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Title: Happy Endings?

You should be scared, you piece of crap.

Don't forget about Denise, she had a hand in this.

Please don't let Gianni go anywhere near Lamar.

Let his ass go to jail.



Author's Response: Lmao, G ain't with that bull!

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 05:14 am

Title: Happy Endings?

Too late to apologize, too late. Lamar is going to be someone's b***h in prison. I can't wait to read Nick and Renee's story.

Author's Response:

Lmao, God help him up in there!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 05:11 am

Title: Happy Endings?

Can you say rump ranger, Lamar?  Don't start none, won't be none!  Kam, you're pregnant, just go on and tell Gianni!  Sad to hear Renee was a rape victim.  Glad she has Nick!

Author's Response: LMFAOOOOO! You are a mess!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 05:10 am

Title: Happy Endings?

boy i so love how nick handle that little bitch. I hope he goes to jail so the can take turns on him. wow gianni mom and all other women are strong for survied being rape or mostled. It not easy but us women/men can come thu it. I wonder what gianni going to say when he going to be a daddy? thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

You are so right about that!

& We shall see!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 04:43 am

Title: Happy Endings?

Wow! Renee was a rape survivor? That was an unexpected dynamic that I would have associated with her. She seem so strong and invincible.

Kambree needs to accept life. It doesn't matter if your famous or not someone will always have an opinion about how your living life.

Dang Frankie is known like that? Oh oh Lamar I guess you are on the way to being someone bitch! Hahahaha I'm loving it! What does denise have to say for herself?

Great post and background information.

Author's Response:

Sometimes the strongest women have the darkest secrets.

& Kambree, god help her!

We know Frankie ain't with that bullshit, we shall see about Denise!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 03:59 am

Title: Happy Endings?

I am thinking Lamar is getting off easy really...except being scared pissless..he has not felt the pain of Deluca..but he will go to jail that is for sure...and hopefully they will deal with his behind right nice!!

Little Kammie going to finally take the test good...bring on our little Deluca baby..I cannot wait!!

Rene was raped that is horrible...I see why that can make you hard sometimes but she has a good loving man and wonderful family now...so she turned it all around..cannot wait for her story!! 

Great job sweetie..sad to see this end but I know we are not through with the DeLuca yet!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much, Nene! :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 03:57 am

Title: Happy Endings?

Lamar is such a punk, I am glad that he is scared!!  Kambree is so stupid, not taking the pregnancy test is not going to change the fact that Pebbles is on the way!!!  I love this story!!!

Author's Response:

LMAO, YOU ARE TOO MUCH!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 03:52 am

Title: Happy Endings?

ooh i can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 03:52 am

Title: Becoming One

This was great! I'm glad Gianni was able to control his anger to comfort Kambree for the moment. OOoh, I know Lamar is gon get it now!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/12/10 10:54 pm

Title: Becoming One

I wanna go code blue on that dude let me at the muthasucka Let me at me Candie! LOL

 



Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/10 09:19 pm

Title: Becoming One

Awh, I loved it. What a sweet update. This update made me sort of teary. They need to take pictures and let the public know what Lamar did. SHAME HIM!!! Lamar is toast now!!! He better hide for as long as he could, the sick shit. They also need to get Denise as she's involved in this mess.

Author's Response:

He is a jerk!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/12/10 01:17 am

Title: Becoming One

What an awesome update!!!! I agree giving them their moment was beautiful !!!! Now I can't wait for Gianni to get into Lamar's a** haha. I love this couple together and I love how Gabriella came to her senses and called Gianni because Kambree really needed him.

Author's Response: God, help us!

Reviewer: kluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 08:23 pm

Title: Becoming One

I am glad that you chose to go with unpredictable.  Why because sometimes we go off halfcock and the person that really needs us suffer.  IN this case we see Gianni being angry but internalize that anger to handle his business to give Kam the strength, warm, protection that she needed. 

I am really glad that eventhough Gabs didnt want to call Gianni that she finally did.  Being a parent sometimes we want to do for the child all the time and that can handicap them and that why we have to step back and let them make they own mistakes on their own.  I am glad that Gab let up enough to get Kam what she needs. 

Karma always come back and Lamar is in for it big time.  

(Gushing in anticpation:)I am so awaiting Renee and Nick I know that is going to be explosive.  



Author's Response: Love this review! :) As usual!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 05:40 pm

Title: Things Happening

Gianna's Philosophy: Man I totally agree with him cutting negro's off when they don't get right cause they either jealous or bitter and the either been like that or seeding nearly all ya life just pure negitivty and evilness. I had a simlilar situation and they were family too I have to cut fools like that off and it was the best thing I have ever did. It made me extremely successful because I drop that evil hot mess outta my positive loving life.

 

 

 Lamar on some wild mess attacking Kambree, this fool is trying to catch casket messing Gianna Mafia azz LOL

 

 



Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOO, DEAD*********

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 12:13 pm

Title: Becoming One

You are forgiven ;-) (though if I was Kam I sure as hell would call granddaddy Frankie himself) Hope you are enjoying yourself with your "G"

Author's Response:

Lol, violent self!

