These three are something else. I personaly am glad Mia is taking it slow and making sure that this is right for her. At least Kale and Aidan know she isnt after there money. Funny how Mia is trying to make herself look unattractive.
Author's Response: I agree no woman should feel rushed into anything If they aren't sure about it. She thought she could make herself unattractive to them, never going to work those men are too in love with her. She will always be beautiful to them.
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 03:31 pm
"Women have no idea what they want"????
Really? This is the most unenlightened piece of tripe I've ever read.
Author's Response: I agree, how dare Kale say such a thing. He'll probably say a few more things to piss people off and Mia too. He tends to be obnoxious and arrogant at times, but lucky Mia is strong enough to put him in his place when he goes too far. LOL Reviewer: disgusted Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 02:52 pm
Great update! Thanks! Jasmine is a mess. I understand Aidan and Kale wanting to stop Mia from being around her, but I don't think telling Jasmine to stay away is going to work for Mia because I don't see her as some to drop her friend because her man/men doesn't like them. I love how the guys want to protect her, and Kale makes me laugh wanting to be beat up everyone.
Author's Response: Nope they don't have the right to tell her that. Kale is pure testosterone lol
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 02:41 pm
I love this story. I am all for love but Kale is doing it for me.
Good Luck Mia and I cannot wait for another update.
Thank you for giving me something wonderful to read again!!
Ro
Author's Response: Aww you're welcome Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/10 01:41 pm
Loved it!!
In an odd way, I'm actually glad that Kale and Aidan are a package deal. lol. They are so alike yet uniquely different that I would have a hard time choosing between them.
The downside, unfortunately, as Mia is already experiencing, men can be damn irritating and annoying and two guys equals twice the aggravation.
Kale and Aidea are lovable and quite "eccentric." If a therapist isn't in their futures, can they at least observe the rules about personal space??? Frisco is mild to chilly but Mia has got to be sweatin' all the time from all that male body heat.
Mia can't stall forever, but I'm loving the salrd pitch and seduction.
Love this story!! Keep those updates coming!!!
Author's Response:
A therapist. LOL I did mention in one chapter that they probably needed to see a therapist for their intense dependency on each other and now Mia's being dragged into the circle. LOL Poor girl I totally agree, one overprotective, controlling, clingly man is enough, but two! Good thing they look so good and have money!
LOL!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/10 11:35 am
Thank you I hope you are able to. :) Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/10 04:45 am
Loved the update.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 22/11/10 01:49 am
Love this story I need more, and I already re read it again lol.
I really like Mia and her friend Joyce, not to sure about Jasmine though. I also like her bosses, although I think they should really let her more alone time. And I also feel that Mia favours Aidan more than Kale, which makes me feel anit ;.; since I prefer Kale, mmmm tall, dark and handsome and brooding types are so hot. But teither way shes got two super powerful and hot men wound tightly around her pinky finger lol. Cant wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
You're the second one to say Mia like Aidan more than Kale. I have to reread this lol, but you'll find out she loves both equally in the future chapter when she starts having alone time with Kale. She's just fighting with him all the time because they both have strong personalties unlike Aidan who's more laid back.
When you said you reread the story, it made me feel really good and that my writing is worth the time I put in it, so thank you for making my day!
Reviewer: Spoons Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 05:38 pm
Love this story. Cracked up at the pigtails! Keep the updates coming. :)
Author's Response: I thought it was hilarious too! LOL
Date: 21/11/10 05:04 pm
STOP RESISTING THESE MEN & LOCK THE DAMN DOOR...!
Author's Response: LOL!! Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/11/10 02:56 pm
Poor girl, she chance against those two! Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 05:17 am
girl mia you should just look for another job lol because it going to be very hard to not able to get freaky in that office lol. pig tales lol well she did say she wouldn't braid it lol. love this story and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: LOL well she already threatened about getting another job. LOL This was why Aidan wanted to fire her, he knew they wouldn't be able to keep their hands off her in the office. Kale with pigtails, hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 21/11/10 03:31 am
I like the name he pick out if they have a daughter. Just wanted to say love how she told them off on the phone then letting them know how things are going down weather they like it or not you go girl. now i understand what mia had to go thu with family. you think they support you but then bam you have those people who wanted to hate for you doing more then them. so sad. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Sadly, you see more families like that than the ones that do support each other.
I loved the phone conversation too. Poor Aidan. LOL!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/11/10 03:26 am
I love this story like a fat kid loves cake. Keep the slices coming unitil it's all gone. I am greedy like that. :D
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 03:02 am
really they get interrupted i wanted to see how far things would have went
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 02:08 am
Awesome!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 02:05 am
I really like Mia.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 01:43 am
That was HOT. Aidan and Kale can't seem to help themselves. lol Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/11/10 12:05 am
Oh my god, no! I was drinking water when I realized that she had given Kale two pigtails and I spat it out in laughter. Kale is a naughty bastard and Aidan is just as bad. Seducing your secretary shouldn't be done during office hours, LOL. At least wait until lunch break. Great update! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LMAO I loved the pigtails thing too. Mia is a mess, she's just the type of person that can deal with them. Reviewer: Missus James Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/11/10 11:02 pm
Her family thinks that Mia is too uppity already, imagine what they will think if they ever meet Aidan and Kale and figure out that something is going on between the three of them. They'll try to make her feel like a whore if she admits that she loves them both. And then of course they'll ask for money or try to blackmail them.
They all need to stay far away even her mother. Mia, Kale and Aidan will make their own little family and hopefully one day add to it.
Nice job!
Author's Response:
You pretty much nailed it except the money and blackmail thing lol. But you're so right about her family.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/11/10 08:54 pm
Mia needs to get a reality check. How can she POSSIBLY say no. Is she blind? LOL. And Aidan is so funny,...researching the names of their children? Obsession, maybe? LOL. Looking forward to next Update.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Aidan is so in love it has turned into something an obsession. LOL
Ah Mia, she's holding back because this is so different from the way she was raised and well it's just different! LOL She's afraid. She'll come around one day...I hope...LOL
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/11/10 04:51 pm
Love the cast pictures. Mia's family is a trip and seem like a bunch of haters. Is it me or is Mia Adian her favorite? Glad she is taking charge and not letting the guys call all of the shots! Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
You think? I hadn't noticed, seriously, I know she's usually arguing with kale but she feels the same about him.
Her family is a bunch of haters, I agree.
She still feels the need to have some say so in her life.
Thanks for the review! Keep them coming.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/11/10 04:31 pm
Loving this story waiting for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/11/10 03:22 pm
I got caught up with the story and was sad to see it was the last chapter until the next update.
Enjoying story...Thank you.
Author's Response: Aww that's sweet, so glad you're enjoying it, I'll try to keep the chapters coming. Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/11/10 02:07 pm
I'm really lovin this story. Aidan cracked me up when he was thinking of baby names. lol Thanks for the fast updates.
Author's Response: He's really into this. LOL
[Report This]Date: 20/11/10 01:37 pm