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Title: Things Happening

It's official...Gianni is going to commit MURDER IN THE FIRST DEGREE!! Ooooooo lawd! No, this fool did not put his hands on her like he was going to rape her and that stupid Denise was in on it??

Author's Response:

God help the world lol!

Denise might have, lol. You'll just have to wait and see. ;)

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:59 am

Title: Becoming One

Beautiful moment for K/G. Glad mom contacted them to let them know what happend. It would not have been pleasant if he had heard it on the news. I was surprised she didn't try and contact him or go to him first. I think Gianni has changed enough to have been calm enough to take care of her first before going after Lamar. He has grown up so much, and it all has to do with Kam. Great update Candy.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:49 am

Title: Becoming One

Are you trying to make me cry!?!? Well done on this chapter....we all know Gianni would of like nothing more than to go jack Lamar up, so I'm glad he went to Kam instead. Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:

Lol, sorry about that!

Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: thicknsweet88 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:26 am

Title: Becoming One

Darn Reneee and Tony are spot on..yeas Mommie is preggars an =d they gonna be parents!! I think they will do just fine!1

Gianni held it together well..if his mom had not been there no telling what would have happened..I am sure Lamar would be dead!! Lamar will get his , if there is videotape he is busted...but DeLuca's don't have to wait for the courts for them to wear that but out!!

The moment between them was sweet and tender..I almost cried too!!

Great job sweetie!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:21 am

Title: Becoming One

That was sweet, but I needed to read about  violence happening to Lamar's simple ass!!!

Author's Response:

VIOLENT HUSSY LOL!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:20 am

Title: Becoming One

I completely agree with your notes. I think this moment needed to be added to the story.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:19 am

Title: Becoming One

ahh snap, lamar gonna get and mommy won't be able to help him. and that denise needs to go down too.

Author's Response:

Oh, lord lol.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:16 am

Title: Things Happening

Lamar, you dumb ass!!

You better run as fast as you can. Oh, I forgot, you can't run in cement shoes. LOL

Great as always.

 



Author's Response:

Lmao, oh, lord!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 02:47 am

Title: Things Happening

I'm glad Kam got out in time. Lamar is straight crazy. I can't wait until Gianni beats that ass. I want Gianni to beat that ass in front of the whole world. People need to see that you don't mess with Gianni's PRINCESS. Gianni is going to be pushed over the edge once he knows that Denise and Lamar not only put his girl in danger but also his kid.

I's time to call in Grandparents. Ass beating time Candy. 

Merry Christmas Candy, thanks for an awesome update. 



Author's Response:

It's about that time! ;)

 

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 12:01 am

Title: Things Happening

I don't understand the Derek stuff. I get why Derek is angry, but Gianni never really let him say his peace. I still hope Derek doesn't do anything stupid. 

Lamar is a jackass, Kam better call the cops first! She needs to prove that Lamar attacked her, if she goes to Gianni it will not look good for her. They could say Gian hit her and she's trying to protect Gianni.    



Author's Response: Gianni is stubborn I guess!

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 08:03 pm

Title: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 3

The tape won't work, it will be proven easily that the tape is new and a drug test will prove that she was drugged. I really hope Lamar tries, but doesn't succeed, because Kam being raped would start a new arch that would have to be handled extremely carefully. 

Author's Response: I agree.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 07:51 pm

Title: Things Happening

All I have to say about this chapter is Code Blue all day everyday until Lamar is found.

Author's Response: Lol, oh, lord!

Reviewer: Ty-Quatta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 05:47 pm

Title: Things Happening

Candy,

That was so mean of you to leave it right there. I hope you have a great christmas.

So Kambree is pregnant well HOT DAMN pebbles is coming back. Yaya!! for us. I hope she and Gianni get to discuss her being pregnant because they both have been avoiding the subject even though it was a possibility because of the fact that they had not been using protection. Gianni and Kambree have both grown and that fact alone will make them very interesting parents.

I liked the conversation between Gianni and Derek,  Derek got to tell him what he felt and Gianni told him the truth, he had grown from a boy to a man. He changed for the better but inside he was still same asshole that he has always been. The difference is he has someone that loves that asshole in him and sees to the heart of who he is. Derek should have kept that part about wanting to sleep with Kambree to himself. I am glad Gianni told him that family would have never done what he did. Derek needs to think about his actions and then go from there.

Denise and Lamar, how did I know??? Easy Denise is the type that gives it up easily and since Lamar was willing to try and take it from Kambree, it goes to show that he and Denise where probably doing it. Lamar is a piece of scum that I can't wait for him to learn the meaning of being someones bitch. Gianni is going to teach him De Luca style and then I need Nick to teach him a lesson as well. I am glad Kambree kicked him in the nuts and that she got away before anything serious happened.

I hope when Kambree gets to Gianni that he takes her to get checked out first before he goes and handles his businezz on Lamar's ass.

Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Nice review! :) Loved it!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 04:10 pm

Title: Things Happening

Now it's Christmas and you wanna go all Humbug on us with a cliff hanger. Now that's some very unCool mess right there!!!   Update Please I gotta know what happens next!!

Author's Response: Lol, coming right up!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 03:53 pm

Title: Things Happening

Merry Christmas to you Candy and your family.

 I don't know if Code Blue going to arrived on time Gianni is going to need a lawyer and Lamar a body bag.  Well Denise going to need plastic surgery and a orange jumpsuit.  

 

 As for Derek that to me was not a sincere apologize he still riding Gianni coat tail.  If you can't beat them join them that the message he was sending.  

