im sooo glad they f'ed those crackheads up! though i understand mias reasons i was really disappointed when she put the brakes on. originally i wanted aidan to be her first too but now id like all three of them to experience her first time together. i think that would be so much more special and she loves them equally so why choose? on a different note i cant help but get excited whenever they mention children. i sure hope you take us that far into their relationship. if theyre spoiling her now i can only imagine lol! thanks for another magnificent update!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 05:38 am
Another one of your stories I'm in love with! Chile if I was Mia... hmph!! Whoo-wee! I can't wait for an update and I just know their love scene, Mia&Kale or Mia&Aiden or Aiden/Mia/Kale(Hotness) is going to be an eye on the stove hot! Probably hotter! Forever a fan of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! LOL Reviewer: PasionK Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 04:46 am
Just found this story and I am Loving Mia! LOL What we have here people is a failure of communication. Aidan and Kale might have thought they were doing the right thing by making their own decision of who would be Mia's first, but I don't blame Mia for getting angry. It's her body after all, they should have discussed it along with her instead of setting her up. Men...gotta love them but boy can they hit a sore spot!
Great chapter I hope to see another tommorrow! Please!
Author's Response: Exactly what I was going for, thanks for pointing it out! Reviewer: Tory Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 03:04 am
I'm still totally loving this story .Great job .
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 28/11/10 02:39 am
Thank you for this chapter!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
Date: 28/11/10 02:20 am
Argh Mia! Ok, she can choose but she needs to hurry up. :) I hope there is a big sex scene coming in the next chapter! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: LOL Everyone is impatiently waiting for big sex scene, I find that so funny. LOL Well your wait time is soon over.
Date: 28/11/10 02:19 am
Close....but no cigar! Mia loves these guys, she and they should work on improving their communication skills. And I think the guys chose Aidan to go first because can express tenderness more easily than Kale, who likes his sex hard and fast. She's a virgen and they are trying to be thoughtful....come on Mia,...get with the program, here.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
You're right, Kale did think Aidan would be better for Mia because he is very patient and seems to have a lot more control than Kale. Mia understands that, but she still didn't like being set up, they could have at least told her what they planned to do. She likes to think she has some control over her body.
Thanks for the reviews. I love it when my reviewers get into the story and agree and disagree and so forth, so exciting!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 28/11/10 01:32 am
WELL, Mmmm good, More Please. love how it is moving along.Great job
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/11/10 02:52 pm
This is a really good story and it's getting better and better.
Reviewer: will2pear Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/10 05:20 am
LOVE this story have read all that you had in FFP want more please. I love your stories . Mia and her boys (Adian needs to be bigger,meaner, rougher looking- the pictures love the other two) are so good together. Keep writing. Great job!!!!! AGAIN WELCOME!!!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/10 01:32 am
I really like this story.
I read it over at Fanfiction. but since it's here, I can't help but read it again.
Fantastic
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 25/11/10 03:07 pm
Finally, she accepted them and revealed her true feelings. I hope the Men do not get themselves in trouble!! This episode is better than any movie out there!
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 25/11/10 06:53 am
GREAT UPDATE! I'm glad that Mia FINALLY accepted them. This was a "no-brainer!" LOL. And I sure hope SOMEbody follows up with Ms. Jasmine for that blind date stunt. Seems like she only did that to get back at Kale and Aidan. For impersonating a friend and leaving Mia behind....there have to be consequences. And I don't think Mia need concern herself about Jasmine's friend wanting to sue Kale,...Kale can take care of himself quite well. In fact, I think both Kale and Aidan are more than just rich eye candy.
I am really hooked on this story. Looking forward to more Updates!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 25/11/10 06:43 am
all i can say is, it's about time. i am so happy they finally got together. i really think you should consider having your writing published. awesome!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 09:58 pm
Mia should beat jasmine's ass
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 04:01 pm
Ok I dont like Jasmine, me thinks she is jelouse of Mia cause not only 1 guy but 2 are in love with her. Eric is a trip and needs to get over himself. Glad Mia admitted her feelings. I really enjoyed this chapter. Gotta love Kale he when he gets on alpha.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 03:42 pm
This story is great... u are going to kill me with all the love andkindness these guy give to her...and she desires it, but, not giving up that pocketbook...Lord she was funny.
Thanks for a wonderful update.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 01:39 pm
OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE Aidan and Kale! They are like a seriously HOT duo. Mia is so lucky! And people may think their little arrangment is weird but polygamy seems to work for some people! at least they have an understanding. And ugh Jasmine is a such a beeep beeep beeep! ugh she sucks! can't wait for an update :)
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 01:31 pm
Brava! Brava! I like how she flipped on them and being Mia. It was good to know that she can defend herself. I love the men doing it though.
Wow this story makes me check about 3 or more times a day for an update!! I love it. Thanks for this treat. I am still loving on some Kale he is soooo male!!!
Thanks
Ro
Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 12:53 pm
DUN DUN DUN!!!!!! OOOOWWEEEEEEE that was good soooo much better than on the other site!!!!! the parts you added change the whole tone of the story!!! are they going after eric or the crackhead robbers or both lol?! soooo glad she told them she loved them and they both kissed her. makes me even more sure she can handle them both for her first time as well.
so since youve changed the course of events with these juicy new bits will you only be updating here now and not the other site anymore? im just wondering so i know where to stalk lol!!! THANK YOU KATHERINE!!!!!! ANOTHER STUNNA!!!!!!! off to reread from the beginning!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 12:37 pm
Oh...! certain people better run and hide because Kale & Aidan are out to get you! Thanks for the update and yes the kisses just keeps getting better and better *fan face*
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 11:24 am
OH MY GOSH! I was laugh and bouncing in my seat all thru this update. When Kale and Adian called all I could do is chant Mia in trouble....Mia in trouble
Then there was stalker Eric who made her realize that she is in love with those to sexy, hot ass men and wonder why she was making them wait.
Then there was the muggers sista girl held onto her purse she was not about to give it up and didn't
Kale going on and on and on...that was funny
The most funny part was though when Kale said he was going to put her on lockdown until she got some common sense.
Over all this was a marvelous as usual update and you are so spoiling me with an update almost everyday on both your wonderful stories.
Ok until next update. Have a wonderful day!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 11:09 am
Goodness Gracious Kathy You have just spoiled me, and sweet lil mia has finally declared her love for the two hunks of burning love lol, I feel sorry for that negro eric he done messed up bad harrasing Mia and Jasmine stankazz is gonna get hers too...I just can't wait to read the steamy detailed nasty and yummy love affair that's going down and I know you gonna bring girl...no pressure I'm just saying LOL
I'm feeling so excited about this story so I'm a lil ghettofab today
Thanks so much for this update so happy
gimme more pls....lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 10:08 am
oh crap i bet you that wish they didn't mess with mia lol. i hope they find those guys and teach them a very big lessons for attacking someone. wow that guy have huge problems and she need not to mess with jamise any more she faker then weave. love how they take care of her and she telling them i love you thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 08:56 am