other out. Like Kale is the strict father and Aidan is the pushover mother. I love it!(:
But smdh at this chick getting mad about Kale and Aidan beating up the men that attacked her. REALLY Mia??? then she gets mad because Aidan and Kale discussed who was gonna take her virginity. Why not just call Kale to come over so he can join in:) Its not fair that she gets the both of them. Aidan is soo suave =p
by the way, excuse me for getting so emotional about the ficitonal characters ^_^ lol I know its pathetic but goodness im in love with this story!
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 06:30 am
Its kinda hard writing a review for each chapter since I already read it and know whats going to happen O_o lol
I have to admit. At first I found the men's possesive actions a little annoying and creepy on Mia's behalf. But love is what motivates their crazy actions I realized :) I love how they want to protect her and try to always make sure to stick around.
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 06:17 am
lol I think its kinda cute how possesive Kale is. Mia just needs to stop being soo denial.
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 05:50 am
I like your writing style (: Its so easy to read, and you give great detail and describe their emotions so well!
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 05:41 am
Hey (: I'm boookie from fictionpress lol I can NOT believe you havent posted this over there!! I seriously stayed up late for 3 nights straight reading through all 24 chapters, and was gonna wait to sign up and review each chapter(: I still secretly love to go back and read certain chapters over and over again >:) lol steamy scenes makes it addictive to read!!
But anyways, ill start with the cast images. They match up PERFECTLY. Did you find these images before or after you started writing? 'Mia' looks kinda familiar.. 'Aidan' is such a cutie(: Kale's brute ass looks good too:)
Reviewer: mostamaziing Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 05:37 am
Done, done, and done. I loved it! Very romantic, extremely hot, and a good read. I am so happy to have them in another story now too and see their future. Mia is great and the guys.......well who would not consider them?
Great story!!
Reviewer: Jensi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/11 08:30 pm
I love this story. You are a very talented writer!
Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 25/07/11 10:35 pm
please tell me there is a sequel cause if there is that would be really great!!!!!
Reviewer: joanna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/07/11 09:45 pm
Such a wonderful story, Kale and Aiden are so over protective, they can't possibly get any worse with the babies. I was so glad when Eric got his, Kale should have continued to batter him. I hope the mothers calm down now that they have grandchildren on the way, but who knows with those two women.
Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 04:27 pm
That was beautiful. and oh how i missed these three.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 04:43 am
i love this story sooo much i had to come back and read it again! BRAVA KATHERINE BRAVA!!! cant wait for the sequel. im hoping you pick up right where you left off. id really like to see some more tender pregnancy moments with them and even some pregnant lovin - naughty i know hee hee!! :-) then of course im looking forward to the guys reaction when they witness mia nursing the babies for the first time sooo precious.....<swoon> did i say i cant wait cuz i CANT WAIT LOL!!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/03/11 03:13 pm
Sexy!!!! I had to take a break reading this chapter...hot hot hot
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: 28/02/11 12:01 am
Oh its over i cant believe it :(! but then again now i can read it all over and over again! Great job and wooop wooop a sequel cannot wait for that one all three of them handling babies ha ha!
my fav guy had to be KALE, he just made me melt he has that bad boy outlook but deep down he just a big ole softie and he loves mia out, not to say i didnt love aiden he was just as sweet but kale woo hoo the man is fine ha ha!
But to sum it all up ur story was awesome and ive seen some people write negative reviews, just ignore them ur a fab writer! XxX
Reviewer: BubbleGum7 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/11 11:33 pm
I can't wait to see how this story plays out....I understand Kale's and Aidan's attraction to her but to assume that she will be both of their lovers is extreme (and sexy at the same time)....Eventually one of them will win Mia's entire heart, body, and mind.....
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/11 08:34 pm
Loved this story, I hope you write another one like it. You got some great writing skills. Can't wait to read the sequel!
Reviewer: Neesa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/02/11 06:51 am