As for Gianni he is definitely a man he has grown and he show his man hood strong before I think Gianni would have accepted the apology but Kam has changehim and I see him being able to handle Pebbles now(being a father and a stand man in his stanze).  Yes he is going to be shock but it will be a good surprise.  

Kam is in denial about her pregancy she can't believe that why she haven't really dealt with it.  Plus she might be sacred of what people may think and also Gianni but she will be surprise if she actually tell him.

P.S I was glad to see the post about Renee and Nick I can't wait some of my nagging paid off. lol



Author's Response:

Lol, you are very right!

Lol, Your nagging inspired me lol!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 01:55 pm

Title: Things Happening

I knew it was going to be that bitch! She hated the fact that Gianni used her to get backstage promising her a second go rpound on the Gianni romp and didn't follow through.

Well people its official Lamar's simple as is dead! If Gianni do not personally kill him Frankie will.

Kam is pregnant with peoples and this fool tried to rape her and broke her wrist. Kill em all Gianni, kill em all!

Fade to black Gianni! Code motherfucking blue!

Get Derek ol simple ass out of! I just want it to be the boys again G! Is this bitch for real.

Great job! Merry xmas!

Author's Response:

LMAO, DANG! YOU'RE READY TO SET OFF UP IN HERE!

Thanks so much! I hope you had a good Christmas!

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 10:01 am

Title: Things Happening

Alllllllllllllllllllllll sh!t, Lamar done gone and done it now.  I anxiously await your next update, so what you gonna call it, All Hell Breaks Out, cause when Gianni finds out what happened we know it's gonna.  lol

A



Author's Response: We shall see lol!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 08:30 am

Title: Things Happening

It's on like a pot of neck bones now!!  Lamar's ass is grass and should buried at least 6ft under while still alive and kicking.  Peeble's is on the way, yay!!!  Thank you Candy.  Merry Christmas!!!

Author's Response:

LMFAO @ IT'S ON LIKE A POT OF NECK BONES! You are too much!

Merry Christmas, be safe!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 08:23 am

Title: Things Happening

Gianni, let the beast out and let him feed on Lamar's ass!  Derek has a lot of nerve thinking that piss poor apology was going to work! 

Author's Response: God help us!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 07:37 am

Title: Things Happening

Oh ish....Kam's preggo & b*tcha*sness is goin DOWN!! Wtfreak, rape!? Yea this dude is beyond desperate now and is graspin for straws. Gabriella is about to show her claws & Gianni is so unpredictable, idk wth he's gonna do, sheesh. CC thanks as always and Happy Holidays

Author's Response:

He's simple as hell! God help us all now!

Have a safe Christmas!

Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 07:24 am

Title: Things Happening

She wasn't smart going by herself. Denise and Lamar need to be taken down. She better be careful from now on. Hope she didn't hurt the baby.

Author's Response:

We shall see!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 07:03 am

Title: Things Happening

Lamar has reached an all time low. What a freaking punk he is.He is going to get owned by Gianni and his crew. I hope that fool goes down hard! As for Derek he needs to grow up and ask somebody! Now Kambree knows she is pregnant. Wonderful update Candy!! Have a very Merry Christmas.

Author's Response:

God help us with everything!

Thanks so much & Merry Christmas, Pam!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 06:56 am

Title: Things Happening

That nasty stank behind punk gonna die today for sure!!! He is a faggot..attacking a woman cause he lied on her and she called him out!! He ruined her career with a lie and he has the nerve to want to hurt her for causing him grief..what kind of freak world does he live in..idiot!! Anyway, he is a dead man walking cause ..soon as Kammie finds Gianni..it will be over and if he boke her wrist..he gonna have a painfdul demise at that...WHERE THE HECK IS FRANKIE..cause it is time for a wwhipping DeLuca style!! 

Derek is a big punk sissy...I thought he was going to come clean to Gianni , instead in there trying to rekindle a friendship acting like a pussy..what a chump...he needs to keep walking cause if Gianni finds out he had anything to do with Kammie being hurt..I feel sorry for his sorry behind!!

Ok little baby DeLuca is a coming and crazy Tony has called it out!! Yeah baby..the mothers are not going be happy at first but who couldn't love a beautiful little baby no matter when she arrives!!



Author's Response:

Lol, don't set it off Nene lol!

 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 06:07 am

Title: Things Happening

DAMN, I can't believe Lamar tried to rape her!!!!!!

Gianni has barely been holding on by a string but now he is gonna beat Lamar's ass good.

Man, I can't wait for the action.

Thanks for the update and Merry Christmas!!!!! 



Author's Response:

G is on edge as it is, Lamar should have just left that man alone!

 

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 06:05 am

Title: Things Happening

Oh hell to the fucking no. Lamar just signed his death certificate. That low life bitch is going down. He touched Kam and tried to force himself on her. His ass is dead now, Gianni is going to murder him. I want  Lamar fucked up Candy. I really want that to be the last time he breathes air. Fuck he smacked K and possibly broken her risk. The negro has to die lol. Get on it Candy lol. Oh I didn't forget about that bitch Denise either. She is going to get it too. Skank ass hoe just mad because Gianni didn't want to hit it again. Derek cry baby ass isn't as bad, but I'm glad is ass is gone. He was too much of a whiny bitch, wanna be Gianni. Great Chapter Candy, let the violence begin. Code fucking blue lol.

Author's Response:

Lol, violent self!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/12/10 06:05 am

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