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Title: Coming Together

ohhhhh he said the "L" word. Thats right Mr. Frankie we are all for ol'e school handing it.

Author's Response: Lol, oh lord!

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:41 am

Title: Coming Together

Yes he loves her darn it!! Yeah yeah yeah!!How could he help it!

I love Frankie and I say turn him loose...I want Lamar world turned upside down.....he needs the FEEL the hurt he caused her...I mean physically and financially!!

I think a man defending his woman's honor is hella sexy!! Gianni is turning me on just being a man to his woman!! Loving him!!!

I love Gianni's entire family...they are the stuff..old school mafia...yeah Lamar you done wrote a check your arse will have to cash..yeah baby!! Bring it on..

Girl it is getting good...I cannot wait for more!!

 



Author's Response: Lol, You are too much!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:40 am

Title: Coming Together

"There is no more talking, you don't fuck with people I love."

ah hell yeah!!!

Wonder if he realizes what he just said.

Yeah, let the Tysons handle it. But if they don't, it'll be Code Blue, all.damn.day!



Author's Response:

Lol, Gianni is snapping up in there!

I don't think he does, oh, lord!

Lmao, they don't need to go to Code Blue because they would be tearing up some asses!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:39 am

Title: Coming Together

That's exactly what he meant. LOVE!! He was the first to admit it, so no winning the bet, but who cares when you are in love. I'm pretty sure that fool Lamar is in hiding, and if he isn't he might want to be. This story gets better and better Candy. Thanks for another wonderful update.

Author's Response:

All bets are off I think lol!

Lamar better take his ass to the boarder because he have an angry Gian on out hands!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:39 am

Title: Coming Together

Great update! Lamar is in trouble!

Author's Response:

Yes, he is lol!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:34 am

Title: Coming Together

And Gianni goes down! Yes Kambree has slain the beast! He admitted it first whether he realized it or not! Now we just need to deal with Lamar's ass!! Great update, cant wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Lol, she's doing something to him!

Lamar is in a mess lol!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:57 am

Title: Coming Together

Hell yeah my boy said the love word. Dang G you let that bitch know!

I cannot wait for everyones reaction especially chris.

Grat post! Give some more girl. I am bowing doen to you girl you fuccin rock!

Author's Response:

You're making me blush, LOL!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:49 am

Title: Coming Together

Oh moooooom why can't we let our emotions get the better of us. It's funner that way! :D

I'm glad that Gianni has admitted, under duress mind you, his true feeling for Kam. Nice.

I'm glad that he is going to try and stay calm. Very mature.

I'm glad to see the two families together talking it out. Do I hear wedding bells? 

I'm glad everyone is being very logical. Media can be bad.

Now, what I'd like to see is some serious secret agent type, behind the scenes badassness and Lamar go vertical before sinking slowly into the sea.

Cheers! 



Author's Response:

Lol, they need to stay calm up in there!

Wedding bells, oh lord, girl!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

As for Lamar, we might need to say a prayer for him!

Reviewer: MangaQueen Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:45 am

Title: Coming Together

I leave town for a weekend and I come back and shit has hit the fan. Lamar has lost his mind. How can he straight up lie about a sex tape. He needs his ass beat down pronto.

Dang Gianni is mad as Hell. Gianni is going to beat that ass before the end of this story. I'm loving that both families have come together for their kids.

I'm shocked that Gianni has confessed his love for Kambree in front of everyone. So does that mean we get to hear the headboard knocking on the wall soon. (HINT) 

I can't wait for the interview. I want Kam to completely make a fool of Lamar on national television.  She should attack his manhood. Let him know that he wasn't good enough or worthy enough to get the VICTORIA SECRETS but Gianni is. HAHAHA. 

Another great update another one tonight pretty please. 



Author's Response:

He is a mess up in here!

We know Gianni is not good when he is upset, God help us!

Ya damn hussy, LOL!!!!

No telling what she will say, lol!

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:44 am

Title: Coming Together

Ok I had to delet my previous message (+ abt being a member now) my fingers must have drunk. The calm before the storm... better be because there was too much talking and not enough action in this chapter. Frankie if you were only a few years younger, I would fight Victoria over you, I lose but I would fight her ;-)

Author's Response: Lmao, damn hussy!

Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:42 am

Title: Coming Together

Even better!!! You are on a roll tonight!!! I kinda want to see some Mafia action ala Michael Corleone style!! Whatever it happens, I know its going to be GOOD!!!

*grabbing my popcorn*



Author's Response: Oh, lord, you are setting it off up in here lol!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:32 am

Title: Fade To Black

Favorite lines:

"I believe that fool is lying." Chris said. 

"For real though, that motharfucka is twitching and shit." Shane added.

