Lamar, Lamar, you need to let go and move on, or you'll find yourself getting fitted for new shoes, Cement ones that is.
If you mess with my girl, the whole family will mess you up. you don't want to go there.
Just saying.
Great update.
Author's Response:
LMAO! YOU ARE TOO MUCH!
Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 12:51 pm
Ok really Lamar has to die..please do not let him lay one hand on Kammie...he has ruined her career and caused her all kinds of emotional stress ..Now he wants to cry victim!! I think not..
I hope D is not Derek, cause I don't trust his whimpy behind either...but I am concerned cause he wants Kammie too!!
I don't think Kammie should have to go through anything else because of Lamar...he just needs to die and if Derek/s punk behind is with him on this crap..then he needs to die with him!!
I loved the girls interview and how close they are...they make a great team!!
Kammie and Gianni sexing it up till she can't walk is hysterical!! Though last session there was not any condoms used..that has me worried..lol!
Great jjob sweetie.you are writing a wonderful story!!!
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Author's Response:
LOL, LOVE THIS, NENE! :)
Let's pray for K/G because they are being so careless!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 11:41 am
WTH is going on with that crazy ass Lamar??? HE broke up with her and now he has the nerve to be upset at her because he didn't realise he still had feelings for her at that time???!! Is he for real??? He definitely needs a reality check!! He's a freaking psycho and I fear for Kam. Looks like he's planning something sinister. Hope his plans are spoiled and blows up in his face!!!!
Author's Response:
He's simple as usual lol!
Let's see what happens! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:44 am
Oh please let Gianni F#%K Lamar up! Pretty Please! And his friend, Derek! I know that's what that D stands for! I think Chris and Shane should get in a few licks too!
Author's Response: LMFAO, VIOLENTS HUSSY!
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:26 am
simpleLamar is about to gt his ass jacked-up De Luca Style. And whoever the hell "D" is will have his ass in a sling also. Add if "D" is Derek, he's more simple than simpleLamar. How many times does Gian have to hem his ass up before he understands the danger in making that man angry? These two are deficient in judgment, good sense, and intelligence... in other words, THEY BOTH FOOLS. And they'll be fools walking with their asses up in the air from where Gian has kicked them.
Author's Response:
Simple as hell lol!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:13 am
What a second stop the fucking train. Why is this bitch Lamar still talking shit. Candy get rid of his slimy ass. I can't stand that mother fucker. He is so whiny and annoying. His punk ass needs to be six feet under. He talks to much shit for someone who is sack riding off of Kam. I mean what the fuck has he done besides bitch and moan. Where the hell is that bus lol. Candy I want his ass gone. Every time I see his name I want to choke someone lol. I would prefer choking him and what the hell is he going to do when he get a chance to be alone with Kam. Whatever he has in mind, better get knocked the fuck out by Gianni. lol I am tired of this wack ass little boy. On to the next one lol. Good chapter Candy, now lets kick some ass lol.
Author's Response: Oh, lord lol! Violent hussy!
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:11 am
I want Lamar to die an horrible death!!! I hope that Kambree has enough not to meet Lamar's crazy ass alone. As a matter of fact she shouldn't acknowledge him at all. I want Frank unleashed on Lamar. Great Chapter Candy!!
Author's Response:
God bless us all lol!
Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:08 am
I dare you to Lamar!?!?G is going to put his foot so far up your butt you'll taste the sole of his feet and it better not be Derek whose helping him out
Kam if we don't hear from you in awhile have a safe and enjoyable Christmas. Hope you get all your heart desire ;-)
Author's Response: LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE TOO MUCH! Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 07:03 am
Please tell me that "D" isn't Derek? I don't believe he would stoop so low as to hurt her by setting her up just to get back at Gianni. Lamar's mom will not be able to pay off anyone with her money if he hurts Kam. This does not look good. Great update.
Author's Response:
We shall see! ;)
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:48 am
Lamar needs his ass kicked fast. So is his ass planning to drug Kam and try to rape her. That SOB better be dealt with fast or I just might have to get involved.
So Kam is taking a year off HUH. Perfect time for her to have Pebbles. (HINT) I'm loving how close her and her sister are, and how she keeps her relationship with Gianni private. No need to tell her business to the world and let them in their house.
Another great update Candy. Keep them coming.
Author's Response:
Oh, lord lol, you are about to set it off up in here!
K/K's relationship is special! :)
You gotta stop putting things into head lol!
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:41 am
oh no derek isn't! lamar and derek need to have a meeting with grandpa de luca!
Author's Response: We shall see! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:40 am
This was a very interesting chapter. I loved the interview that kambree and Kassie gae because it shows how close of a family they really are. I am glad Kambree has decided to take time off for herself and her relationship with Gianni.
