Ok I never read the previous versions but I do not like Gianni at all right now. He is arrogant and judgemental..and though he may be fine his conceit over shadows all that ..he is a jerk!

I hope Kambree is not as innocent as she appears cause I woul dhate for his to misuse her or ruin or innocence with insensitivity.

I really want to see where this goes but so far Gianni is my least favorite person in this story. 

Kassidee is jealous and I am not sue how I feel about er either ..but mom and Kambree's friends are great!! 

Great job sweetie..cannot wait for more!

omg what that man going to do? he bet not hurt her or i kick butt thu this chapter lol. but maybe ms.singer might teach him a lesson or two mmmmmmmmmmmm thanks for the updated and dont' know what happen to for keeps but know this i like your work you great writer and will coutine to read your stories.

Author's Response:

Let's hope! :)

I had to take For Keeps down because I was seriously dead locked. I was in a huge writer's block but I will give Chris his story, promise. :)

Thanks so much!

wow to get caught getting it on by mom lol i would wanted to die right there that happen to me lol. i don't see why Gian thinking he wasn't going if mom said get you butt going you go lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: LOL! YOU GOTTA LOVE THIS FAMILY! :)

Loved the update but didn't like this bet they made to make her fall for Gianni. Sort of immature.

Author's Response: They are men, what did you expect?! Too much pride there!

OK, I feel bad for liking this bet but I guess that is what happens when it comes to be a hussy, I feelike the bet is going to teach them all a lesson in love.

Looking forward to what is about to happen. I can't wait to see what happens between Kambree and Gianni, they both are about to get a wake up call because they assumed some stuff about each other.

Kambree believes Gianni to be arrogant. which to me he isn't so much arrogant as he is cocky since no one else has seems to hit him in the heart to make him change. Gianni believes Kambree to be all about herself and her career. Which she might be but I think Kambree hasn't met a man that could put up with her career and her last name.

The game is on and i am getting ready for rhw ride. Until then I still believe that chris and gianni can keep my company. ;) LOL

LOL!! Oh boy is Gianni in for a RUDE awaking.. LOL!!! Love the new post. I can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Lol, oh lord!

Thanks so much! :)

Can't wait for them to meet!  That was some deep analyzing from Gianni!

Author's Response: He was on his stuff, LOL!

Wow how the mighty will fall LOL!! Gianni is going to get a run for his money, When the six months are up Chris is going to make him eat his words. Deep down Kambree knows she was eyeing Gianni. This was great!!!

Yahoo can be a pain. Even if you dont post there its nice that you have your own group.

This chapter was the bomb, and I'm getting excited once again for K/G. I'm loving this new story line. I'm liking the simple story line it's much easier to follow. Tony and Sasha are a mess still.

I love the guys chatting it up in the apartment. We all know that guys gossip and read celebrity magazines just like women do. 

Gianni has once again bitten off more than he can chew and doesn't know it yet. I can't wait until they actually meet.

Hmmm, Gian has scented his prey and will move in for the kill. Watch out Kam!!!

Author's Response: LOL! OH, LORD!

I'm glad that you are going to take it slow. Maybe get to know Gianni and Kam better. I can't wait to see the trouble they can get into.

P.S. Kingston is all kinds of sexii

You're writing has improved, and I like that Kam has a different career. I also like that she seems to have a more stable family. 

However, I'm curious as to why you decided to revamp Gianni's and Kambree's story, when you could have used new characters? If this is a different story, why not test your creativity and write something new?  

I hope that this story is more character driven, and less plot driven. What the heart wants was all  plot with very little substance,  and it lacked serious character development. I think you have a good ideas, but unfortunately your plots lack the strong foundation needed to write a multi-plot story. My only advice would be to keep it simple, don't write a bunch of subplots that serve no real purpose other than shock value.  If you want to do a multi-plot story, then you need to slow down and take your time with the story. It will give your story a better flow.

Im liking the rrvamped k and g story...cant wait for it to really start

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)