LMAO!!!!!!!!

Ehem...now it is on! Look I'm dipping and dodging, dipping and dodging.

*shuffles feet* 

Code Blue! Code Blue! Mack the Knife, Jack the Ripper, Sal 'break erry damn bone in yow body' the Slipper. Code Blue!

Wait I need to get some pop corn for this one.... 



Author's Response:

LMFAO, THEY ARE A TRIP!

You are cracking me ip!

Reviewer: MangaQueen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:25 am

Title: Fade To Black

OHHHHH... the rewrite was totally excellent!! Of course, the next chapter must be the UMMM GIANNI chapter and Lamar must get the BIG PAYBACK!!

I CAN HARDLY WAIT...do you need some help typing the rest of this story, girlfriend?!  LOL  Too juicy...I tell ya!



Author's Response: Lol, you are too much!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:22 am

Title: Coming Together

wow he said the l word not lust not look out my wife coming home but i love you wow.  girl i love crazy gianni that very hot very sexy if i was kam i would rip off his close and show him who boss lol. thanks for the updated.



Author's Response: LMFAO!!!!!!!! YOU ARE TOO MUCH!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 02:17 am

Title: Fade To Black

Yes! Kick Lamar's a**!!! Sue his pants off!! Is the douchebag in hiding???!!!

Author's Response: Lmfao! No, he still is around, LOL!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 01:40 am

Title: One Date

That's a bad nigga right thurr, opps my ghetto side slipped lol

and this:

 

SMACK!

 

Before Gianni had time to think she slapped the shit out of him. She shocked the hell out of him with that one. That slap definitely turned his head and it stung like hell. He heard her sister gasp.

"Kambree!"

This had me: 

 

ROFLMAO



Author's Response: LMFAO!!!! YOU ARE TOO MUCH!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 12:49 am

Title: One word or Two?

uh oh

 

Gianni in trouble lol 



Author's Response: He stays in trouble lol!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 10:38 pm

Title: Price Of Fame

hmmmm....

Author's Response:

The price of fame suck! ;)

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 10:22 pm

Title: First Meeting

Playboy is off the chain with his antic's can't wait to see what happens next lol

Author's Response:

He is a mess!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 08:08 pm

Title: Fade To Black

The mofo got her suspended from the show, knowin thats her dream!? Ya damn rite, sue his lil bitch ass ASAP!

Ah hell, Gianni IS gonna catch a charge :( thanks for the update

Author's Response:

He needs to be cut! ;)

We all know what happens when Gianni gets angry! God help us!

Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 07:08 pm

Title: Fade To Black

This was a great chapter! Gianni is going to **ck Lamar up for talking about his woman. Kambree and Gianni should go on a mini vacation and spend some alone time until this mess smoothes out. It's just what they need so they can come back a stronger couple and deal with the paparazzi and Lamar's bitch ass. 

Author's Response: They need to stick together!!

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:52 pm

Title: Two Different Views

Gianni is scandalous! this is not a good look for him at all...

Author's Response: He is something alright lol.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:38 pm

Title: Fade To Black

This story is getting sooo good!!! I can't stand Lamar!  Why would he do this to Kambree.  I mean, he broke up with her right?  He must be jealous and mad that she's moved on.  I hope Gianni opens up a can of whoop ass on him because he truly deserves it.  I also hope things work out for Kambree, because I would hate for her life to be ruined by false accusations.  She needs to stand up for herself to the media and set the record straight.



Author's Response:

Lamar could be jealous of her new relationship, who knows! ;)

Do we really need an angry Gianni?!

Poor Kambree. :(

Reviewer: K. Brown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:32 pm

Title: Fade To Black

I think that Lamar is going down and going down hard!!!   I can't wait this story is so awesome Candy!!!  Gianni is admitting his feelings for Kambree and I am so happy.  Will you reintroduce us to Frank now?  That would so awesome if you would!!

Author's Response:

Code Blue, all day! LOL!

Gianni is finally stepping up, yay!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:00 pm

Title: Fade To Black

This really seperate the men from the boys.  It only take a spark to light a fire and in this case a lie.  Lamar didn't care that Kambree was innocent he saw that Kambree was happy with someone else and he could not  be man enough to accept it.  Now he opened up a whole new trouble.  

I think like others said that Kam needs to stand up for herself and be a woman.  I think that with her being with Gianni and the way he is with her will give her the strength to really fight back.  She has inner strength and she needs to pull from that also to survive.  

As the story goes on we see Gianni trying so hard to fight those feeling but he is in denial.  He is starting to fall for Kammy very hard and I think this whole fisaco is going to help him see that.  He will see he is very important to him. 



Author's Response: Love this review!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 05:15 pm

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