G and I had a VERY merry Christmas, LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 09:52 am

Title: Becoming One

This chapter was just perfect, I laughed so hard when Chris said Code Blue!! Lamara is going to get it from the sexy hulk.Kassidee broke it down to her mom. Glad she listened. Awesome job.

Author's Response:

Lol, Chris is a G! Gotta love em'! :)

Lamar has mess up now, he messed the wrong one.

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 08:47 am

Title: Becoming One

You rock. I love the direction you went in with Gianni. Thanks for making me fall more in love with him. We all know that Gianni can get in that ass and hurt old boy. Lamar is going to get what is coming to him.

Chris and Renee are to much jumping all up in the truck. That's why I love this family. Look at Kas standing up to her mom. I see the Tyson girls are coming into their own.

After reading this chapter I feel a family reunion is about to come about. (HINT)

P.S. Shit really going to hit the fan when Gaby finds out baby girl is pregnant.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much lol.

God help Gabs!

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 08:10 am

Title: Becoming One

First I would like to let you know you have brought your vision for this story into focus. The revamp is excellent! I absolutely love it!

Jealousy is a very big sin and Derek, Denise, and Lamar are sufferring from it bigtime. What Denise and Lamar did to Kambree is wrong and unforgivable in my book. No deals, no restaining order, just straight up sleeping with the fishes for both of them bitches. If a watery grave is not appropriate then having the tables turn on the would be excellent.

I love the man Gianni has become. He is strength when his woman needs him the most even though it takes Chris to calm his beast. I love how he just comforted her and made her feel love especially when he is fighting back darkness.

Let us give Kassidee a big applause becase she did what most kids won't fue to their parents...tell them the truth.

Girl I am so dang proud of you! This is a number one seller and one I would purchase and have in my book gallery! Great update and excellent read!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

& you crack me up daily lol!

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 07:43 am

Title: Becoming One

Uh, we could still call Code Blue aka Frankie and handle Lamar's ass while K/G  comfort each other.  I'm just sayin'! Hope the theatre has video of the attempted rape so Lamar's ass can go to jail and learn what rape is really about!  Denise could be involved, she could be one of Gianni's past, jealous of Gianni and Kambree's relationship.

Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see lol.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:39 am

Title: Becoming One

Good job sweetie. I'm happy that you went this route, it felt more natural. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:36 am

Title: Becoming One

Okay seriously I am loving this revamp.  This just another piece of brilliance Miss Caine.  Two things though I am sure the De Luca's are going to mess up Lamar and Denise's world real soon.  And what was up with Shane's punk ass trying to come back into the friend zone last chapter?  I cannot wait to meet Pebbles again.  Love your stories girl keeps my fantasies going LOL!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much lol! :)

It's Derek not Shane thought lol.

Let's see what happens. ;)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:22 am

Title: Becoming One

I loved this chapter because Gianni's heart wanted to protect Kambree but his soul wanted to be with her. I am happy that Chris went with them because he had to be the reasonable one. I am glad that Gianni went to be with Kambree because she needed him a lot more then Lamar needed an ass whippin.

My mom said that she would make sure that lamar felt like the bitch that he truly is, but having him gang rapped, up the ass several times. I would have to agree with her because he hurt the girl and the cops are just "La De Da" about it, she has a bruise on her face and her wrist might be fractured, even if you can't prove the rape, assault can be proven. I swear to many times you don't have the crime reported and when you do report it, the cops act like it can't be proven.

I loved Renee and her needed to tell her son that Kambree is pregnant and him looking at her like Webster, "What you talkin about Willis??" kind of ways. If he finds out that Kambree is pregnant and Lamar tried to rape her, pitch black will not be the color Gianni sees when he is beatin Lamars ass.

I hope Chris called a "Code Blue" because Kambree is going to need Gianni and I believe she isn't going to want to leave his side because he is the only one that truly makes her feel safe and right now that is what she needs to feel safe. So I say Chris call Frankie and let him do his buzinezz because Lamar is going to wish his momma never birthed his ass.

 Loved the chapter and looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Chris is like the only one who can ever get through to Gianni.

We still see that Gianni is still battling with his beast and his soft side, he wants to hurt any and everything that hurts Kambree but you are right about his soul.

& your mom is a hoot lol, I already love her!!!!!!!

We shall see how the De Luca's/Patterson's/Tyson's handle this mess! ;)

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:17 am

Title: Becoming One

wow  love how gianni hold her just holding her make her feel better and that what she need the most from him. I like it when gianni shows his sweet side to her and let her know he love her and only here. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: He is just a big teddy bear lol!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:10 am

Title: Becoming One

Thanks for updating on Christmas! I'm so happy Gianni went to comfort Kambree. I love this story so much!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

I am so glad to hear that.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:09 am

Title: Becoming One

*crying* Nice Candy nice!!! Whew!!! Good job, girl!!!

Author's Response:

Lol, I didn't mean to make you cry!

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/12/10 06:05 am

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