Oh mama mia two hot studs pure sexyness all around whats a girl to do...I just couldn't wait for the wolfy story I had to read this to get my story reading groove and aaaaah it's soo good wow !!!
More pls...
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 24/11/10 07:43 am
That was a awesome update!! Poor Mia she is caving in slowy but she is caving in.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/11/10 12:44 am
at first i wanted mias first time to be with aidan since he seems to be the more gentle of the two but now i think id like them to all be together for her first time. not sure how thats all gonna work out but i know whatever happens itll be HAWT!!!! cant wait!! love this these three!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 08:45 pm
Oh Mia, Mia, Mia. The dilemma she's in. She knows she wants them, but being with them both is scary for her. It's getting to that boiling point, and I can't wait until they attack each other. LOL Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 06:58 pm
All beautiful!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 06:37 pm
Wow, eventually they are going have to get it on! I cannot wait. Thanks for the updates. :)
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 06:23 pm
lmao to funny that one thing you never wanted someone to see you doing lol but hey they like it so it not bad at all. i tell you this story get more funny crazy and all kind stuff and love it. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 05:55 pm
i love this story
Reviewer: kara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 04:25 pm
Mia is fighting a losing battle...with herself. It is just a matter of time, now. And it is about time. LOL. Thanks for the Update!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/11/10 02:38 pm
LOL!!! STANDING OVASTION!!! That was so cute and funny and hot. A girl gotta do what a girl gotta do....I would have been doing the same in the shower...well scratch that the fantasy she was having would have been true....Mia girl stop fighting it. Have you cake and eat it to so to speak. Kale and Aidan get hotter and hotter with each description of them you give.
Well they have seen her but she has not seen them and had the chance but was too chicken to take up the opprotunity but then Mia wouldn't be Mia if she did and the guys wouldn't maybe love her as much if she was a hot ass like Jasmaine.
I did not comment on last chapter didn't get around to it but damn if that is the kind of men Jasmine associates with then I am like Kale keep away from her ass but that is Mia's girl and she is not judging her as harsh but she doesn't knwo what that piece of shyt really said about her and I can't believe her little naive self thought it was flattering.
Can't wait for the next update. Thank you chica
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 02:08 pm
WHOA THAT WAS HAWT HAWT HAWT!!!!!! ive lost count of the number of times ive read this story! FLOVE IT!! i see a very intensely pleasureable shower/bath session in these guys future!! im sure kale and aidan would be more than willing to handle all of mias shaving needs as well hee hee. i want to see all the erotic moments among these three!!! THANKS KATHERINE!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 01:54 pm
Well I am wondering what is next. I don't think I could do a threesome but I would love a piece of both of them individually of course I guess I am just selfish~~~~
Mya is very lucky. Lets see her turn the tables on them.
Love this
Ro
Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 12:56 pm
Now this was one hot chapter! Aidan towel dropped while he was holding Mia! I'd fantasize about him in the shower too!
Reviewer: Whooo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 12:55 pm
Hey! I love this story, I really do!
I check for updates every day, twice a day.
A little feedback: Mia is getting annoying. She seems REALLY uptight. She's obviously turned on, but she's acting like a little girl. Also, Aidan and Kale don't seem multi-dimensional.Their characters are not that well rounded. We know Mia's background, but all we really know about them and their SEPARATE lives is that they both love Mia.
I would like to see more character development on that front and a bit more adult behavior from Mia. She is acting like a scared rabbit and, at this point, I am finding it hard to like her very much.
Reviewer: Gabriella Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 12:06 pm
haha, i remembered the first time i read this ch on FP. i totally felt with Mia and still do. this story is so so so good! thanks for sharing it here!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 11:45 am
OMG!!!!!! this chapter was to .... i dont even have the words
and i have to say that i like this story much more than The One Who Walks with Wolves i think its the characters i love Aidan and Kale
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 09:33 am
What is wrong with the woman? Give those hotties a chance!!!
Author's Response: HAHA!
Date: 23/11/10 06:55 am
Oh, lord I don't know who's got it worse: Kale and Aidan or Mia! After waiting so long to have Mia to themselves, I'm glad that they've finally confessed how they feel about her to her and that she knows about it and wants to give it a shot, but they have the patience and restraint of gods. Poor Mia, not dealing with one man, but two men who will do just about anything to make her happy. Actually, that doesn't sound like a bad idea, LOL.
Great update!
Author's Response: Intense sexual tension between them all lol Reviewer: Missus James Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/11/10 06:50 am
Interesting update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/10 02:23 am
I'm with Cassius! They should have had the damn door locked. Kale and Aidan are just naturally lethal and Mia needs to stop resisting and give in already...I would have...whoo! HAVE MERCY!
Author's Response: Falls over laughing!
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 07:21 pm
I am so loving this story.
And I find nothing wrong with BOTH men being head over heels in love with Mia, since it's so apparent from her POV that she is in love with them both as well.
If I were in her VEREE lucky shoes, it would be THREESOME all the way. There is no other choice. Unless she wants to lose them...which we know she doesn't and is just as attached to Kale and Aidan as they are to her.
Can't wait to read more and for her reaction when she finds out they feel the exact same way about her that she does about them.
Author's Response: Yep she has to be with both or none at all. Thanks for the review! Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 06:15 pm
Loving the story. You write in a way that make a person feel the intense feelings Kale and Aiden have for Mia. The possesive as well as the heat.
Mia needs to just do what makes herself happy. Now this is easy for Mia to carry out because this is just a wonderful fictional tale.LOL
Author's Response: Thank you I'm flattered! I try to turn into my characters when I write them. Reviewer: Love to Read Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 05:46 pm
wow it nice how the hold her make her smile and just let mia be mia and thinks it very nice to be yourself around the people you love. i knew when that guy said what he said about mia i thought they was going to kill him lol he so lucky he got a black eye. love the story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: It does feel good to have people to love you for yourself good or bad. That gut was crazy I'm glad kale punched him!
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 04:48 pm
Mia is rather annoying, piss or get off the pot. Aiden and Kale love and have loved you for years. Let go and own your feelings Mia you have nothing to loose. Your will never understand but they never understood you anyway. So let go and love girl!!! I am loving this story and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: LOL! Okay then. Glad you're loving the story was worried for a minute. LOL
Date: 22/11/10 03:46 pm
Wow Jasmine needs examine her life Mia is right she is no better then a call girl, Glad Mia has standards. Uh oh Mia is weaking look forward to see her fall.
Author's Response: LOL crash is more like it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 03:33 pm