@pmgayle _ the bet wasn't about Kambree but Gianni getting back stage that is why Chris paid him the $200.00 well that is how I took it. I think if the bet was about Kambree Chris would not have paid up so easily before hand. I think Candy is trying to portray Chris and Gianni in the light of two young men never been in love and playin the field until someone comes in and turns their head to see how to truly treat a women.
Author's Response: You got it right! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 04:13 pm
Well Gianni and his brother Chris are a ho, albiet fine, mess. Ginanni and his brother have already started off wrong, making a bet about a woman that neither of them know. I have kind of lost respect for my men, I am really disappointed. It's not good to play with people that, and which means that Gianni will for Kambree that much harder and faster. Why did you change Kambree?
Author's Response: He wasn't betting on Kam, he was betting his brother that he could get backstage! :) & change Kam? In what ways? Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/11/10 03:41 pm
I don't know why you just don't write a book. EVERY story is so freash and so cleanly written. LOVE IT. Like the new title, the new characters, the new direction, everything. And the opening was still FIRE!!!!!! You go MISS LADY!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 03:18 pm
BTW, I agree with everyone else, I love the new title. Unlike some I think Gianni better watch out. Kambree might want to caution her self to Gianni, but Gianni might want to caution his heart to Kambree. And that is why the title fits so much better. Looking forward to what you come up next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 02:42 pm
I was a little turned off by Gianni's age for some reason but I loved this chapter just the same. The family connection was very important in this chapter and I love how both Kambree and Gianni are both family orienated.
My favorite Chris line was : "Clawd have mercy! The Lord is my shepard, he knows what I want." He is just like his brother if not a little worse because the stuff actually comes out of his mouth. LOL
I am looking forward to the development of this story because it is very interesting to see how everyone plays a role in the story. Candy you amazes me how you transform each story into something different and make it new and refreshing.
Gianni seem to think he is about to teach Kambree something and I think they both will end up teaching each other something, And I think that is what I am looking forward to the most.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 02:36 pm
Oh sh*t! Kambree better watch out! Her world is about to be turned upside down. I like the new title by the way. I already go tmy popcorn out and I'm ready for some drama! And the DeLuca family is still a hot mess...just the way I like them! ;)
Author's Response: LOL! They will never change!
Date: 27/11/10 02:14 pm
Gianni is a mess, but I love him and the family.
Author's Response: You can't help but love them!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 01:41 pm
I like it a lot, a whole lot. Awesome beginning Candy. Renee is still Renee.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! :)
She will never change!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 27/11/10 01:31 pm
I must say this.....I love this version so much better! I'm happy that you made Kam's mother and sis the good guys...tear!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 12:24 pm
So glad Chris is still a nut! Kam doesn't know what is going to hit her!
Author's Response: He really is lol! Oh, lord! Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 11:51 am
I am so enjoying this story sweetie...Gianni and his family are hysterical...a Hot Mess as his mom would say..
I love Kambree and her family..I hope Gianni comes to love her and not hurt her..this is off to a great start!!
Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 11:46 am
Bad Gianni lol. So he thinks Kam is a spoiled lil rich girl who needs to be brought down a notch? Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Lol, he will never change either! Thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 11:15 am
"Who better than me to do?" I love the title the G man a dom to the end. I think I'll like this version much better not to say the original was lacking anything but this one... I don't know flows better maybe but whatever it is you are rocking it
Author's Response:
That's all he will ever be! ;)
&& Just say it JJ, the original was a hot ass mess LMFAO!
Reviewer: JJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/11/10 10:36 am
I lied!!! I saw that it posted and i read the next chapter!!! I think I like this title more. But anyhoo...I'm gonna try to stay away for awhile...*crosses fingers*
Author's Response: Lol, glad to have you back so soon! :) Thanks so much! :)
Date: 27/11/10 10:28 am
Still love these characters!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 27/11/10 09:36 am
OOHHHH yeah!!!! I like this revamp already. I am so glad you rewrote the characters personalities and everything else. Soo much better revamp. The first one was good also, but am I liking this one allllottt! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Reviewer: none Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 09:11 am
I like the revamp. Please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 08:05 am
I loved the original version but I am anxiously waiting for this version. Loving Gianni's bad ass attitude.
Mmmmmmm De Luca!!!!!
Ps. Do not have us waiting long for an update. I will be seriosly stalking this damn site for my DOM De Luca!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! You are too much!
Reviewer: Paula Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/11/10 06:11 am
I am glad you kept the scene were Gianni gets caught getting busy!! The new changes are awesome, The title is dead on. Awesome job. I really like the fact that Kambree was raised by Gabs. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 06:03 am
I don't know what to say, I am speechless at the moment. I have to get used to this new version because it was way different then the last coupld of version, Renee is still the same. Gianni is still the same. The brothers relationship is still the same.
The Tyson clan is way different and I like he fact that Kambree has her mother and sister with her and that she is a broadway singer. I am looking forward to how Kambree and Gianni meet.
I feel like the relationships between the two families are going to be very interesting/ Can't wait to read the next chapter.
P.S. I will be patiently waiting for my Pebbles return thank you very much but until then. I am taking this story as it comes and loving it so far.
Author's Response: I hope you like this verison as well! Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 05:36 am
Ok CC it 4am and I sent Big Al to the store for my meds and he hasn’t return (lack of cold meds kicking in) but I like this so far-Beauty and the Beast is my all time favorite movie. I’m eager to see how this story will flow (glad to see Renee had change a bit lol busting in on poor ole G) thanks for work during your holiday ;-)
Author's Response: LOL, DO I NEED TO CALL HIM?! I love Beauty and the Beast also! Renee will never change lol! & you are very welcome!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 05:23 am
Ok that was fresh. Each time you rewrite it gets better and better.Update, Thank You This should be fun!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! I hope you enjoy this!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 05:19 am
You really are going in a new direction with this one and I like it! Glad you haven't messed with the Deluca personalities!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) & I could never mess with that family lol, they are who they are!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 05:07 am
ooh I am intrigued with this new version, I am ready to ride this rollercoster again
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 04:48 am
I must say this was good chapter. I coukd acyually pictures these sceen as I read them. Cant wait for Chapter 2. Gian aint change what a man. Cute caat of men.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Gianni will never change, LOL!
[Report This]Date: 27/11/10 04:43 am