Lamar has lost his ever loving mind I wonder what he is going to try and do now yeah it's time for BLUE CODE.
No "D" could stand for anyone David, Darryl etc but I strongly believe it stands for punk ass "DEREK" blue code needs to be inforce on his behind too.
Thank you!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:45 pm
LOL! Kammy in trouble. She has definitely wrote a check her lil ass cannot cash. LOL!
Loving it!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 01:20 pm
I personal am down with the taking Lamar ass to the wood shed way.
Gian said, "You don't fuck with the people I love" He did say that right.
Lamar needs an ass whipping what was the point of him putting Kam on blast like that? Was it just because of the money? He broke up with her and now that she moved he wants to slander her name and ruin her career. That's some shady shyte.
Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 12:35 pm
Oh he is definitely getting on my last nerve.
Great update.
Thank you
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 07:37 am
I don't think I like Gianni all that much right now. He is way too judgemental for me on someone he doesn't even know talking about a freaking gut feelihg his guts are out of whack.
I hope Kam gives him a run for his money in this case a run for his arrogant behavior now I an all about an alpha male and his domainace but I think Gian needs to be the one brought down a peg and back to reality.
Great story
Thank you for sharing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:52 am
Why????!!!! It didnt need to end this way :(
loved the story
Reviewer: Yinka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/11 12:45 pm
Just wanted to say that I read your story last month, just getting around to reviewing it. I must say, it was HOT HOT HOT! I couldn't stop reading it! You rock!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/11 05:11 am
I really like the way to ended it. I love Gianni and Kambree i can't wait to read the next story you have planned for them.
Reviewer: Crystal Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/06/11 07:20 pm
When I first saw your AN, I was like, what more could there be. Well, my dear, you delivered. And big time. Kambree and Gianni are my favorite and this chapter just made me miss them even more. This was so well done. It explained some things that I wondered about. And it closed out this chapter in their lives quite nicely.
On a superficial note, Gianni is one fine ass man. You really picked a good picture to characterize who he is. DAMNNNN!!! *I need a bib, 'cause I'm over here just droolin' like a damn newborn*
Well done, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/06/11 04:01 am
That was an intense ending and I have to say I like it more then the last time. This was heart breaking and almost had me in tears. (Until I realized that I could help Gianni until Kambree returns. A Hussy always knows when she is needed. LMAO) I love that Gianni wanted her to lie to him to make it ok for him letting her go even though it was going to kill him. Kambree wanting to run away was because she is hurt and she doesn't know how to deal with that emotion especially when she has to see it in Gianni's face as well. This is a sad ending but I have to say Kambree and Gianni are so meant to be together and I am glad you decided to end it differently.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! :)
It was a tear jerker. & LMFAOOOOO! I knew you were going to go there, lolol.
Gianni almost needed for to lie to him. He needed it or he couldn't have done what he did. He has completely lost it.
You are so right about Kambree. You really hit it home there.
They are one couple that is meant to be. I will say that. They are a special kind of couple.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/06/11 01:26 am
Most excellent rewrite, the sex was hot, Gabrielle worked my last nerve. So awesome. Why,oh why did you leave of with her leaving my man, I mean Gianni? I loves me some Gianni!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Gabriella is always on someone's nerves, lmfao.
LMAO! Damn hussy! He's hurting right now so you might have to stand in line because there are a lot of hussies who want to heal him.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/06/11 12:46 am
You're happy? At least someone is cause I'm not. Girl you better bring back Second challenge or whatever part 2's new name will be. smh I love this rewrite. Kambree was like Amistad "Give us free." ok ok where is Second Challenge revamped in all of its dominate, juicy, beat that jang up glory? hehe
Author's Response:
LMFAO! I will have another story for these two. I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter. :)
I just laughed out loud at the Amistad comment! LMFAO THAT IS TOO DAMN FUNNY!
I will have their second story up hopefully after Nino's or maybe a little later than that. It really depends but I promise they will have another one. :)
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: 22/06/11 12:44 am
Ok you just love making me cry don't you lol. My heart was breaking for the both of them but understand why she left she had too. You did the end very well the hussy like it. Thank you for the end and thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL! It was a sad one. I'm glad you enjoyed it, lol.
Poor K/G! :(
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:32 pm
I know you told me to go to this story where you explain about the Nino story and I don't see it. Did you get a deal of publishing these stories because if you did...congratz! Or did you not?
Reviewer: luvrayne Signed [Report This]Date: 16/06/11 05:19 am
What happened to the stories about Nino and Kass, Chris and Storm, and Nick and Renee?
Reviewer: Crystal Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/06/11 05:15 am
I absolutely loved this story. I cannot wait to read your others. Gianni is Alpha supreme. hehe
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) Gianni is one of the baddest Alphas around, LOL!
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/11 09:34 am
I am already hooked.....I can't wait to enjoy the ride!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear that! :)
[Report This]Date: 05/02/11 04:40 pm
This story is soo good
Thats crazy how his family knows beasty ways
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 11:54 pm
Knew Lamar would gave, being the coward wimp that he is. Nick scared his ass straight.
Author's Response: Lol, got love Nick!
[Report This]Date: 29/12/10 01:52 am
Kam has to Woman up and take the Pregger test. It is time to lay all cards on the table because the longer she wait the more doubt sets in. Gianni has been there for her through out this whole mess and now it is time to seperate man from the boys. Gian is a man and not a boy and ready for pebbles.
I like in the insight into Nick and Renee now we see a little of her character and why she is always so strong and kinda forceful with her family. She always wants to protect her family and always be on time before trouble goes down.
As for Lamar he thought he getting off easy but CODE Blue can find you in Prison. Don't drop the soap.
Author's Response:
LMFAO @ DON'T DROP THE SOAP!!!!!!!!!!
But you are so right about G/K, they need to keep it together!
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/10 12:08 am
I can hear the press now, 'Kambree is this why you wanted to take a year off?' I cant wait for Nick & Renee's story after this tidbit.
HaHa, Lamar lil bitch ass was about to piss on himself hearin the name De Luca, especially Frankie. I'm glad Nick took the 'high' road, but lets have him bruised up a lil bit(: Great update and thanks.
Author's Response: We shall see lol! :)
[Report This]Date: 28/12/10 12:21 pm
I'm sad that this story is coming to a end, but at least that bitch ass Lamar is paying for his actions. My girl Kam is pregnant, yes lol. Pebs is on the way lol. :)
Author's Response: Lol, Kambree, Kambree, Kambree! Tsk, tsk, tsk!
[Report This]Date: 28/12/10 08:16 am
About time Lamar was brought to earth. He was just too cocky. Hmmm, wonder where his mom is thru this latest ruckus??? His life lesson is about to begin. He does seem like a spoilt kid and he's about to be taught a lesson in life.
Author's Response: So true!
[Report This]Date: 28/12/10 06:26 am
Nick is smooth. I like how he handled Lamar. Now Lamar is gonna get handled in jail, where he belongs.
Aw, Kambree and Gianni are gonna be parents. I can't wait to see how Gianni handles the news. If they have a little girl, the De Lucas are gonna be mad protective of her. LOL!!!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: We shall see lol! Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 05:53 am