All I can say is I hope whatever Lamar is planning back fires and gets his ass kicked De Luca style. He wants to hurt Kambree because she didn't love him the way he wanted her to love him, what is he a baby whining because he didn't getto suck his momma's tit to long. I hope someone teaches Lamar the meaning of loving a woman, and being loved by a man. I get the feeling Lamar is about to go way to far and wnd up being someone's bitch.
I hope the "D" in that conversation is not Derek, and if it is, he gets some common sense and tells Gianni whats going on before it is to late. Or maybe something else is going on and knowing Candy, I can see her doing exactlly what I think she is doing, and if that is the case, I will worship at her feet. :)
I am looking forward to the next chapter/
Author's Response:
Lol, we shall see what's going on!
LMFAO @ suck on his momma's tit LMAO! You just about killed me with that one!
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:38 am
Girl I hope that was not Derek he was talking too because somebody gon die.
This is going to be a code blue ladies!
Lamar is such a pussy! Be a man boy!
Great post!
Author's Response:
We shall see!!!!
Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: Paula Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:30 am
wow you think lamar the dumb ass will learn after the son to let things go but noooooooooooo he still wanted to act stupid that a man for you lol. thanks for the update. told you she was going to walk with a limp lol
Author's Response: LMAO, you are too much!
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:29 am
Okay I hope that jerkoff isn't talk to Derek on the phone!!!! Both of those men have a death wish....and I really hope they aren't ploting how to get my girl alone to rape her or anything along that nature....sweet niblets this was good. Loved Kam's inteview and how without a doubt she knows she wants Gianni to be in her life for the long haul....another great chapter honey!!!
Author's Response:
LMFAOO! G ain't stable enough for this mess! They better leave him alone.
We shall see what the simple fool is up too!
Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: thicknsweet88 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:29 am
And thats why I called both of their asses bitchassness #1 & bitchassness #2, Code F'N Blue!!! Let's see what unfolds...
Author's Response: Oh, lord! We might need Code Blue up in here!
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 06:18 am
Oh and if anyone says this was rape, their ass is slow. Dominate, passionate and rough sex is not bad, when both parties want it. I understand why you wrote it though, because last time some slow people were complaining and crying wolf. Lol, Anyway you know your love scenes are the hottest I have read on this site Candy. I'm just being honest lol. This hussy wouldn't lie. :)
Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 23/12/10 03:50 am
Whooooooooooooooooooooo! OOOOOOOooooh!
Candy look what you done done to me girl!!! LOL
Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! TOO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/12/10 03:37 am
I had to read this Ch 3 more times lol. The first time my mind was overheated so I couldn't really write anything lol. Candy you, MJ, and KM are my favorite authors. I just love how you are so down to earth and brave enough to share your talent with us readers. Not many people can showcase their work without feeling intimidated. I'm just glad your ass shared these stories with us. lol As usual great job and I just love the dynamic of Gianni and Kam. The revamp version is just flowing so well and the love scenes are fire lol. I just want to say thank you for being kind enough to showcase your writing with us. If you ever were to get published I would buy your books without hesitation, because you are that good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I am so glad that you are enjoying my writing! Love you too death, girlie!
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 09:51 pm
Candy,I do like you and I enjoy your writing style but you are such a showoff. Why do I say this you may ask?! We all know Gianni is a replica of your “G” so for some of us who haven’t had a G type loving in a while no need to remind us of what we’re missing. Big Al has a lot to live up to. LMAOGirl you know I’m kidding ;-) yes I like this revamp much better.
Author's Response: LMAO, I LOVE YOU, J!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 10:56 am
Candy what are we going to do with you. Your writing is the bomb. I say you really need to get a book out there for to a publisher.
Gianni is the man and Kambree gives as good as she gets. The whole time that I was reading this chapter I had Avant's song "Making Good Love" in my head. Kambree will be walking funny for days. Tony and Sasha are going to be clowning her ass for real now.
Can't wait for the next chapter, because Lamar is going to be straight up PISSED off. I wonder what the public's reaction is going to be?
Let's go Candy.
Author's Response:
You are too good for my ego lol! Love you, Tam!
Lmfao you are too much! Tony always has something to say!
Lamar, oh lord lol!
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/12/10 06:27 am
It wasn't bad, at least not to me. I didn't think he was cruel. She seemed very happy, LOL.
Author's Response: I was worried about how people would respond to it because some folks might start calling rape again lol!
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 06:12 am
"I know y'all fools see my ass up in here!" Chris yelled.
LMAO!!
Author's Response: Leave it up to him! Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 05:23 am
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! *taking a breath* NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! Gianni tore dat ass the hell up!! I absolutely love the before, during, and after sex talks! I love them together! Gianni can be mean to my ass anytime! If I could give higher than 10, you know I would!
Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE TOO MUCH!
[Report This]Date: 22/12/10 04:36 am
I still love him too. More, more, more. there was nothing dark or cruel about this chapter. I don't offend easily. I would have been offended if you hadn't given us some hot sex. Great update Candy.
Author's Response:
You damn hussy lol!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 22/12/10 04:08 am